Saanson ka bandhan:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

sweetie2210s

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Kaash wo pal tham jaate
jab saath aapka jannat tak le jaata tha,
wo chaand gawah hai hamare pyar ka
aur saanson ka bandhan toot na paata tha,
kaise jiye aapse juda ho kar
ye hume koi na batata tha,
alag si mehak,alag si kheech hai aapke pyar me
ab murjha gaye hai kali ki tarah,
warna aapke saath ye chehra har waqt muskuraata tha.


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Muhammed

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Re: Saanson ka bandhan

«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2008, 09:21:16 AM »

Sweetie Ji..Bahot Khoob Hai aapke ye lines.


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sweetie2210s

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Re: Saanson ka bandhan

«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2008, 09:45:53 AM »

Quote from: Muhammed on July 22, 2008, 09:21:16 AM

Sweetie Ji..Bahot Khoob Hai aapke ye lines.

thanks again muhammed ji,shayiri ke baare mein to kabhi socha bhi nahi tha maine,ek din yun hi beth ke likh di..pata nahi tha that people would appreciate it.


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Muhammed

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Re: Saanson ka bandhan

«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2008, 10:03:14 AM »

Quote from: sweetie2210s on July 22, 2008, 09:45:53 AM

thanks again muhammed ji,shayiri ke baare mein to kabhi socha bhi nahi tha maine,ek din yun hi beth ke likh di..pata nahi tha that people would appreciate it.

Aap K Kalaam Ko Main Kuch Din Se Dekh Raha Hoon..bahot hi Achchha Likhte Ho aap..
aap Me Wo baat Dekhne Ko Mili Jo Ubharte shayaro Me Huaa Karti Hai..Yaani Alfaaz Ki Parakh Bahot Khoob Hai aap me..
Insha-allah Meri dua Hai Aap Likhte Raho Aur Hum (Yoindia )...aapko Saath Dete rahe..
Aur Jaise Hi Aapke kalaam ki Roshni Felengi...Khud - ba- Khud Log aapke Kalaam Ki Taraf Khinchte Chale aayege..aamin


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: Saanson ka bandhan

«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2008, 10:15:19 AM »

sweetie bohut khoob likha hai
yu hi likhte rehna


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sweetie2210s

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Re: Saanson ka bandhan

«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2008, 10:35:16 AM »

Quote from: Muhammed on July 22, 2008, 10:03:14 AM

Shukriya jee,aap saath dete rahein to zarur isse bhi ziada accha likhne ki koshish karungi.


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Re: Saanson ka bandhan

«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2008, 06:11:28 PM »

very nicely done.


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angel4u

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Re: Saanson ka bandhan

«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2008, 02:40:34 PM »

Bahut hi umda alfaazon ke motiyon ko piroya hai aapne. really a good one.


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sweetie2210s

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Re: Saanson ka bandhan

«Reply #8 on: August 01, 2008, 01:00:33 PM »

Quote from: angel4u on July 24, 2008, 02:40:34 PM

Bahut hi umda alfaazon ke motiyon ko piroya hai aapne. really a good one.

Thanks a lot angel ji for liking my poem.

Quote from: angel4u on July 24, 2008, 02:40:34 PM

Bahut hi umda alfaazon ke motiyon ko piroya hai aapne. really a good one.

Thanks a lot angel ji for liking my poem.


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