real poetry:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

waheed

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salaam mere yoindia dosto aur azeezo dekhiye is forum mein sirf apne sher likhe na ke kisi shayar ke main yeh chahta hoon ke mere yoindia ke dostaon ke andar bahot talent hain is liye plz apne sher likhen na ke kisi shayar ke ok plz sab shaamil ho is forum mein plz bura matt maniye ok ALLAH HAFIZ

aye kaaash ke main teri gali mein na aata
aye kaash ke main tujhse na milta
aye kaash ke meri nazrein teri nazraon se na takraati
toh meri zindagi kisi aur mod pe hoti
aur teri zindagi kisi aur mod pe hoti
aur yeh DARD-E-JUDAI ka gham kisi ko na sehna padta

yeh sher nahi hai mere dil ka gham hai
kya karoon yaro jab se dekha hai usko
meri zindagi ki ka alag hi aalam hai[


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Talat

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«Reply #1 on: September 17, 2004, 12:15:45 PM »

Aap apne sher yahan likhen zaroor
par sirf 'apne' hone ki na shart lagain
jo ho sher kisi aur ka, to shayer ka naam zaroor lagain
jo maloom na ho shayer ka naam, 'not mine' likhna bhool na jayen.

Gustakhi maaf Waheed Sb. Yeh sach hai ki yeh forum ek bahtareen jagah hai jahan koi bhi apne talent ka muzahira kar sakta hai par likhne ka talent sab ke paas nahin hota aur shaamil hone ka haq to sab ko hona chahiye na! Shairi jaisi khoobsurat cheez ko shartoan main qaid na karen!!


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2004, 05:00:28 PM »

u r right..........................talat........


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Talat

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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2004, 05:04:36 PM »

Thanx!!! Waheed...


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2004, 05:06:40 PM »

Ye Meri Baat Nahin' Sub Hi Yehi Kehte Hen
Dushman E Jaan Ko Maseehaa Nahin Likkha Jataa.


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Talat

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«Reply #5 on: September 18, 2004, 05:23:01 AM »

Barbaadiy-e-dil jabr nahin Faiz kisi ka,
Wo dushman-e-jaan hai to bhula kyon nahi dete!! (NM)


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waheed

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«Reply #6 on: September 18, 2004, 01:24:55 PM »

nice talat and waheed_rose

but baat yeh hai ke apna talent dikhaane ka toh zariya hona chahiye nakya kehte hain

jo rishtey de zakhm
un ke toot ne pe kya gham
hum dushman se kya kahein
humein apnaon ne diye gham


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #7 on: September 18, 2004, 02:21:54 PM »

Yeh hey mera qalam hi meri talwaar meri dhaal
Tum ney abhi is teq ka joher nahi dekha..............


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Talat

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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2004, 10:33:36 AM »

For Waheed (Hyderabaad)..

Jo hua so hua chalo ab dosti kar lain...
Kuch tum sahi kuch hum sahi chalo ab dosti kar lain!!!


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Talat

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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2004, 10:36:17 AM »

Aap ki qalam ka johar to hum dekh rahe hain
Beshak behtareen likhte hain..haan hume yeh zaroor kehna hai........

Hain aur bhi dunya main sukhanwar bahut achche
Kehte hain ki Ghalib ka hai andaaz-e-bayaa(n) aur!!!

(Mirza Ghalib)


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waheed

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«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2004, 01:11:18 PM »

thanks talat

accha dosti karlete hain
per dosti nibhaana zaroor
accha dosti kerletien hain

waheed rose saab humein aapki johar dekhna hai


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«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2004, 01:53:28 PM »

hmm.. Waheed.. you are absolutely right!!
But we allow people to post shayari of other shayars but with proper credits.. ..
See my SIG for more INFO!


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Talat

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«Reply #12 on: September 20, 2004, 01:19:08 PM »

Thanks Ricky...

Dosti ki hai to to nibhayenge bhi hum
Par doston ko kabhi azmaana na tum!! Becos kisi shayer ka kehna hai..

Parakhna mat Parakhne se koi apna nahin rehta
Kisi bhi aaene main der tak chehra nahin rehta!!!


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waheed

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«Reply #13 on: September 20, 2004, 02:31:46 PM »

thanks talat and ricky


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