rooh bikhri hai bahut

by manzil-e-ishq on September 13, 2010, 12:52:09 PM

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri for Dard -e- Judai > Topic: rooh bikhri hai bahut

Pages: [1] 2 All

Author

(Read 2277 times)

manzil-e-ishq

Guest

rooh bikhri hai bahut tere jaane ke baad,
laut aana e jaan ek fasane ke baad....

ashq sukhe hai palko ke bade arse ke baad
dekh karna na tu shikwa, apne aane ke baad

tere baigar jeeene ki aadat nahi dali h maine
ho sake to palat jana, aazmane ke baad

mere karar me ab tak h bekarai ka lutf
tod dena na bhram ye. itni chahat ke baad....

teri tamam aadato me dhal gayi hai 'manzil'
karna kuch naya sitam apne aane ke baad...


	Logged

Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
	Bikhri hui zindagi..! by nishita in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2 All »
	Bikhri yaaden... by Pundreek in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai
	Rooh ko rooh, na jaaney kahaan bulaatee hai? by abdbundeli in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq « 1 2 All »
	bikhri laasho ka(CSET) by MANOJ6568 in Shairi for Manzar -e- Kudrat
	hai bikhri hui zindgi ko........ by SURESH SANGWAN in Miscellaneous Shayri

thinkhattk

Guest

Re: rooh bikhri hai bahut

«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2010, 12:57:47 PM »

wah manzil ji kya khoob likha he.....
bahot bahot hi achha laga padh kar.....

Clapping Smiley


	Logged

aiina

Shayarana Mizaaj

Rau: 0

Offline

Gender: Female

Waqt Bitaya:
1 days, 10 hours and 29 minutes.

''aiina707''

Posts: 72
Member Since: Aug 2010

Re: rooh bikhri hai bahut

«Reply #2 on: September 13, 2010, 05:11:36 PM »

touching lines... aap ne bauhat khoob likha hai


	Logged

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

Re: rooh bikhri hai bahut

«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2010, 08:13:00 AM »

Manzil ji aaapko pehle baar padha humne aur aapke is lekh ko padhte hi hum Fan ko gaye aapke... itna khoob likha hai apne ki iski shabdon me taarif nahi ki ja sakti.. ek ek shabd jaise kuch keh raha ho.. bahut umda aur bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki... too good sarkar.. bahut bahut khoob...!!!


	Logged

AbhiTamrakar

Guest

Re: rooh bikhri hai bahut

«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2010, 08:14:42 AM »

very nice Manjil ji ...apko padhkar achha laga ....yuhi likhte rahiye`


	Logged

manzil-e-ishq

Guest

Re: rooh bikhri hai bahut

«Reply #5 on: September 16, 2010, 11:59:40 AM »

thank u soooo... much thinkhatk ji..
aapko pasand aaya to mehnat safal ho gayi..
aate rahiye..

Quote from: thinkhattk on September 13, 2010, 12:57:47 PM

wah manzil ji kya khoob likha he.....
bahot bahot hi achha laga padh kar.....

Clapping Smiley


	Logged

manzil-e-ishq

Guest

Re: rooh bikhri hai bahut

«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2010, 08:43:32 AM »

pasand karne ka shukria aaina ji

Quote from: aiina on September 13, 2010, 05:11:36 PM

touching lines... aap ne bauhat khoob likha hai


	Logged

manzil-e-ishq

Guest

Re: rooh bikhri hai bahut

«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2010, 08:48:10 AM »

klaskar ji.. aapki taarif ne to humari bolti hi band kar di..
meri is choti si peshkesh ko pasand karne ka tahe dil se shukria..

Quote from: klaskar on September 14, 2010, 08:13:00 AM


	Logged

manzil-e-ishq

Guest

Re: rooh bikhri hai bahut

«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2010, 08:50:15 AM »

thanx abhi ji..
aapne padha or saraha yahi kaafi hamare liye..
apna khayal rakhiye..

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 14, 2010, 08:14:42 AM

very nice Manjil ji ...apko padhkar achha laga ....yuhi likhte rahiye`


	Logged

SURESH SANGWAN

Guest

Re: rooh bikhri hai bahut

«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2010, 11:25:57 AM »

very very nice ji manzil ji
Clapping Smiley


	Logged

manzil-e-ishq

Guest

Re: rooh bikhri hai bahut

«Reply #10 on: September 30, 2010, 10:51:18 AM »

Thanx suresh ji..... icon_flower


	Logged

FARAWAYNUTS

Guest

Re: rooh bikhri hai bahut

«Reply #11 on: November 03, 2010, 05:12:46 PM »

bahut hi badiyaa likhaa hai....1 baar padke jee hi nahi bhartaa...


	Logged

Yaash

Guest

Re: rooh bikhri hai bahut

«Reply #12 on: November 05, 2010, 10:16:59 AM »

Bohat Achhey Manzil Ji.


	Logged

manzil-e-ishq

Guest

Re: rooh bikhri hai bahut

«Reply #13 on: November 10, 2010, 05:29:42 AM »

thanx alot ji......

Quote from: FARAWAYNUTS on November 03, 2010, 05:12:46 PM

bahut hi badiyaa likhaa hai....1 baar padke jee hi nahi bhartaa...


	Logged

manzil-e-ishq

Guest

Re: rooh bikhri hai bahut

«Reply #14 on: November 10, 2010, 05:30:57 AM »

shukria yaash ji...
aate rahiye....

Quote from: Yaash on November 05, 2010, 10:16:59 AM

Bohat Achhey Manzil Ji.


	Logged

Pages: [1] 2 All

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri for Dard -e- Judai > Topic: rooh bikhri hai bahut

Jump to:

Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.

Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

on eTI community..

User

Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
December 23, 2024, 01:16:38 AM

Recent Replies

Shayri

by mkv

[December 22, 2024, 05:36:15 PM]

मोहब्बत लिखने की ,,,saah...

by saahill

[December 19, 2024, 08:27:42 AM]

तुम्हारे ख़्वाब ,,,,, sa...

by saahill

[December 17, 2024, 08:39:55 AM]

सुना था मोहब्बत ,,,, saa...

by saahill

[December 15, 2024, 06:04:49 AM]

साजिश नहीं ,,,, saahill

by saahill

[December 13, 2024, 06:54:09 AM]

zikar tumhara ,,,, saahil...

by saahill

[December 10, 2024, 08:23:12 AM]

khamosh ,,,, saahill

by saahill

[December 10, 2024, 08:22:15 AM]

Hyderabadi language

by Arif Uddin

[December 03, 2024, 07:06:48 PM]

parhezz ,,,, saahill

by saahill

[November 26, 2024, 08:47:05 AM]

mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...

by saahill

[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]