Purana Intezaar (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on March 04, 2006, 06:32:39 AM
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mohsin akhter
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«Reply #15 on: June 07, 2006, 12:57:17 PM »
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«Reply #16 on: June 07, 2006, 01:51:14 PM »
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Thanks a lot Gumnam Ji...
SHIKHA JI MAZA TAB AATA JAB AAP BHI KUCHH LIKHATI.

AFSOS TERE DEEDAAR KI HASRAT YE WAFA,
EK DOSTI KI RAAH MEIN BADNAAM HO GAYEE.
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«Reply #17 on: June 07, 2006, 06:29:22 PM »
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Thanks a lot Gumnam Ji...
SHIKHA JI MAZA TAB AATA JAB AAP BHI KUCHH LIKHATI.

AFSOS TERE DEEDAAR KI HASRAT YE WAFA,
EK DOSTI KI RAAH MEIN BADNAAM HO GAYEE.
Arey Gumnam ji....mainey likha hai naa.... thodi der ho gayi bus

Yun unkii yaadon main hum gum ho jaatey hai,
Kabhie rotey hai, to kabhi hum muskatey hai...

Unkey cherey ki ek jhalak paaney kay wastey,
duniya sey hum to apni nazarein bachatey hai...

kab hoga yeh intezaar khatam ab sabr nahin hota,
Har ek sanns apni hum dekho gintey jaatey hai..

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«Reply #18 on: June 07, 2006, 09:43:52 PM »
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nice one shikha... and shayarB...

dil thodne wale kya jane judai ki dard ko,
yeh zamana kya jane pyar ke riwaaj ko,
kitni takleef hoti hain kabar mein,
yeh kaise maloom upar se phool chadane wale ko.
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«Reply #19 on: June 09, 2006, 04:16:07 AM »
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SHIKHA JI AAPKA KAATILANA ANDAJ TO MERI JAAN LE LEGA.....BAHUT HI ACHHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE....

MUJHKO JUNOON NAHI THA KI JAAGU TAMAM RAAT,
LEKIN TERA KHAYAL JAGAYE TO KYA KARU?
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«Reply #20 on: June 10, 2006, 08:29:01 AM »
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SHIKHA JI AAPKA KAATILANA ANDAJ TO MERI JAAN LE LEGA.....BAHUT HI ACHHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE....

MUJHKO JUNOON NAHI THA KI JAAGU TAMAM RAAT,
LEKIN TERA KHAYAL JAGAYE TO KYA KARU?


Gumnam ji kyon sharminda kar rahey hai aap....
Phir bhi dil sey Shukriya....
Aapney bhi bahut achha likha hai...


Terey khayal key aagey kuch soojhta nahin hai...
Aainey mey bhi aks nazar aata hai tera...
Din raat sajda kartey hai hum teri yaad ka...
Ab to aa jaiye dum nikalta jaata hai mera....
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«Reply #21 on: June 11, 2006, 02:08:49 PM »
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bahut khub......aap to meri jaan le ke hi maanegi......

Mar kar tere khayal ko taale hue to hai,
Hum Jaan de ke DIL ko sambhaale hue to hai....
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«Reply #22 on: June 12, 2006, 09:51:12 AM »
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bahut khub......aap to meri jaan le ke hi maanegi......

Mar kar tere khayal ko taale hue to hai,
Hum Jaan de ke DIL ko sambhaale hue to hai....


Khuda khe'r karey....Gumnaam ji..bahut khoob likha hai...

 
Jis sey milti hai humko har waqt ek nayi aas jeeney ki,
Woh shaksh hi niklta hai kabhi kabhi katil apna....
Dekho jaan ley li humney teri apni baaton sey hi...
Ab bacha sako to bacha lo tum humsey yeh dil apna....
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«Reply #23 on: June 12, 2006, 10:38:16 AM »
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Gud Job Shikha and Gumnam

Jo ho Jism juda toh noor barsaya nahi jata......
Jab Dil ho Tanha toh use or tadpaya nahi jata.....

Na khabar tumhari na hee koi khat aya hai.....
Kaha Dil ko dhoond la sanam ko meri.....
Wapas najaane kyu Dard hee laya hai......!!!!!!!
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«Reply #24 on: June 14, 2006, 12:59:53 PM »
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Gud Job Shikha and Gumnam

Jo ho Jism juda toh noor barsaya nahi jata......
Jab Dil ho Tanha toh use or tadpaya nahi jata.....

Na khabar tumhari na hee koi khat aya hai.....
Kaha Dil ko dhoond la sanam ko meri.....
Wapas najaane kyu Dard hee laya hai......!!!!!!!


Bahut khoob Gaurav...
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«Reply #25 on: June 14, 2006, 02:33:29 PM »
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bahut khub......aap to meri jaan le ke hi maanegi......

Mar kar tere khayal ko taale hue to hai,
Hum Jaan de ke DIL ko sambhaale hue to hai....


Khuda khe'r karey....Gumnaam ji..bahut khoob likha hai...

 
Jis sey milti hai humko har waqt ek nayi aas jeeney ki,
Woh shaksh hi niklta hai kabhi kabhi katil apna....
Dekho jaan ley li humney teri apni baaton sey hi...
Ab bacha sako to bacha lo tum humsey yeh dil apna....
WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH........

Lagta hai julm mujh par jaari rahege yu hi,
Kaatil badal gaye,par khanjar wahi raha......
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«Reply #26 on: June 18, 2006, 07:23:31 AM »
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bahut khub......aap to meri jaan le ke hi maanegi......

Mar kar tere khayal ko taale hue to hai,
Hum Jaan de ke DIL ko sambhaale hue to hai....


Khuda khe'r karey....Gumnaam ji..bahut khoob likha hai...

 
Jis sey milti hai humko har waqt ek nayi aas jeeney ki,
Woh shaksh hi niklta hai kabhi kabhi katil apna....
Dekho jaan ley li humney teri apni baaton sey hi...
Ab bacha sako to bacha lo tum humsey yeh dil apna....
WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH........

Lagta hai julm mujh par jaari rahege yu hi,
Kaatil badal gaye,par khanjar wahi raha......


Kya baat hai Gumnaam ji........


Julm tujhpar nahin humney khud par kiya hai.....
Ek dil tha paas humarey, woh bhi tujhko diya hai....
Ab tak baaki hai dil mey nishaan-e-khajar humarey,
Dard bhi hai phir bhi humney lab ko siya hai....

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«Reply #27 on: June 18, 2006, 09:04:12 AM »
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wah kaya mehfil saji hui hai.... bahoot khoob.. her ek ne hi bahoot acha likha hai
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Shikha12
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«Reply #28 on: June 19, 2006, 09:51:17 AM »
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Shukriya Pankhuri Ji....[/b]
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gumnam
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«Reply #29 on: June 23, 2006, 02:30:46 PM »
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bahut khub......aap to meri jaan le ke hi maanegi......

Mar kar tere khayal ko taale hue to hai,
Hum Jaan de ke DIL ko sambhaale hue to hai....


Khuda khe'r karey....Gumnaam ji..bahut khoob likha hai...

 
Jis sey milti hai humko har waqt ek nayi aas jeeney ki,
Woh shaksh hi niklta hai kabhi kabhi katil apna....
Dekho jaan ley li humney teri apni baaton sey hi...
Ab bacha sako to bacha lo tum humsey yeh dil apna....
WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH........

Lagta hai julm mujh par jaari rahege yu hi,
Kaatil badal gaye,par khanjar wahi raha......


Kya baat hai Gumnaam ji........


Julm tujhpar nahin humney khud par kiya hai.....
Ek dil tha paas humarey, woh bhi tujhko diya hai....
Ab tak baaki hai dil mey nishaan-e-khajar humarey,
Dard bhi hai phir bhi humney lab ko siya hai....

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BAHUT KHUB SHIKHA......REPLY MEIN DERI KE LIYE MAAFI CHAHTA HU........

AYE SITAMGAR!TUNE DIL KO THOKAR MAARA,
YE ALAG BAAT HAI KI HUMNE DARD KO DIL MEIN UTARA.
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