Raat pyaaree hai: pyaarey balam ghar aa!!

by abdbundeli on February 26, 2009, 11:18:12 AM
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Raat jaaree hai: pyaarey balam ghar aa!
Raat pyaaree hai: pyaarey balam ghar aa!!


Nayee-nayee koploun mein kaliyaan chhupeen hain kayee!
Nayee-nayee kaliyoun sey surabhiyaan hain chhalak raheen!
Ujaley-ujaley lagtey hain ab andhiyaarey sabhee;
Rashmiyaan, tumhaaree chhabi deykhney ko lalak raheen!

Pratikshaa, pratikshaa hai, pal kii ho yaa din kee!
Hrudaya mein lahartee hai chundhiyaayee naagin-see!!

Ritu hai baasantee, ab priyatam karunaakar aa!
Nishi yah, tumhaaree hai: pyaarey balam ghar aa!!
     Haaaaan jii!
        Raat jaaree hai: pyaarey balam ghar aa!
        Raat pyaaree hai: pyaarey balam ghar aa!!

 
Amraayee bouraayee, kolaliyaa kook rahee!
Mein, deykho Maadhav, kitney din tak mook rahee!!
Madhuritu kee maaree, kab tak na bulaatee tumko;
Antas mein milanaashaa peedaa-see hook rahee!!
 
Mujhey sudhi naheen hai, kahaan mujhsey huyee hai chook?
Maaninee tumhaaree ho jaayegee took-took!!

Bihabal milanaatur hoon; deyr na kar priyawar aa!
Nishi yah hamaaree hai: pyaarey balam ghar aa!!
     Haaaaan jii!
        Raat jaaree hai: pyaarey balam ghar aa!
        Raat pyaaree hai: pyaarey balam ghar aa!!

                                      - Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2009, 01:37:03 PM »
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Wah wah bhai kya rachna likhi hain  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ABD ko to main achchi tarah janta hu par yeh RAMWATIYA ka jawab likhne ke liye thoda Gyaan aur jama karna padega  DOH
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2009, 01:39:30 PM »
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Bohot hi khoobsurat Kavita likhi hai Babu Ji
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«Reply #3 on: February 26, 2009, 01:51:55 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 26, 2009, 01:37:03 PM
Wah wah bhai kya rachna likhi hai  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ABD ko to main achchi tarah janta hu par yeh RAMWATIYA ka jawab likhne ke liye thoda Gyaan aur jama karna padega  DOH
Classical Indian Music key 'meethhey' tarannum mein doob kar likhaa hai! Samajhey bagair bhi bahut kuchh kah jaayegaa! Yahee to is tahey dilee 'sangeet' ki aatmeeyataa hai! Aur, Hindustan mein kyaa Pakistan mein bhi Hindustani Sangeet ko jaananey-samajhney waaley karorhoun na sahee, laakhoun to hain hi!
Shukriyah!
             - abd bundeli 
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«Reply #4 on: February 26, 2009, 02:00:34 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 26, 2009, 01:39:30 PM
Bohot hi khoobsurat Kavita likhi hai Babu Ji
Meyree bitiaa ko pasand aayee to zaroor hi achchee hai! I'm delighted!
           - abd bundeli
       
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«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2009, 02:03:40 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 26, 2009, 01:51:55 PM
Classical Indian Music key 'meethhey' tarannum mein doob kar likhaa hai! Samajhey bagair bhi bahut kuchh kah jaayegaa! Yahee to is tahey dilee 'sangeet' ki aatmeeyataa hai! Aur, Hindustan mein kyaa Pakistan mein bhi Hindustani Sangeet ko jaananey-samajhney waaley karorhoun na sahee, laakhoun to hain hi!
Shukriyah!
             - abd bundeli 

Bilkul sahi kaha Babu Ji...balki kai desh jahan hindi jaanne waale log nahin, wahan Indian classical music ke deewane maujood hain, jo music ki zubaan pehchante hain Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2009, 02:06:22 PM »
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Mohe shyam rang me rang de
Jo thi gopiyo me woh umang de
Main bhi nachu bandh ghungroo magan
Mere pairo ko shiv thirkan tu de

Muje rok mat muje tok mat
Main hu bavli mere meet ki
Muje na bata achca bura
Muje kya samaj teri reet ki

Piya ang mile Piya sang mile
Main samjhu teeno lok mile
Tu bhale kare Prabhu Upasna
Muje piya milan ka jog mile

-Sajid Ghayel-


Ghayel: Mumbai, Maharashtra, India.  Winking
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«Reply #7 on: February 26, 2009, 02:10:26 PM »
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Waah waah Sajid Ji...bohot khoob....Yahan to suron ka mela hai....

Mujhe ma'af kijiyega, yahan kavita ki baarish main ek film ka song post kar rahi hoon.....par kya karun, ye apne aap hi labon pe aa gaya....gungunae lagi to post kiye bina raha na gaya....


Moraa Goraa Ang Lai Le
Mohe Shaam Rang Dai De
Chhup Jaauungii Raat Hii Mein
Mohe Pii Kaa Sa.Ng Dai De

Ek Laaj Roke Paiyaan
Ek Moh Khiinche Baiyaan
Jaauun Kidhar Na Jaanuun
Ham Kaa Koii Batlaai De

Badarii Hataa Ke Chandaa
Chup Ke Se Jhaanke Chandaa
Tohe Raahuu Laage Bairii
Muskaaye Jii Jalaai Ke

Kuchh Kho Diyaa Hai Paai Ke
Kuchh Paa Liyaa Gavaai Ke
Kuchh Kho Diyaa Hai Paai Ke
Kuchh Paa Liyaa Gavaai Ke
Kahaan Le Chalaa Hai Manavaa
Mohe Baanvarii Banaai Ke

Song from Bandini
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«Reply #8 on: February 26, 2009, 02:12:59 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 26, 2009, 02:03:40 PM
Bilkul sahi kaha Babu Ji...balki kai desh jahan hindi jaanne waale log nahin, wahan Indian classical music ke deewane maujood hain, jo music ki zubaan pehchante hain Usual Smile
Bitia! You're perfectly right! Hindustani Sangeet key qadradaan saarey sansaar mein phailey hain!
                           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #9 on: February 26, 2009, 02:17:04 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Waah bohat khoob Abd ji 

Celmira sis and Sajid ji...
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«Reply #10 on: February 26, 2009, 02:21:08 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 26, 2009, 02:06:22 PM
Mohe shyam rang me rang de
Jo thi gopiyo me woh umang de
Main bhi nachu bandh ghungroo magan
Mere pairo ko shiv thirkan tu de

Muje rok mat muje tok mat
Main hu bavli mere meet ki
Muje na bata achca bura
Muje kya samaj teri reet ki

Piya ang mile Piya sang mile
Main samjhu teeno lok mile
Tu bhale kare Prabhu Upasna
Muje piya milan ka jog mile

-Sajid Ghayel-


Ghayel: Mumbai, Maharashtra, India.  Winking
Waaaaah bhayeee waaah! Bahut hi maaqool jawaab hai! Behtareen! Itney gahrey ho, mujhey kyaa patah thaa? Waaah! Miyaan Ghayel, Bahut hi sundar! "Balihaaree jaauun apney Kaanhaa pai!"
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«Reply #11 on: February 26, 2009, 02:26:52 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 26, 2009, 02:10:26 PM
Waah waah Sajid Ji...bohot khoob....Yahan to suron ka mela hai....

Mujhe ma'af kijiyega, yahan kavita ki baarish main ek film ka song post kar rahi hoon.....par kya karun, ye apne aap hi labon pe aa gaya....gungunae lagi to post kiye bina raha na gaya....


Moraa Goraa Ang Lai Le
Mohe Shaam Rang Dai De
Chhup Jaauungii Raat Hii Mein
Mohe Pii Kaa Sa.Ng Dai De

Ek Laaj Roke Paiyaan
Ek Moh Khiinche Baiyaan
Jaauun Kidhar Na Jaanuun
Ham Kaa Koii Batlaai De

Badarii Hataa Ke Chandaa
Chup Ke Se Jhaanke Chandaa
Tohe Raahuu Laage Bairii
Muskaaye Jii Jalaai Ke

Kuchh Kho Diyaa Hai Paai Ke
Kuchh Paa Liyaa Gavaai Ke
Kuchh Kho Diyaa Hai Paai Ke
Kuchh Paa Liyaa Gavaai Ke
Kahaan Le Chalaa Hai Manavaa
Mohe Baanvarii Banaai Ke

Song from Bandini
Bahut hi sundar-sundar 'samundar' hain meyree bitia key zeyn-o-dil mein! Kabhi na bhulaayaa jaaney waalaa hai yah 'geet'!
                            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #12 on: February 26, 2009, 02:28:32 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on February 26, 2009, 02:17:04 PM
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Waah bohat khoob Abd ji 

Celmira sis and Sajid ji...
Bahut-bahut shukriyah honeyrose ji!
                       - abd bundeli
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«Reply #13 on: February 26, 2009, 02:30:58 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 26, 2009, 02:06:22 PM
Mohe shyam rang me rang de
Jo thi gopiyo me woh umang de
Main bhi nachu bandh ghungroo magan
Mere pairo ko shiv thirkan tu de

Muje rok mat muje tok mat
Main hu bavli mere meet ki
Muje na bata achca bura
Muje kya samaj teri reet ki

Piya ang mile Piya sang mile
Main samjhu teeno lok mile
Tu bhale kare Prabhu Upasna
Muje piya milan ka jog mile

-Sajid Ghayel-


Ghayel: Mumbai, Maharashtra, India.  Winking

Bahut bahut pyara sher likha aapne Sajid ji.... but yeh mumbai india kya hai?tongue3
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«Reply #14 on: February 27, 2009, 01:19:13 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 26, 2009, 02:26:52 PM
Bahut hi sundar-sundar 'samundar' hain meyree bitia key zeyn-o-dil mein! Kabhi na bhulaayaa jaaney waalaa hai yah 'geet'!
                            - abd bundeli

Shukriya Babu Ji Usual Smile
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