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Har shab teri shakal ikhtiyaar kar leti hai..,
baaho me bhar kar mujhey pyar kar leti hai..
roothti hai na mujhse ye khafa hoti hai...
rooth bhi jaon gar to mana leti hai..
jab kabhi hota hai ye dil udaas..
mujhe meethey khawabo ki taabeer deti hai...
meri ek khawish ko pura karne ke liye..
ye ek tara bhi tod deti hai..
jee leti hai ab isi raat ke sahare 'manzil'
varna ye khamoshi to jaan leti hai...
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«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2010, 03:10:14 PM » |
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bahut khub ishq ji  |
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2010, 04:53:59 PM » |
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bahut khub Har shab teri shakal ikhtiyaar kar leti hai..,
baaho me bhar kar mujhey pyar kar leti hai..
roothti hai na mujhse ye khafa hoti hai...
rooth bhi jaon gar to mana leti hai..
jab kabhi hota hai ye dil udaas..
mujhe meethey khawabo ki taabeer deti hai...
meri ek khawish ko pura karne ke liye..
ye ek tara bhi tod deti hai..
jee leti hai ab isi raat ke sahare 'manzil'
varna ye khamoshi to jaan leti hai...
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2010, 12:55:28 AM » |
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2010, 05:07:07 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2010, 06:32:18 AM » |
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bahut khoob ji kya kehene...likhte rahiyeee...
or shihab ji or anu ji bahut khoob reply diya he aap dono ne`
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2010, 10:25:04 AM » |
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bahut khub ishq ji bahut khub ishq ji aapne padhne ke liye waqt nikala or pasand kiya.. uske liye bahut bahut shukria badal ji.. |
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2010, 10:26:04 AM » |
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bahut khub
shukria manoj ji.. |
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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2010, 10:27:06 AM » |
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukria hriday ji.. |
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«Reply #9 on: October 01, 2010, 10:31:44 AM » |
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shihab ji, aapke taareef karne ke andaaz ke kya kahne.. hame kuch kahne layak hi nahi choda aapne.. aapki is hausla afjai ka kin lafzo me shukria kahu samajh nahi pa rahi hu. is baar hamari khamoshi ko hi hamara shukria samajh leejiye.. regards Wah Wah Janaab Kya Baat Hai Bahut Achhey.
Jitni Tareef Ki Jaaye Kum Hai Is Kalaam Ki
Aagaz Se Anjaam Tak Bas Behtareen Hi Behtareen.
Badi Hi Khoobsurati Se Dil Ke Ehsaasaat Ko
Lafzon Mein Piroya Hai Aapne.Bahut Badiya.
Hazaron Dad...
Khush Rahiye...
~Shihab~
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«Reply #10 on: October 01, 2010, 10:36:42 AM » |
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meri raatein sirf tera hi naam leti hai
pawan sang tujhko pukara karti hai
aake mil ja mujhe mere sanam yahan
meri har manzil tujhe hi ishara karti hai
lehrein jo dil k kinare se takrati hain
ankhon se na jane kaise sailaab aate hain
dard to hota nahin mujhe kyunki pathar hun
lekin ruuh ko jaise ye tod jate hain...... thanks alot kasak ji... aapki is rachna ko padhke kuch khayal man me aaye hai.. unhe pesh karne jurrat kar rahi hu.. aksar teri talash me bhatak jati hai raat.. paake thujh ko kkhud hi sambhal jati hai raat.. kis se kahu ki tu nahi hai paas.. aksar meri baat samajh jati hai raat |
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«Reply #11 on: October 01, 2010, 10:37:36 AM » |
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shukria abhi ji.. bahut khoob ji kya kehene...likhte rahiyeee...
or shihab ji or anu ji bahut khoob reply diya he aap dono ne`
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«Reply #12 on: October 01, 2010, 10:45:37 AM » |
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hmmmm.... chaliye is tarah to hum aapka shukria bahut jald ada kar payenge.. or hum itna mashkoor ho rahe hai kyunki aapke lafzo se bhut hausla afzai hui hai.. umeed hai hamari agli post bhi aapko itni hi pasand aaye.. thanx alot for this encouragement.. aap bhi apna khayal rakhiye.. Gar Waqai Mein Aap Shukariya Ada Karna Chahte Hain
To Bas Aisi Hi Ek Aur Khoobsurat Peshkash Jaldi Kar Dijiye..hmhm
Ji Itna Bhi Mashkoor Hone Ki Jarurat Nahi Hai Aapko.Bas Aapne
Likha Hi Kuch Aisa Tha Ki Tareef To Banti Hi Thi Aapki..hmhm
Yun Hi Likhte Rahiye...
KhushRahiye...
~Shihab~
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«Reply #13 on: October 01, 2010, 10:51:30 AM » |
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hmhm Hume Intezar Rahega Aapki Agli Peshkash Ka
Aur I Wish Ki Aapki Agli Peshkash Isse Bhi Jyada
Khoobsurat Hogi....Chaliye Dekhte Hain Kya Hota Hai.
Apna Aur Apno Ka Khayal Rakhen.
Khush Rahiye...
~Shihab~
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«Reply #14 on: November 09, 2010, 09:49:26 PM » |
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Nice one :D
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