QASAM KHAATAA HOON.................................SAINI

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Tere khaaboN meN n aane kee qasam khaataa hooN.
Teree neendeN n churaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Mujhe manzoor hai dil meraa agar toote bhee.
MaiN ise aaj manaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Jo kabhee kee thee shuru tumne kahaanee meree.
Usko kirdaar meN lane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

MaiN naheeN dakhl teree bandagee meN ab doongaa.
MaiN tere paas n aane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

De chukee zakhm bahut teree jafaayeN mujhko.
Le unhe dil se bhulaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Tere khat yaad mujhe teree dilaate rahte.
Aaj un sabko jalaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Are ‘saini ‘ to hai dil kaa badaa hee bechaaraa.
Usko logoN se bachaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Dr.Surendra Saini

तेरे ख़ाबों में न आने की क़सम खाता हूँ ।
तेरी नींदें न चुराने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

मुझे मंजूर है दिल मेरा अगर टूटे भी ।
मैं इसे आज मनाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

जो कभी की थी शुरू तुमने कहानी मेरी ।
उसको किरदार में लाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

मैं नहीं दख़्ल तेरी बंदगी में अब दूंगा ।
मैं तेरे पास न आने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

दे चुकी ज़ख़्म बहुत तेरी जफ़ाएं मुझको ।
ले उन्हें दिल से भुलाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

तेरे ख़त याद मुझे तेरी दिलाते रहते ।
आज उन सबको जलाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

अरे 'सैनी' तो है दिल का बड़ा ही बेचारा ।
उसको लोगों से बचाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2013, 04:25:23 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Saini Sir,Bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai. Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2013, 04:27:48 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 04, 2013, 04:11:47 PM
Tere khaaboN meN n aane kee qasam khaataa hooN.
Teree neendeN n churaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Mujhe manjoor hai dil meraa agar toote bhee.
MaiN ise aaj manaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Jo kabhee kee thee shuru tumne kahaanee meree.
Usko kirdaar meN lane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

MaiN naheeN dakhl teree bandagee meN ab doongaa.
MaiN tere paas n aane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

De chukee zakhm bahut teree jafaayeN mujhko.
Le unhe dil se bhulaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Tere khat yaad mujhe teree dilaate rahte.
Aaj un sabko jalaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Are ‘saini ‘ to hai dil kaa badaa hee bechaaraa.
Usko logoN se bachaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Dr.Surendra Saini

तेरे ख़ाबों में न आने की क़सम खाता हूँ ।
तेरी नींदें न चुराने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

मुझे मंजूर है दिल मेरा अगर टूटे भी ।
मैं इसे आज मनाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

जो कभी की थी शुरू तुमने कहानी मेरी ।
उसको किरदार में लाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

मैं नहीं दख़्ल तेरी बंदगी में अब दूंगा ।
मैं तेरे पास न आने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

दे चुकी ज़ख़्म बहुत तेरी जफ़ाएं मुझको ।
ले उन्हें दिल से भुलाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

तेरे ख़त याद मुझे तेरी दिलाते रहते ।
आज उन सबको जलाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

अरे 'सैनी' तो है दिल का बड़ा ही बेचारा ।
उसको लोगों से बचाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

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bahut hi badhya likha hai saini sir...
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Tere khat yaad mujhe teree dilaate rahte.
Aaj un sabko jalaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 04, 2013, 04:11:47 PM
Tere khaaboN meN n aane kee qasam khaataa hooN.
Teree neendeN n churaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Mujhe manjoor hai dil meraa agar toote bhee.
MaiN ise aaj manaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Jo kabhee kee thee shuru tumne kahaanee meree.
Usko kirdaar meN lane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

MaiN naheeN dakhl teree bandagee meN ab doongaa.
MaiN tere paas n aane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

De chukee zakhm bahut teree jafaayeN mujhko.
Le unhe dil se bhulaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Tere khat yaad mujhe teree dilaate rahte.
Aaj un sabko jalaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Are ‘saini ‘ to hai dil kaa badaa hee bechaaraa.
Usko logoN se bachaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Dr.Surendra Saini

तेरे ख़ाबों में न आने की क़सम खाता हूँ ।
तेरी नींदें न चुराने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

मुझे मंजूर है दिल मेरा अगर टूटे भी ।
मैं इसे आज मनाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

जो कभी की थी शुरू तुमने कहानी मेरी ।
उसको किरदार में लाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

मैं नहीं दख़्ल तेरी बंदगी में अब दूंगा ।
मैं तेरे पास न आने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

दे चुकी ज़ख़्म बहुत तेरी जफ़ाएं मुझको ।
ले उन्हें दिल से भुलाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

तेरे ख़त याद मुझे तेरी दिलाते रहते ।
आज उन सबको जलाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

अरे 'सैनी' तो है दिल का बड़ा ही बेचारा ।
उसको लोगों से बचाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

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waah sir itni badee badee qasmen kha rahe hain aap aa.j ,kheriyat toh hai naa Usual Smile
bohat bohat khoob surat andaz, bohat boht c daad,....
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«Reply #8 on: September 04, 2013, 05:07:54 PM »
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waaah sir itni kasmein khayange to khaana kaise khaaoge sir ji
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2013, 05:14:25 PM »
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Saini Sahaab Aadaab...!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne janab waaH dil jeet liya aapki is kalaam ne... gazab ke khayaalaat aur dilfareb ahsaas ko umdaa lafz diye haiN janab...

Har ashaar qabil e daad hai...
Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye..
Shaad O Aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Quote from: sksaini4 on September 04, 2013, 04:11:47 PM
Tere khaaboN meN n aane kee qasam khaataa hooN.
Teree neendeN n churaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

WaaH jee waaH kia matla kaha hai aikdum dil ki baat kah dii janab... behad khoob hazaaroN daad is umdaa matle par...

Mujhe manjoor hai dil meraa agar toote bhee.
MaiN ise aaj manaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Bahut khoob janab daad...

Jo kabhee kee thee shuru tumne kahaanee meree.
Usko kirdaar meN lane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

WaaH jee waaH kia kahne bahut umdaa...

MaiN naheeN dakhl teree bandagee meN ab doongaa.
MaiN tere paas n aane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Wallaah janab aik aik ashaar dil ki gehraai se nikla hua lagta hai daad daad daad...

De chukee zakhm bahut teree jafaayeN mujhko.
Le unhe dil se bhulaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Bahut khoob janab daad...

Tere khat yaad mujhe teree dilaate rahte.
Aaj un sabko jalaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Kia kahne Saini Sahaab bus waaH janab waaH bahut umdaa..

Are ‘saini ‘ to hai dil kaa badaa hee bechaaraa.
Usko logoN se bachaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Bahut umdaa janab bahut khoob daad... Usual Smile

Dr.Surendra Saini


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Waaaaaaaaaah poori kalaam hi ghazab ki hai.. in do ashaar ne dil jeet liya... sach tareef ke liye alfaaz nahin. aapko hazaron hazaron daad is khoob kalaam par...

De chukee zakhm bahut teree jafaayeN mujhko.
Le unhe dil se bhulaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Tere khat yaad mujhe teree dilaate rahte.
Aaj un sabko jalaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.
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«Reply #11 on: September 04, 2013, 06:00:01 PM »
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Bahut badhiya Sir
aap aur is naye andaaz men
bataur kalaam..to sabne inta kah diya ki kuch baaki n raha.
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«Reply #12 on: September 04, 2013, 06:19:44 PM »
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Waah waah waah waah bahut khob Saini Sir.
Quote from: sksaini4 on September 04, 2013, 04:11:47 PM
Tere khaaboN meN n aane kee qasam khaataa hooN.
Teree neendeN n churaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Mujhe manjoor hai dil meraa agar toote bhee.
MaiN ise aaj manaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Jo kabhee kee thee shuru tumne kahaanee meree.
Usko kirdaar meN lane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

MaiN naheeN dakhl teree bandagee meN ab doongaa.
MaiN tere paas n aane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

De chukee zakhm bahut teree jafaayeN mujhko.
Le unhe dil se bhulaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Tere khat yaad mujhe teree dilaate rahte.
Aaj un sabko jalaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Are ‘saini ‘ to hai dil kaa badaa hee bechaaraa.
Usko logoN se bachaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.

Dr.Surendra Saini

तेरे ख़ाबों में न आने की क़सम खाता हूँ ।
तेरी नींदें न चुराने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

मुझे मंजूर है दिल मेरा अगर टूटे भी ।
मैं इसे आज मनाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

जो कभी की थी शुरू तुमने कहानी मेरी ।
उसको किरदार में लाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

मैं नहीं दख़्ल तेरी बंदगी में अब दूंगा ।
मैं तेरे पास न आने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

दे चुकी ज़ख़्म बहुत तेरी जफ़ाएं मुझको ।
ले उन्हें दिल से भुलाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

तेरे ख़त याद मुझे तेरी दिलाते रहते ।
आज उन सबको जलाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

अरे 'सैनी' तो है दिल का बड़ा ही बेचारा ।
उसको लोगों से बचाने की क़सम खाता हूँ ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी

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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2013, 06:33:26 PM »
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De chukee zakhm bahut teree jafaayeN mujhko.
Le unhe dil se bhulaane kee qasam khaataa hooN.


WAAH WAAH dR SAHAB ,,,BOHUT DARD LEKER AYE HAIN.
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