Qatl:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

Nadeem Ahmed Kavish

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Yu.n aaj qatl karke sitamgar udas hai,
Duba hua lahu me jo khanjar udas hai

Kya maajra hai rind jo paiqar udas hai,
Mahfil me.n saqiya teri sagar udas hai.

Rukhsat hue ho tum jo mera ghar udas hai,
Aankhei.n udas hain dil e muztar udas hai.

Duba hai kaun mauj e talatun ki bheed mei.n,
Ranjur hain kanare, samandar udas hai.

Kuch aise bhi aaine the jinki shikast par,
Sheeshe ki kya bisaat hai pathar udaas hai.

Hatho.n mei.n patharo.n ko uthaye hue hain log,
Yu.n aaino ke shahar ka manzar udas hai.

’Kavish’ meri wafao.n ka faizaan dekhiye,
Mujhko udas dekhke dilbar udas hai


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madhuwesh

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Re: Qatl

«Reply #1 on: June 26, 2009, 09:56:52 AM »

Wah wah Nadeem ji,bahut khoob,kamaal ka likha hai aapne. Clapping Smiley


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Nadeem Ahmed Kavish

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Re: Qatl

«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2009, 05:06:29 PM »

Shukriya dost


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madhuwesh

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Re: Qatl

«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2009, 06:48:41 PM »

You r welcome Nadeem ji,aise hi likhte rahe, hello


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: Qatl

«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2009, 05:42:01 AM »

Quote from: Nadeem Ahmed Kavish on June 26, 2009, 09:53:53 AM

kuch aise bhi aaine they jinki.....pather bhi udas hai...kyaa khoob kaha NADEEM SB


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_Vicky_

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Re: Qatl

«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2009, 09:23:26 AM »

Wah wah Nadeem Saheb.. Bahut Hi Umda Alfaaz Likhe Hain dost.. jawab nahi aapki Qalam Ka.. Waqai Yeh rachna dil ko chhoo gai.. Bahut bahut Khoooooob... Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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lovestone

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Re: Qatl

«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2009, 12:44:33 PM »

Waah !! very nicely written!!


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