Sang tere.........Aqsh

by aqsh on October 08, 2012, 05:51:32 AM
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Tamanna e mohabbat me tumko paana jaroori tha
Raah e wafa me tumko khona yeh meri majboori thi

Kyun kare shikwa aur gila ab kisi se jaake hum
Muqaddar me hamari jab likhi bas doori thi

Rokna chaha par rok na sake hum kabhi
Samandar se aati mauje bahut gehri thi

Kabhi rote hue likhe kabhi likhte hue roye
Kahani jo hamare pyaar ki adhoori thi

Chahkar bhi hum tumhe bhula na sake
Sang tumhare hi meri har khushi poori thi
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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2012, 05:59:19 AM »
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Kabhi rote hue likhe kabhi likhte hue roye
Kahani jo hamare pyaar ki adhoori thi.


aqsh ji in bohut khoob likha hai aapne . in do lines ke liye daad qubool kijiye...
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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2012, 06:02:19 AM »
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bahut khub Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2012, 06:15:04 AM »
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nice one
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«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2012, 06:18:14 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on October 08, 2012, 05:59:19 AM
Kabhi rote hue likhe kabhi likhte hue roye
Kahani jo hamare pyaar ki adhoori thi.


aqsh ji in bohut khoob likha hai aapne . in do lines ke liye daad qubool kijiye...
thank you aarishji
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on October 08, 2012, 06:02:19 AM
bahut khub Applause Applause
thank u sanjeev ji
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Quote from: anmolarora on October 08, 2012, 06:15:04 AM
nice one
thnx anmolji
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bahut badhiya....
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«Reply #8 on: October 08, 2012, 08:07:47 AM »
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zabardast aqsh ji  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2012, 10:00:37 AM »
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Aqsh Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne bahut khoob... badi achche se aapne
apne ahsaas O khayaal ko zubaaN di hai... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe par hume yeH qouted ashaar sab se
behtreen laga... Usual Smile


Quote from: aqsh on October 08, 2012, 05:51:32 AM

Kabhi rote hue likhe kabhi likhte hue roye
Kahani jo hamare pyaar ki adhoori thi




Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: October 08, 2012, 10:34:22 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: October 08, 2012, 12:53:54 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on October 08, 2012, 05:51:32 AM
Tamanna e mohabbat me tumko paana jaroori tha
Raah e wafa me tumko khona yeh meri majboori thi

Kyun kare shikwa aur gila ab kisi se jaake hum
Muqaddar me hamari jab likhi bas doori thi

Rokna chaha par rok na sake hum kabhi
Samandar se aati mauje bahut gehri thi

Kabhi rote hue likhe kabhi likhte hue roye
Kahani jo hamare pyaar ki adhoori thi Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Chahkar bhi hum tumhe bhula na sake
Sang tumhare hi meri har khushi poori thi


bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 08, 2012, 01:58:22 PM »
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good
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«Reply #13 on: October 09, 2012, 07:01:39 AM »
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Quote from: gaytri gupta on October 08, 2012, 06:59:18 AM
bahut badhiya....
thnx gayatriji
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Quote from: sahal on October 08, 2012, 08:07:47 AM
zabardast aqsh ji  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
thnx sahahlji
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