~~~Phir haath nahi aata...~~~

by vitasta on May 19, 2009, 11:08:47 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 20, 2009, 04:13:34 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on May 19, 2009, 07:21:37 PM



ah ha, bahut hi khoob


RAH GUJAR YU MAJBOOR HO CHUKA HU
CHOT KHA KEY BHI ROH NAHI PATA
NA POOCH LEY KOI ISS DARD KI WAJAH
HASTEY HUYE SAB KOH MAIN NAZAR AATA HU



JASBIR SINGH
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kya baat hai...

ro lete par tera dupatta na tha ashq ponch jaane ko
hans lete par tera 'Noor' na tha andhera mitaane ko
tamanna-e-anjuman basa rakhi hai ab 'Viti' ne dekh
jal jaate par teri nazar ka sharaara na tha jalaane ko...
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«Reply #16 on: May 20, 2009, 04:14:49 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 19, 2009, 07:23:48 PM

Viti Ji....... Kamaal ki Shayara hain aap.. Pahali baar hi aaj aapko padhne ka Mauka Mila.. aur Yakin maaniye padh kar bahut accha laga.. ab to aapki aane wali sabhi Post ka besabri se Intzaar rahega.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Lafzon ko Behad Khubsoorati se Piroya hai aapne Is Poem me. yehi iski sabse badi Khasiyat hai.. jo is poem ko khubsoorat bana rahi Hai.. Great work.. Bahut Khooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

bahut bahut shukriya mann Usual Smile ummeed hai aage bhi aapko mera kaam yunhi pasand aayega Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: May 20, 2009, 04:15:52 AM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on May 19, 2009, 07:33:29 PM
Vitasta and Jasbir

Nice going Applause Applause

Keep going Thumbs UP

Vicky bro...aap ki kalam mein ink khatam ho gayi kya? tongue3

thanks rajbir ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: May 20, 2009, 04:27:12 AM »
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very very nice vitasta ji, beautiful lines by jasbir ji and mann ji.
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«Reply #19 on: May 20, 2009, 04:29:51 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 20, 2009, 04:27:12 AM
very very nice vitasta ji, beautiful lines by jasbir ji and mann ji.
thanks madhuwesh ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: May 20, 2009, 04:32:29 AM »
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Quote from: vitasta on May 19, 2009, 11:08:47 AM
kho jo jaata hai ik lamha, phir haath nahi aata
raat saath guzaar sapna, phir haath nahi aata

aati hai yaad uski subah bhi, shaam bhi yaar
sochun chookar dekhun, phir haath nahi aata

ek nazm, do nazm, hazaaron hi nazm qurban
dhundha har lafz 'Noor' jo phir haath nahi aata

na jaam, na aaraam, chain kahan paye 'Viti' ab
ulfat ka ek katra bhi kabhi phir haath nahi aata...

Wah bahut khoob Vitasta
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«Reply #21 on: May 20, 2009, 04:35:10 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 20, 2009, 04:32:29 AM

Wah bahut khoob Vitasta
shukriya roja ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: May 20, 2009, 04:39:18 AM »
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Quote from: vitasta on May 20, 2009, 04:35:10 AM
shukriya roja ji Usual Smile

Welcome vitasta ji
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«Reply #23 on: May 20, 2009, 07:23:37 PM »
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Quote from: vitasta on May 20, 2009, 04:13:34 AM
kya baat hai...

ro lete par tera dupatta na tha ashq ponch jaane ko
hans lete par tera 'Noor' na tha andhera mitaane ko
tamanna-e-anjuman basa rakhi hai ab 'Viti' ne dekh
jal jaate par teri nazar ka sharaara na tha jalaane ko...



WAH WAH WAH, bahut hi khoob VITASTA JI, wah wah, bahut
hi kamaal ka likha hai aap ney, dil khush ho gaya ...


SAMANDAR KEY KINAREY BHI HUM BHAVAR MEH NAZAR AAYE
PAA KAR TUMHEY BHI HUM BHEED MEH TANHA NAZAR AAYE
MAJBOOR TOH ITNI NAHI THI HAMARI WOH RAAH-GUJAR
AKELEY HI KHADEY THEY HUM, TUM NA NAZAR AAYE



JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com
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«Reply #24 on: May 20, 2009, 07:24:20 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 20, 2009, 04:27:12 AM
very very nice vitasta ji, beautiful lines by jasbir ji and mann ji.

Thanks Madhu Ji

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #25 on: May 21, 2009, 02:23:36 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on May 20, 2009, 07:23:37 PM


WAH WAH WAH, bahut hi khoob VITASTA JI, wah wah, bahut
hi kamaal ka likha hai aap ney, dil khush ho gaya ...


SAMANDAR KEY KINAREY BHI HUM BHAVAR MEH NAZAR AAYE
PAA KAR TUMHEY BHI HUM BHEED MEH TANHA NAZAR AAYE
MAJBOOR TOH ITNI NAHI THI HAMARI WOH RAAH-GUJAR
AKELEY HI KHADEY THEY HUM, TUM NA NAZAR AAYE



JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com




shukriya jasbir ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha...

kabhi aahat teri sunai de kabhi aawaz
kabhi likhne ko kam pad jaayen alfaaz
teri ibaadat hi kaafi hai jeene ke liye ab
kabhi saamne aa 'Noor,' sun le niyaaz
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«Reply #26 on: May 21, 2009, 02:25:23 PM »
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Good going Vita dear and Jas ji
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«Reply #27 on: May 21, 2009, 02:27:18 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 21, 2009, 02:25:23 PM
Good going Vita dear and Jas ji

thanks roja Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: May 22, 2009, 08:33:30 PM »
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Quote from: vitasta on May 21, 2009, 02:23:36 PM
shukriya jasbir ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha...

kabhi aahat teri sunai de kabhi aawaz
kabhi likhne ko kam pad jaayen alfaaz
teri ibaadat hi kaafi hai jeene ke liye ab
kabhi saamne aa 'Noor,' sun le niyaaz



Thanks Vita Ji and bahut hi khoob kaha aap ney

JHALAK PANEY KOH HUM BHI BEKARAAR REHTEY HAI
AAKHOH SEY AASOOO BEHIMTEEHA BEHTEY HAI
HAR RAAH PEH MUDD MUDD KAR DEKHTEY HAI
AAJAO TUM, ISS AAS MEH REHTEY HAI


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #29 on: May 22, 2009, 08:34:48 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 21, 2009, 02:25:23 PM
Good going Vita dear and Jas ji

Thanks ROJA JI

aap ki aas meh hum yaha aaye
par aap ho ki hamey nazar na aaye
nazar aaye bhi toh kya dekha humney
aap ki kalam sey kuch alfaaz na aaye
aap ki aas meh hum yaha aaye


Jasbir Singh
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