*Shikwa-DILSE* -Panna 2:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

deepika_divya

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«Reply #15 on: August 01, 2009, 04:53:48 AM »

They way you expresed your this creation shows the real feelings of you life ....

Very Well Expressed ! Moreover I m speech less....


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Roja

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Re: *Shikwa-DILSE*

«Reply #16 on: August 04, 2009, 05:59:44 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on August 01, 2009, 04:53:48 AM

They way you expresed your this creation shows the real feelings of you life ....

Very Well Expressed ! Moreover I m speech less....

Thanks dear for reading me


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Pooja

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Re: *Shikwa-DILSE*

«Reply #17 on: August 20, 2009, 10:28:36 PM »

Quote from: Roja on August 25, 2008, 02:36:47 PM

Ek sacchayi zindagi ka..
Jab ser pe maa baap ka chaya nahi hota, toh
pyar se kal tak rehne wale saat chodkar bhaag jaate hai.
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Apni aankhon ko udasi se bachane wale
Kabhi tu bhi royega mujhko rulane wale

Lahoo paavon se tere bhi tapkega zarur
Kante doosron ki raah mein bichane wale

Lab pe khamoshi rukh pe gam ke saaye
Kahan chain se rehenge dil ko dukhane wale

Kayi pattar sir pe tere bersenge dekhna
Aaina sach ka zamane ko dikhane wale

Waqt ka kya hai, kabhi dhoop kabhi chav
Raah batkenge khud hi raah dikhane wale

Tujhko hasil ho her mod Mohabbat ka
Dil "Roja" ka yu todke jane wale

All most ek saal baad is kavita per najar parri hai, Sorry Roja!!

ek ek shabd kaya kamaal ka likha hai... dil khush ho gaya!! bahoot khoob!!


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Pooja

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Re: *Shikwa-DILSE*

«Reply #18 on: August 20, 2009, 10:29:03 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on August 25, 2008, 05:18:09 PM

Roja, sach shayad yahi hai ki jab andhera chhaata hai, tab apni parchaayi bhi sath chorh deti hai....isiliye kisi aur se kya shikwa !!

Lekin, ek sach ye bhi hai ki kai baar koi insaan kisi ka sath chorhne ya sath na dene ke liye majboor hota hai...wo majbooriyan jisko wo kisi ke saath share bhi nahin kar sakta/nahin karna chahta....magar hume jinse mohabbat hai, unke liye hum zubaan par koi bad-dua to nahin laa sakte na Usual Smile

Aapne bohot achcha likha hai Roja dear.... Applause

Sorry, main ye sab kehne se khud ko rok na saki...If I have hurt you, I apologize.

Very True Celmira!!!


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madhuwesh

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Re: *Shikwa-DILSE*

«Reply #19 on: August 20, 2009, 10:43:25 PM »

Bahut khoob Roja ji,really touching ,midblowing creation. icon_thumleft


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Roja

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Re: *Shikwa-DILSE*

«Reply #20 on: September 06, 2009, 03:32:58 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on August 20, 2009, 10:28:36 PM

All most ek saal baad is kavita per najar parri hai, Sorry Roja!!

ek ek shabd kaya kamaal ka likha hai... dil khush ho gaya!! bahoot khoob!!

Aap ne pada aur tarif kiya yehi hi mera gift mila jaisa feel hua didi... Thanks for reading me dear.


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Roja

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Re: *Shikwa-DILSE*

«Reply #21 on: September 06, 2009, 03:33:45 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on August 20, 2009, 10:43:25 PM

Bahut khoob Roja ji,really touching ,midblowing creation. icon_thumleft

Thanks dear Madhu


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javedarshad

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Re: *Shikwa-DILSE*

«Reply #22 on: September 06, 2009, 11:56:42 PM »

Apni aankhon ko udasi se bachane wale
Kabhi tu bhi royega mujhko rulane wale

Lahoo paavon se tere bhi tapkega zarur
Kante doosron ki raah mein bichane wale

Lab pe khamoshi rukh pe gam ke saaye
Kahan chain se rehenge dil ko dukhane wale

Kayi pattar sir pe tere bersenge dekhna
Aaina sach ka zamane ko dikhane wale

Waqt ka kya hai, kabhi dhoop kabhi chav
Raah batkenge khud hi raah dikhane wale

Tujhko hasil ho her mod Mohabbat ka
Dil "Roja" ka yu todke jane wale

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Bahut khoob Roja Dear

mager main tumhari is baat se ittefaq nahin kerta ke man baap ke jate hi sab ne munh phair liya.
aik baat bas kahunga , jo chahene wale hoote hai aur belus hoote hain , woh na kisi ke ke jane se jate hain na kisi ke milne se jalta hai, woh to bas tumhare they , hain aur rahaingay. ab tumhara farz hai ke tum unhain kaise dekhti ya deal kerti ho, waise aik baat ha kabhi taali aik hath se nahin bajti hai,

Woh kia doosron ke aansu poonchain gay
Ankhain ghamzadah aur daman ter rahte hain

javed


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madhuwesh

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Re: *Shikwa-DILSE*

«Reply #23 on: September 07, 2009, 12:00:16 AM »

Wah wah bahut khoob Javed ji,really touching and midblowing creation.

:clapping:excellent


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