pyaar ka dard

by Sonu on April 08, 2005, 06:24:36 PM
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may no one ever come into mylife, Lord.
if someone does come, may he never leave, Lord.
if tears arae what's in store for me.
may not someone make me laught now
let no one make me laugh, oh God!
away he went, and before he legt..
..he snatched my happines away
in my eyes, so longing, he left nothing but grief
still i wait, thoug hope runs down my eyes-2
may no one torment like this
may no one ever come into mylife,Lord
one can't be forced to fail in love
love can never be traded
i miss you, o cruel one-2
may no one torment like this
may no one ever come into mylife,Lord.
if someone does come, may he never leave, Lord.
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2005, 07:11:07 PM »
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nice one Sonu..................................
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2005, 04:34:40 AM »
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aryaan ji

shukriyaa ....

thanks for read my poem...........................
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2005, 01:25:23 PM »
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nice work all

Hum ne to aitbaar kiya,kya gunaah kiya
Tum se hum ne pyar kiya,kya gunaah kiya

not mine
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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2005, 08:37:18 PM »
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may no one ever come into mylife, Lord.
if someone does come, may he never leave, Lord.
if tears arae what's in store for me.
may not someone make me laught now
let no one make me laugh, oh God!
away he went, and before he legt..
..he snatched my happines away
in my eyes, so longing, he left nothing but grief
still i wait, thoug hope runs down my eyes-2
may no one torment like this
may no one ever come into mylife,Lord
one can't be forced to fail in love
love can never be traded
i miss you, o cruel one-2
may no one torment like this
may no one ever come into mylife,Lord.
if someone does come, may he never leave, Lord.


excellent  sonu............bahot  khoob.......too good  ...suave
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2005, 09:42:53 PM »
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shukjirya suave ji.. bahoot acha likhtey hai app keep it up....

humney to etbar keya tha dilo jaan unper nesar keya tha,
tumsey pyar kerney ka ek gunha humney keya tha,
teyri yaado ko sapno key moteow mey peroya tha,
khushiya mangi thi tumnsey mager gumo ki chadro mey suya tha
meyri ek bhoo l key karan sara jug meyra beyri hoo gaya tha,
tum chaley gaye to humney jeney ka sahra he khoo deya tha.

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waheed shukriya( ur welcome) Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2005, 12:29:28 PM »
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shukjirya suave ji.. bahoot acha likhtey hai app keep it up....

humney to etbar keya tha dilo jaan unper nesar keya tha,
tumsey pyar kerney ka ek gunha humney keya tha,
teyri yaado ko sapno key moteow mey peroya tha,
khushiya mangi thi tumnsey mager gumo ki chadro mey suya tha
meyri ek bhoo l key karan sara jug meyra beyri hoo gaya tha,
tum chaley gaye to humney jeney ka sahra he khoo deya tha.

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waheed shukriya( ur welcome) Usual Smile


wow sonu..............very  touching  words.............bahot  khoob......

yeh jaroori nahi ki tumhein  chod  kar woh  khush  hoga
woh  bhi tadpega  tumhari  liye saari  saari  raat....................
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«Reply #7 on: April 16, 2005, 06:09:44 AM »
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shukriya waheed( ur welcome)

jub jindgi gum etney dey jati hia to kab kah kesi ko kesi ki yaad ati hai,
shyed vo khush huga mujhey sey door janey per,
shyed kesi koney mey chupa deykh rha huga mujhey,
shyed tadap bhi rha huga meyrey leya mager jub jindgi key gamu ney usko gheyra huga tub usko mey kha yaad ahyee hungi,
kesi shrab key adey mey vo apna gum bhula rha huga,
yea jroori nahi key vo meyrey sath chut janey key gum pee rha huga.
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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2005, 07:30:45 AM »
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wow sonu,bohat hi touching words likhein hain aapne.excellent.
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«Reply #9 on: April 16, 2005, 08:08:35 AM »
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wow sonu,bohat hi touching words likhein hain aapne.excellent.
::::::::::::::shukriya nidhi ji Usual Smile::::::::::::
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«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2005, 08:48:13 AM »
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hmmmmmmmmm......ur  welcome  nidhi....very  nice  sonu................:lol:
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«Reply #11 on: April 17, 2005, 02:30:15 AM »
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:::::::::::::::::::: shukriya waheed:::::::::::::::::::
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«Reply #12 on: April 18, 2005, 01:53:03 PM »
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hmmmmmmmm  ur  welcome  sonu....:lol:

jindagi  mein  aise  bahot  mod  aate  rahenge
ai dost tum kahin thak kar mujhse juda na ho jaana ...........
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«Reply #13 on: April 29, 2005, 07:11:12 AM »
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"tere dar se jao.n ye mumkin nahi hai
sitam qhud pe dhao.n ye mumkin nahi hai
zamane me sab kuch hai mumkin magar
tujhe bhool jao.n ye mumkin nahi hai
hai ankho.n se dil tak tera raaj kyun
tujhi ko batao.n ye mumkin nahi hai....... :!: "
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«Reply #14 on: April 29, 2005, 07:16:36 AM »
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VERY NICE LINE SONU


tere payar se dard accha
payar tu vapis le sakti hai
dard pe to me akhtiyar hai.
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