|| Shaam dhale.....Priya..||

by manzil-e-ishq on February 16, 2011, 07:16:00 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 19, 2011, 05:41:31 AM »
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thanx alot shihab ji.....
maine jab pahle aapka reply dekha tha to shayad yaha aapne apna likha hua kuch post bhi kiya tha.... par abhi to yaha eisa kuch bhi nahi mila mujhe.....
lagta hai kuch technical problem hai.... khair meri koshish pasand karne ka bht bht shukria....

Bahut Khub Manzil e Ishq Ji


Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~
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«Reply #16 on: February 19, 2011, 06:45:42 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai Priya JI
Bahut Khub U Hi Likhte Rahiye
Aur Humesha Khush Rahiye
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«Reply #17 on: February 21, 2011, 01:00:19 PM »
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thanxz rishi ji....

Wah Kya Baat Hai Priya JI
Bahut Khub U Hi Likhte Rahiye
Aur Humesha Khush Rahiye
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«Reply #18 on: February 24, 2011, 03:22:09 PM »
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Chali aati hai teri yaad... roz sham dhale..
bezaar bahut hota hai dil ye shaam dhale...

mere naseeb me tere baadal to na the...
baras jati hai ye aankh roz shaam dhale...

tere deedar ki dua karte hai roz sanam...
rah jati hai bas fariyad roz sham dhale...

har ek mehfil me hote hai, mere charche yun to....
ankahi hoti hai har baat roz shaam dhale...

kise khayal ki tu ab bhi basta hai yaha...
soone hote hai jajbaat roz shaam dhale...


Bahut Bahut Khooob Priya Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaaso Se Bharpoor..

bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #19 on: February 24, 2011, 03:32:42 PM »
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lagta hai meri baato ko seriously le liya aapne.....
khair ji.. aap aaye accha laga....
& thanx for liking my effort....

Bahut Bahut Khooob Priya Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaaso Se Bharpoor..

bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #20 on: March 01, 2011, 10:19:29 AM »
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Good Job Both Of You Manzil Ji N Shihab Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: March 01, 2011, 06:04:56 PM »
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Chali aati hai teri yaad... roz sham dhale..
bezaar bahut hota hai dil ye shaam dhale...

mere naseeb me tere baadal to na the...
baras jati hai ye aankh roz shaam dhale...

tere deedar ki dua karte hai roz sanam...
rah jati hai bas fariyad roz sham dhale...

har ek mehfil me hote hai, mere charche yun to....
ankahi hoti hai har baat roz shaam dhale...

kise khayal ki tu ab bhi basta hai yaha...
soone hote hai jajbaat roz shaam dhale...


Bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut umda priya ji...
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«Reply #22 on: March 02, 2011, 05:49:28 AM »
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thanx shihab ji ki aapne ise dubara post kara.....
sach me bht bht khoobsurat hai aapki ye rachna.....
sply 2nd one.....
simply superb....

Sorry Ji...

Shaam   Ke   Baad   Jab  ,  Suraj   Dhal   Jaata  Hai.
Tab  Teri   Yaadon   Ka   Charag  ,  Jhal  Jaata Hai.

Raat  Bhar  Dekhta   Hoon  Tujhey   Chand   Mein
Subha   Hote  Hi  Phir   Manzar   Badal  Jaata  Hai.

Sochta  Rehta  Hoon  Is  Qadar  Main  Tujhey  , Ki
Aahat   Aahat   Pey   Yeh  Dil ,  Machal  Jaata  Hai.

Jab Kabhi Chhukar  Guzarti  Hai ,  Hawaa  Tujhey
Mehakti Hai Saansein  ,  Aur Phool Khil Jaata Hai.

Aisa To Nahi Ki Teri Doori Ka Ehsas Nahi Mujhey
Aksar Ye Deewana Mom Ki Tarah Pighal Jata Hai.

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«Reply #23 on: March 02, 2011, 05:50:08 AM »
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thanx RSR....

Good Job Both Of You Manzil Ji N Shihab Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: March 02, 2011, 05:51:55 AM »
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pahli baar dekha aapka eisa reply geet ji....
or yakeen maaniye bht khushi hui.....
thanx for liking my effort....

Bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut umda priya ji...
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