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manzil-e-ishq
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Chali aati hai teri yaad... roz sham dhale..
bezaar bahut hota hai dil ye shaam dhale...
mere naseeb me tere baadal to na the...
baras jati hai ye aankh roz shaam dhale...
tere deedar ki dua karte hai roz sanam...
rah jati hai bas fariyad roz sham dhale...
har ek mehfil me hote hai, mere charche yun to....
ankahi hoti hai har baat roz shaam dhale...
kise khayal ki tu ab bhi basta hai yaha...
soone hote hai jajbaat roz shaam dhale...
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2011, 07:31:26 AM » |
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wah kya baat hai  umda poetry by u . daad hai ji "" thanx " |
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2011, 07:55:50 AM » |
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wowwww.priya...........
kya baat he yaar badi dilchasp poetry he ye to......
maja aa gaya yaar........kafi gehri batee likhi he apne ......mast mast he ji
few lines from myself........
In Ankho Me Jo He Sapne Pale
Nikal Aate He Sham Dhale
Kabhi Ashq Se To Kabhi Dard Se
Ho Jati Hu Bejaan Sham Dhale
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2011, 08:02:06 AM » |
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waahhhh praiya mastam mast post re...maza aagaya padhke...kisi ki yaadon me khoye tadapte ehsaas bht khub likhe h tumne....
MG good lines by u toooo.....
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2011, 09:45:50 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2011, 01:28:37 PM » |
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thanx nirala ji..... kya hua is baar aapki taraf se koi lines nahi... feeka feeka reply.... wah kya baat hai umda poetry by u . daad hai ji "" thanx " |
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2011, 04:28:37 PM » |
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Chali aati hai teri yaad... roz sham dhale..
bezaar bahut hota hai dil ye shaam dhale...
mere naseeb me tere baadal to na the...
baras jati hai ye aankh roz shaam dhale...
tere deedar ki dua karte hai roz sanam...
rah jati hai bas fariyad roz sham dhale...
har ek mehfil me hote hai, mere charche yun to....
ankahi hoti hai har baat roz shaam dhale...
kise khayal ki tu ab bhi basta hai yaha...
soone hote hai jajbaat roz shaam dhale...
Bahut khoobsurat ehsaas bayaan kiye hai aapne ... Priye Ji ! very nice creation ... Very touching .... dil se daad ! |
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2011, 06:15:29 PM » |
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Chali aati hai teri yaad... roz sham dhale..
bezaar bahut hota hai dil ye shaam dhale...
mere naseeb me tere baadal to na the...
baras jati hai ye aankh roz shaam dhale...
tere deedar ki dua karte hai roz sanam...
rah jati hai bas fariyad roz sham dhale...
har ek mehfil me hote hai, mere charche yun to....
ankahi hoti hai har baat roz shaam dhale...
kise khayal ki tu ab bhi basta hai yaha...
soone hote hai jajbaat roz shaam dhale...
veri naaaaaaaaaaice m.e.i |
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2011, 06:25:24 PM » |
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bht badhiya Manzil ji
bhut hi umda
aap to kamaal ki likhne lage ho
carry on ji.
dili daad aapko
khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #9 on: February 17, 2011, 03:27:10 PM » |
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thanx alot mg..... & as usual mast lines likhi hai aapne... wowwww.priya...........
kya baat he yaar badi dilchasp poetry he ye to......
maja aa gaya yaar........kafi gehri batee likhi he apne ......mast mast he ji
few lines from myself........
In Ankho Me Jo He Sapne Pale
Nikal Aate He Sham Dhale
Kabhi Ashq Se To Kabhi Dard Se
Ho Jati Hu Bejaan Sham Dhale
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2011, 03:27:54 PM » |
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thanx anu di.... waahhhh praiya mastam mast post re...maza aagaya padhke...kisi ki yaadon me khoye tadapte ehsaas bht khub likhe h tumne....
MG good lines by u toooo.....
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2011, 03:34:06 PM » |
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thanx koyal...... bht mast likha hai tune.... |
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«Reply #12 on: February 19, 2011, 05:36:18 AM » |
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shukria anshumali ji...... Bahut khoobsurat ehsaas bayaan kiye hai aapne ... Priye Ji !
very nice creation ... Very touching .... dil se daad !
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«Reply #13 on: February 19, 2011, 05:37:02 AM » |
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thanx alot khamosh ji......
veri naaaaaaaaaaice m.e.i
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«Reply #14 on: February 19, 2011, 05:38:06 AM » |
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thanx alot kb.... sab aap logo ke sath ka kamal hai.... bht badhiya Manzil ji
bhut hi umda
aap to kamaal ki likhne lage ho
carry on ji.
dili daad aapko
khus rahiye
sukriya
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