rooh bikhri hai bahut

by manzil-e-ishq on September 13, 2010, 12:52:09 PM
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rooh bikhri hai bahut tere jaane ke baad,
laut aana e jaan ek fasane ke baad....
 
ashq sukhe hai palko ke bade arse ke baad
dekh karna na tu shikwa, apne aane ke baad
 
tere baigar jeeene ki aadat nahi dali h maine
ho sake to palat jana, aazmane ke baad
 
mere karar me ab tak h bekarai ka lutf
tod dena na bhram ye. itni chahat ke baad....
 
teri tamam aadato me dhal gayi hai 'manzil'
karna kuch naya sitam apne aane ke baad...
 
 
 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2010, 12:57:47 PM »
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wah manzil ji kya khoob likha he.....
bahot bahot hi achha laga padh kar.....

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«Reply #2 on: September 13, 2010, 05:11:36 PM »
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touching lines... aap ne bauhat khoob likha hai
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2010, 08:13:00 AM »
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Manzil ji aaapko pehle baar padha humne aur aapke is lekh ko padhte hi hum Fan ko gaye aapke... itna khoob likha hai apne ki iski shabdon me taarif nahi ki ja sakti.. ek ek shabd jaise kuch keh raha ho.. bahut umda aur bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki... too good sarkar.. bahut bahut khoob...!!!

 
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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2010, 08:14:42 AM »
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very nice Manjil ji ...apko padhkar achha laga ....yuhi likhte rahiye`
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«Reply #5 on: September 16, 2010, 11:59:40 AM »
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thank u soooo... much thinkhatk ji..
aapko pasand aaya to mehnat safal ho gayi..
aate rahiye..
Quote from: thinkhattk on September 13, 2010, 12:57:47 PM
wah manzil ji kya khoob likha he.....
bahot bahot hi achha laga padh kar.....

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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2010, 08:43:32 AM »
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pasand karne ka shukria aaina ji
Quote from: aiina on September 13, 2010, 05:11:36 PM
touching lines... aap ne bauhat khoob likha hai
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2010, 08:48:10 AM »
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klaskar ji.. aapki taarif ne to humari bolti hi band kar di..
meri is choti si peshkesh ko pasand karne ka tahe dil se shukria..

 
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Manzil ji aaapko pehle baar padha humne aur aapke is lekh ko padhte hi hum Fan ko gaye aapke... itna khoob likha hai apne ki iski shabdon me taarif nahi ki ja sakti.. ek ek shabd jaise kuch keh raha ho.. bahut umda aur bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki... too good sarkar.. bahut bahut khoob...!!!

 
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2010, 08:50:15 AM »
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thanx abhi ji..
aapne padha or saraha yahi kaafi hamare liye..
apna khayal rakhiye..
Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 14, 2010, 08:14:42 AM
very nice Manjil ji ...apko padhkar achha laga ....yuhi likhte rahiye`
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2010, 11:25:57 AM »
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very very nice ji manzil ji
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«Reply #10 on: September 30, 2010, 10:51:18 AM »
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Thanx suresh ji..... icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: November 03, 2010, 05:12:46 PM »
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bahut hi badiyaa likhaa hai....1 baar padke jee hi nahi bhartaa...
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«Reply #12 on: November 05, 2010, 10:16:59 AM »
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Bohat Achhey Manzil Ji.
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«Reply #13 on: November 10, 2010, 05:29:42 AM »
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thanx alot ji......
Quote from: FARAWAYNUTS on November 03, 2010, 05:12:46 PM
bahut hi badiyaa likhaa hai....1 baar padke jee hi nahi bhartaa...
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«Reply #14 on: November 10, 2010, 05:30:57 AM »
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shukria yaash ji...
aate rahiye....
Quote from: Yaash on November 05, 2010, 10:16:59 AM
Bohat Achhey Manzil Ji.
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