SAMEER bahut door chala jayega

by poem143s on July 11, 2007, 12:58:51 PM
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Jab tujhe bhi kabhi meri yaad aayegi
Tu bhi meri tarah aashu bahayegi
Bahut royega tera bhi dil meri yaad main
Har pal mujhe maanga karegi khuda se fariyaad main
Jab tujhe meri muhbbat main yakeen aayega
Tab tak tera SAMEER  bahut door chala jayega

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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2007, 12:18:03 AM »
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Jab tujhe bhi kabhi meri yaad aayegi
Tu bhi meri tarah aashu bahayegi
Bahut royega tera bhi dil meri yaad main
Har pal mujhe maanga karegi khuda se fariyaad main
Jab tujhe meri muhbbat main yakeen aayega
Tab tak tera SAMEER  bahut door chala jayega

Sameer


nice 1 sameer...

Her raahguzar se wafa ki khushboo aati hai
Kaja.n se bhi wafa ki khushboo aati hai..
We kehte hai sangdil mujhe befawa
Unke labon se bhi wafa ki khushboo aati hai..!!

keep up.[/color]
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«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2007, 06:19:53 AM »
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Roja ma'am thankyou so much for your valuable comments
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2007, 10:27:11 AM »
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Sameer, you are doing great !
I must call you short poem guy here who wrote them nice always.

You did nice too Roja !
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«Reply #4 on: July 26, 2007, 03:22:31 AM »
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Thankyou so much Ricky ji
Bas aur kaya chahiye mujhe aapke bahut kimti comments jo mil gaye ab to has kasis bhi chhor diyi
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