Sardee hai: kat rahee hai Binaa tumhaarey raat!

by abdbundeli on January 11, 2012, 02:59:05 PM
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Sardee hai: kat rahee hai
Binaa tumhaarey raat!
Kyaa yuun hee hogee fanaa,
Qudrat kee sougaat?

Kuhraa chhaayaa hai ghanaa,
Deekhey kaheen na raah!
Mousam ko, hogee bhalaa,
Kyoun meyree parwaah?

        - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2012, 03:03:38 PM »
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wah wah bundeli ji, wah wah

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wah wah bundeli ji, wah wah

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Jasbir Ji, bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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bahoot Bahoot Khoob Abd Ji.. Bahoot Umda likha hai Hamesha ki Tarah !!


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bahut khoob ABD ji Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2012, 09:04:23 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 11, 2012, 02:59:05 PM
Sardee hai: kat rahee hai
Binaa tumhaarey raat!
Kyaa yuun hee hogee fanaa,
Qudrat kee sougaat?


Kuhraa chhaayaa hai ghanaa,
Deekhey kaheen na raah!
Mousam ko, hogee bhalaa,
Kyoun meyree parwaah?

        - abd bundeli


Bahut khoob sahab
Bahut achi likhat

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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2012, 05:02:22 AM »
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bahoot Bahoot Khoob Abd Ji.. Bahoot Umda likha hai Hamesha ki Tarah !!
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Bahut-bahut Shukriyah Nysha ji!
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bahut khoob ABD ji Applause

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Quote from: Abul Asad on January 11, 2012, 09:04:23 PM

Bahut khoob sahab
Bahut achi likhat

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Bahut-bahut Shukriyah Asad ji!
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bahut khoob

Bahut-bahut Shukriyah Saini ji!
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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2012, 04:35:27 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 11, 2012, 02:59:05 PM
Sardee hai: kat rahee hai
Binaa tumhaarey raat!
Kyaa yuun hee hogee fanaa,
Qudrat kee sougaat?

Kuhraa chhaayaa hai ghanaa,
Deekhey kaheen na raah!
Mousam ko, hogee bhalaa,
Kyoun meyree parwaah?

        - abd bundeli
wah Bundeli sir--
aap bht kam likhte hain magar kamaal ki likhte hain
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wah Bundeli sir--
aap bht kam likhte hain magar kamaal ki likhte hain


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'sarfira' ji!
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 11, 2012, 02:59:05 PM
Sardee hai: kat rahee hai
Binaa tumhaarey raat!
Kyaa yuun hee hogee fanaa,
Qudrat kee sougaat?

Kuhraa chhaayaa hai ghanaa,
Deekhey kaheen na raah!
Mousam ko, hogee bhalaa,
Kyoun meyree parwaah?

        - abd bundeli

NAICE ABD
 Applause Applause Applause
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NAICE ABD
 Applause Applause Applause

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Khamosh' ji!
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