phir yaad aaye...

by mixie on March 08, 2014, 12:52:23 AM
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वो ग़ज़ल का रूप लिये हुए मुझे हर मुक़ाम पर याद आये
एहसास के साये में डूबे हुए वो ही नगमे अक्सर याद आये...

फिर शाम की पलकें झुकने लगीं कुछ रंग थे हलके गहरे से
इक अजब सी ख़ामोशी थी; भूले हुए गम फिर याद आये …

परछाइयाँ थीं या पड़े थे क़दमों के निशां यहाँ वहाँ
वह लोग न जाने अब हैं कहाँ जो तेरी ख़ातिर याद आये ...

याद आये तुम और हम खुद अपना ठिकाना भूल गए

अब पूछते हैं लोग  मुझसे, तुम क्यूँ आखिर याद आये ...

अब जो आये हो तो आओ बैठो पास, ज़रा रुको, यहीं ठहरो
के कोई रंग, कोई रुत, कोई शय तो 'मीना' फिर याद आये...

wo ghazal ka roop liye hue mujhe har muqaam par yaad aaye
ehsaas ke saaye mein doobe hue wo hi nagme aksar yaad aaye...

phir shaam kii palkein jhukne lagiin kuchh rang the halke gehre se
ik ajab si khamoshi thi; bhule hue gam phir yaad aaye...

parchhaiyaan thiin ya pade the kadmon ke nishaan yahan wahan
woh log na jaane ab hain kahan jo teri khatir yaad aaye...

yaad aaye tum aur hum apna thikana bhool gaye
ab poochhte hain log mujhse, tum kyun aakhir yaad aaye...

ab jo aaye ho to aao baitho paas, zara ruko, yahin thehro
ke koi rang, koi rut, koi shay to 'meena' phir yaad aaye...
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«Reply #1 on: March 08, 2014, 02:33:17 AM »
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वो ग़ज़ल का रूप लिये हुए मुझे हर मुक़ाम पर याद आये
एहसास के साये में डूबे हुए वो ही नगमे अक्सर याद आये...

फिर शाम की पलकें झुकने लगीं कुछ रंग थे हलके गहरे से
इक अजब सी ख़ामोशी थी; भूले हुए गम फिर याद आये …

परछाइयाँ थीं या पड़े थे क़दमों के निशां यहाँ वहाँ
वह लोग न जाने अब हैं कहाँ जो तेरी ख़ातिर याद आये ...

याद आये तुम और हम खुद अपना ठिकाना भूल गए

अब पूछते हैं लोग  मुझसे, तुम क्यूँ आखिर याद आये ...

अब जो आये हो तो आओ बैठो पास, ज़रा रुको, यहीं ठहरो
के कोई रंग, कोई रुत, कोई शय तो 'मीना' फिर याद आये...

wo ghazal ka roop liye hue mujhe har muqaam par yaad aaye
ehsaas ke saaye mein doobe hue wo hi nagme aksar yaad aaye...

phir shaam kii palkein jhukne lagiin kuchh rang the halke gehre se
ik ajab si khamoshi thi; bhule hue gam phir yaad aaye...

parchhaiyaan thiin ya pade the kadmon ke nishaan yahan wahan
woh log na jaane ab hain kahan jo teri khatir yaad aaye...

yaad aaye tum aur hum apna thikana bhool gaye
ab poochhte hain log mujhse, tum kyun aakhir yaad aaye...

ab jo aaye ho to aao baitho paas, zara ruko, yahin thehro
ke koi rang, koi rut, koi shay to 'meena' phir yaad aaye...
बेहतरीन,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,बेमिसाल.!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 08, 2014, 03:22:11 AM »
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Mixie Jee Aadaab...!

WaaH jee waH bahut khoob badi hi khoob peshkash ki hai aapne...

Sabhi ashaaroN ke khayaal behad khoob rahe...
Aur aapka andaaz e bayaaN bhi bahut khoob raha...
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rhaiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #5 on: March 08, 2014, 12:43:35 PM »
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Waah Mixie ji adhbhut rachna hai aapki ..hats off
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Bahut khooooooooooooob...
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Khoob kahi !!
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«Reply #8 on: March 08, 2014, 04:59:00 PM »
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behad khub behad lajawab qalaam ..dheron daad..

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