rah mai takti rahi

by chitralsony on November 23, 2009, 12:56:08 PM

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chitralsony

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lout anay ka keh kai ab tak na anay wala
kitna anjaan hai muj sai wo jaanay wala
khowab ankhon mai sajayay rah mai takti rahi
mairay angan mai na aya wo khowab dikhanay wala


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riyaz106

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Re: rah mai takti rahi

«Reply #1 on: November 23, 2009, 01:16:49 PM »

Masha-ALLAH acha likha hai. Magar abhi improvement ki zaroorat hai.


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chitralsony

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Re: rah mai takti rahi

«Reply #2 on: November 23, 2009, 02:22:11 PM »

thank u janab ,je haan hum seekhnay he atay hain yahaan riaz sahab ham to just apni feelings ko zuban dainay ki sayi kertay hain appka shokriya kai app nay hamay perha


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madhuwesh

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Re: rah mai takti rahi

«Reply #3 on: November 24, 2009, 04:59:41 AM »

Wah bahut khoob Chitra ji very touching n lovely creation.excellent


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: rah mai takti rahi

«Reply #4 on: November 24, 2009, 09:14:11 AM »

Nice Chitra Ji


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pankshivam

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Re: rah mai takti rahi

«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2009, 07:15:58 PM »

Quote from: chitralsony on November 23, 2009, 12:56:08 PM

lout anay ka keh kai ab tak na anay wala
kitna anjaan hai muj sai wo jaanay wala
khowab ankhon mai sajayay rah mai takti rahi
mairay angan mai na aya wo khowab dikhanay wala

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