PYAR KIYA THA KOI GUNAH NAHI

by poem143s on July 30, 2007, 01:56:14 PM
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Kahte the wo ki judai main dil na jalana
Jab bhi yaad aaye hamari paas chale aana
Aaj gaye hum unke paas lekar dare-e-dil apana
To wo kahte hai jara apana parichay to karana
Unko to mil gayi khushiyan jamane ki doshto
Apana to ab na ghar hai na koi thikana
Humne pyar kiya tha unse koi gunah nahi
Tumhari nazar main agar pyar gunah hai to humen bhi batana
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2007, 04:25:56 PM »
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Very nice Sameer..
I like your Short poems .. always beautiful.

Kehdijiye hum naa yun dil todenge,
Tumne jo kiya, aise na hum muh modenge,
Pyaar karna gar tujhe naa aaya ae zalim..
Aake dekh,hum bewafa se bhi dil jodenge !
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2007, 05:19:45 PM »
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poem ji apne bohot acha likha hai
Ricky ji apne bhi khoob jawad likha hai

Yuhi Likhte rahiye
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«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2007, 03:25:38 AM »
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Thankyou so much ricky ji aur sahiba ji aapko achchi lagi
lakin ricky ji humse achcha to aapne likha, jo do hi lines main sab kuch kah dala

Shabia ji do lines aap bhi likha karo taaki humen bhi aapki poem read karne ko mile''

take care
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«Reply #4 on: August 02, 2007, 06:44:55 AM »
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Sameer
You wrote nice, what I wrote was just a little try and I don't think it was real good but only a small try.
I am glad you liked my words.
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2012, 04:28:53 AM »
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ab ''Dhadkano ko Tham Leta h koi

Jab
Khyalo Me Naam Leta Hai Koi,

Yaade ''Tab Or Yadgaar Ban Jati Hai,

Jab Hume Humse Behtar Jaan Leta Hai Koi....................
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«Reply #6 on: July 24, 2013, 09:33:23 PM »
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VERY NICE.....
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