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Akeli baitkar soch ne lagthi hun Kyun waqt ke saath sab kuch badaltha he Lekin phir bi kuch aisi baathein he Jo waqt beeth jaanepar bi nahin badalthi
Tasveer teri jo chupi he Meri in nigaahon mein
Pyaar tere liye jo chupi he Meri is dil mein
Haseen tere liye jo chupi he Meri in labon mein
Intizaar tere liye Jo chupi he Meri is jeevan mein
Har ek din soch thi rehethi hun Shaayad Waqt aisa aayega Jo teri khadmon ko meri aur phir se bada dega
Yahi soch kar baitthi hun Yahi soch mein rehethi hun ke shaayad shaayad Thum kabhi waapas aayega..
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saahill
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2011, 05:24:16 PM » |
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boht acha or sacha likha intzar kabhi ek sachai bankar reh jata hai
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2011, 05:26:01 PM » |
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Thank you saahil ji.....sahi farmaaya aapne
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saahill
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2011, 05:52:44 PM » |
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kyun chahte hain itna hum use jo chahat ko samjta nahi.
Shayad yahi dil ki nadaani hai jo ise saudaai kehte hain
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2011, 05:59:05 PM » |
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Zindagi tho ek jung hi tho he na saahil ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2011, 06:06:31 PM » |
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is jung ko jitna hi jindagi hai magar yeh jung akele nahi jeet sakte
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MANOJ6568
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2011, 06:06:56 PM » |
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NICE Akeli baitkar soch ne lagthi hun Kyun waqt ke saath sab kuch badaltha he Lekin phir bi kuch aisi baathein he Jo waqt beeth jaanepar bi nahin badalthi
Tasveer teri jo chupi he Meri in nigaahon mein
Pyaar tere liye jo chupi he Meri is dil mein
Haseen tere liye jo chupi he Meri in labon mein
Intizaar tere liye Jo chupi he Meri is jeevan mein
Har ek din soch thi rehethi hun Shaayad Waqt aisa aayega Jo teri khadmon ko meri aur phir se bada dega
Yahi soch kar baitthi hun Yahi soch mein rehethi hun ke shaayad shaayad Thum kabhi waapas aayega..
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2011, 06:08:59 PM » |
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thank u manoj ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2011, 06:38:15 PM » |
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Akeli baitkar soch ne lagthi hun Kyun waqt ke saath sab kuch badaltha he Lekin phir bi kuch aisi baathein he Jo waqt beeth jaanepar bi nahin badalthi
Tasveer teri jo chupi he Meri in nigaahon mein
Pyaar tere liye jo chupi he Meri is dil mein
Haseen tere liye jo chupi he Meri in labon mein
Intizaar tere liye Jo chupi he Meri is jeevan mein
Har ek din soch thi rehethi hun Shaayad Waqt aisa aayega Jo teri khadmon ko meri aur phir se bada dega
Yahi soch kar baitthi hun Yahi soch mein rehethi hun ke shaayad shaayad Thum kabhi waapas aayega..
ache jazbaat hain
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MANOJ6568
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2011, 06:41:17 PM » |
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thank u manoj ji
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«Reply #10 on: August 28, 2011, 12:23:11 AM » |
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bahut khub Tamanna-- bas thode se Spellings par dhyan rakho Zazbat nikhar ayenyenge alfaazon me daad daaad
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«Reply #11 on: August 28, 2011, 12:25:00 AM » |
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bahut khub Tamanna-- bas thode se Spellings par dhyan rakho Zazbat nikhar ayenyenge alfaazon me daad daaad
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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2011, 06:46:40 AM » |
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Sarfira ji.. I know...meri spellings kuch galat he....lekin kya karun..mein kabhi hindi seeki nahin....bus aise hi..movies dek kar language samaj gayi..isiliye itni grammatical errors hothi he... shayaad is forum pe aap sab ki posts padkar...mein seek paavungi words use karne ki ada. Aap sab muje batha bi sakthe he..ke kahan muje change karna padega words...that will be helpful.. Learning never ends and i am open to learn as long as there are people to teach. thank you all....
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«Reply #14 on: August 28, 2011, 07:28:43 AM » |
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Thanks sanjeev ji for the support
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