*Shikwa-DILSE*

by Roja on August 25, 2008, 02:36:47 PM
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Ek sacchayi zindagi ka..
Jab ser pe maa baap ka chaya nahi hota, toh
pyar se kal tak rehne wale saat chodkar bhaag jaate hai.
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Apni aankhon ko udasi se bachane wale
Kabhi tu bhi royega mujhko rulane wale

Lahoo paavon se tere bhi tapkega zarur
Kante doosron ki raah mein bichane wale

Lab pe khamoshi rukh pe gam ke saaye
Kahan chain se rehenge dil ko dukhane wale

Kayi pattar sir pe tere bersenge dekhna
Aaina sach ka zamane ko dikhane wale

Waqt ka kya hai, kabhi dhoop kabhi chav
Raah batkenge khud hi raah dikhane wale

Tujhko hasil ho her mod Mohabbat ka
Dil "Roja" ka yu todke jane wale
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«Reply #1 on: August 25, 2008, 05:18:09 PM »
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Roja, sach shayad yahi hai ki jab andhera chhaata hai, tab apni parchaayi bhi sath chorh deti hai....isiliye kisi aur se kya shikwa !!

Lekin, ek sach ye bhi hai ki kai baar koi insaan kisi ka sath chorhne ya sath na dene ke liye majboor hota hai...wo majbooriyan jisko wo kisi ke saath share bhi nahin kar sakta/nahin karna chahta....magar hume jinse mohabbat hai, unke liye hum zubaan par koi bad-dua to nahin laa sakte na Usual Smile

Aapne bohot achcha likha hai Roja dear.... Applause Sorry, main ye sab kehne se khud ko rok na saki...If I have hurt you, I apologize.
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2008, 02:08:21 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 25, 2008, 05:18:09 PM
Roja, sach shayad yahi hai ki jab andhera chhaata hai, tab apni parchaayi bhi sath chorh deti hai....isiliye kisi aur se kya shikwa !!

Lekin, ek sach ye bhi hai ki kai baar koi insaan kisi ka sath chorhne ya sath na dene ke liye majboor hota hai...wo majbooriyan jisko wo kisi ke saath share bhi nahin kar sakta/nahin karna chahta....magar hume jinse mohabbat hai, unke liye hum zubaan par koi bad-dua to nahin laa sakte na Usual Smile

Aapne bohot achcha likha hai Roja dear.... Applause Sorry, main ye sab kehne se khud ko rok na saki...If I have hurt you, I apologize.

Is ka jawab mai baad main dungi Talat.. Magar dil mera jala hai.
Bad-dua toh hum kisi k liye nahi dete but fir b kahi na kahi dil mera jal raha hai.  tearyeyed

Nahi aapne hurt nahi kiya so dont apolofize dear. Jo laga keh dena chahiye.
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2008, 01:59:56 PM »
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Roja very touching lines dear... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2008, 05:30:15 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on August 26, 2008, 01:59:56 PM
Roja very touching lines dear... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks Honey dear
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2008, 02:47:56 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot hi achcha likha roja.....jitni tareef karun kam hogi....har sher behtreen har alfoz heera.......kya khoob kaha roja.....padh ke laga ki sach me kuch padha hai
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2008, 02:16:03 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 27, 2008, 02:47:56 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot hi achcha likha roja.....jitni tareef karun kam hogi....har sher behtreen har alfoz heera.......kya khoob kaha roja.....padh ke laga ki sach me kuch padha hai

Bahut bahut dhanyawad aapko hamara likha chand alfaz
pasand aaya. I am honoured
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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2009, 07:33:00 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 25, 2008, 02:36:47 PM
Ek sacchayi zindagi ka..
Jab ser pe maa baap ka chaya nahi hota, toh
pyar se kal tak rehne wale saat chodkar bhaag jaate hai.
*******************************************************

Apni aankhon ko udasi se bachane wale
Kabhi tu bhi royega mujhko rulane wale

Lahoo paavon se tere bhi tapkega zarur
Kante doosron ki raah mein bichane wale

Lab pe khamoshi rukh pe gam ke saaye
Kahan chain se rehenge dil ko dukhane wale

Kayi pattar sir pe tere bersenge dekhna
Aaina sach ka zamane ko dikhane wale

Waqt ka kya hai, kabhi dhoop kabhi chav
Raah batkenge khud hi raah dikhane wale

Tujhko hasil ho her mod Mohabbat ka
Dil "Roja" ka yu todke jane wale

Bahut Khoob Roja Ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 03, 2009, 02:38:26 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on February 21, 2009, 07:33:00 PM
Bahut Khoob Roja Ji

Thanks Rajesh Harish ji
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«Reply #9 on: June 04, 2009, 02:53:36 AM »
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Really great.
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«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2009, 05:44:49 AM »
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Quote from: sanjaytiwari on June 04, 2009, 02:53:36 AM

Really great.


Thanks Sanjai ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2009, 08:47:10 AM »
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Bahoot badi baat kah dali hai roja jee apne. har lafz mein haqiqat hai. shayad ye hi duniya hai, ye hi zindagi hai. yad fir isi duniya ki jindagi hai.....
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«Reply #12 on: June 11, 2009, 09:16:38 AM »
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Very touching Roja Dear.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: July 31, 2009, 01:56:14 PM »
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Quote from: qayda on June 11, 2009, 08:47:10 AM
Bahoot badi baat kah dali hai roja jee apne. har lafz mein haqiqat hai. shayad ye hi duniya hai, ye hi zindagi hai. yad fir isi duniya ki jindagi hai.....

Thanks for reading me Qayda ji
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«Reply #14 on: July 31, 2009, 01:56:49 PM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on June 11, 2009, 09:16:38 AM
Very touching Roja Dear.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks dear JJ
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