raaste hogaye udaas...ritesh modi

by Ritesh Modi on January 11, 2013, 06:40:03 PM
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Wo kya gaye, hogaye hain raaste udaas,
jiine ke liye na raha kuch zindagi ke paas,

zamaana beet gaya, na rahi uske aane ki aas,
do boond paa ker mitt ti nahi hai aankhon ki pyaas,

armaan yu toote ke na raha mohabbat pe vishwaas,
ye dil wo badnaseeb jisko aayi na koi khushi raas.....
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2013, 07:20:39 PM »
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Ritesh ji,

bahut khoob likha hai aapne
aapke khayal men kaafi gehrai hai.
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2013, 01:46:40 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2013, 02:23:37 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2013, 04:13:40 AM »
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 Applause  beautiful, deep feelings !...mubaarak ho Modi sb!
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2013, 06:01:05 AM »
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Quote from: Abul Asad on January 11, 2013, 07:20:39 PM
Ritesh ji,

bahut khoob likha hai aapne
aapke khayal men kaafi gehrai hai.
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thank abul asad ji..
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2013, 06:01:33 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on January 12, 2013, 01:46:40 AM
bahut khoob
thank you...
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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2013, 06:12:15 AM »
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just beautiful
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Quote from: prashad on January 12, 2013, 02:23:37 AM
very nice
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Quote from: shara63 on January 12, 2013, 04:13:40 AM
Applause  beautiful, deep feelings !...mubaarak ho Modi sb!
thank you....Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: January 12, 2013, 06:22:13 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 12, 2013, 06:12:15 AM
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just beautiful
thank you aqsh ji....
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«Reply #11 on: January 12, 2013, 06:29:11 AM »
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Quote from: Ritesh Modi on January 11, 2013, 06:40:03 PM
Wo kya gaye, hogaye hain raaste udaas,
jiine ke liye na raha kuch zindagi ke paas,

zamaana beet gaya, na rahi uske aane ki aas,
do boond paa ker mitt ti nahi hai aankhon ki pyaas,

armaan yu toote ke na raha mohabbat pe vishwaas,
ye dil wo badnaseeb jisko aayi na koi khushi raas.....

bahut bahut khoob
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Quote from: suman59 on January 12, 2013, 06:29:11 AM
bahut bahut khoob
thank you sumanji...
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«Reply #13 on: January 12, 2013, 01:08:46 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Ritesh ji....!!!
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Ritesh ji....!!!
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