Saansein Jo Meri Tuti

by nishi gahlaut on September 08, 2013, 10:18:55 PM
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Intezaar ka tere kab se dil mein diya jalaye baithe hai,
Kab milan hoga tumse ye aas lagaye bethe hai,

Ek pal bhi aisa nahi jab yaad tumko na kiya ho humne,
Tere aane ki chah mein kab se nazare bichaye baithe hai,

Tera naam le lekar he ab saansein meri chalti hai,
Jo ki tum ne aur berukhi meri dillagi ke saath,

Toh ye nazuk dil mera bardasht na phir kar payega,
Saansein jo meri tuti toh sametane ke liye kuch bhi na rah jayega....
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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2013, 10:28:13 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2013, 10:37:01 PM »
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bahut sundar rachna, bahut achchaa likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2013, 10:38:35 PM »
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Intezaar ka tere kab se dil mein diya jalaye baithe hai,
Kab milan hoga tumse ye aas lagaye bethe hai,

Ek pal bhi aisa nahi jab yaad tumko na kiya ho humne,
Tere aane ki chah mein kab se nazare bichaye baithe hai,

Tera naam le lekar he ab saansein meri chalti hai,

very very nice
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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2013, 11:49:49 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Nishiji.
Quote from: nishi gahlaut on September 08, 2013, 10:18:55 PM
Intezaar ka tere kab se dil mein diya jalaye baithe hai,
Kab milan hoga tumse ye aas lagaye bethe hai,

Ek pal bhi aisa nahi jab yaad tumko na kiya ho humne,
Tere aane ki chah mein kab se nazare bichaye baithe hai,

Tera naam le lekar he ab saansein meri chalti hai,
Jo ki tum ne aur berukhi meri dillagi ke saath,

Toh ye nazuk dil mera bardasht na phir kar payega,
Saansein jo meri tuti toh sametane ke liye kuch bhi na rah jayega....
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«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2013, 01:40:29 AM »
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Bahut khoob!
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waah bohat khoob ,..............bohat c daad,...
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bahut khoob....
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achchha likha nishi ji ... daad !
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bahot achey  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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