sisak rahi hai tanhaai!!

by Pooja on September 22, 2005, 09:07:15 PM
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dard ki paribhasha, sirf itani hi samjh aai
juban ho gai bejuban, ankhein smunder baha laai
Ek lava dil mai muchlata hai,
andheron mai kahi, sisak rahi hai tanhaai!!
Registaan ki ret jaise ho gai hai kismaat,
unse milan, ban gai jaise mrigchika si parchaai!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2005, 05:25:33 AM »
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dard ki paribhasha, sirf itani hi samjh aai
juban ho gai bejuban, ankhein smunder baha laai
Ek lava dil mai muchlata hai,
andheron mai kahi, sisak rahi hai tanhaai!!
Registaan ki ret jaise ho gai hai kismaat,
unse milan, ban gai jaise mrigchika si parchaai!!!!
Very Nice Pooja ji

Dard me lazzat buhat
Ashko me ranaai buhat
Ae gham-e-hassti teri duniya passand aai buhat:(
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2005, 11:25:44 AM »
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bahut khoob pooja jee
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2005, 01:53:30 PM »
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shukariyan shami and salma!!!

Zindagi ne na diya sath kabhi, bhir bhi mere sath rahi
Uth uth kar giri kismat, phir bhi meri yah sans rahi!!
Waise to vishwaas ke layak kuch bhi nahi
phir bhi tere laut aane ki ek aass rahi!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2005, 06:04:44 PM »
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wow pooja and shami ji...

aas ke diye ki roshni deemi parti gayi,
tanhai apne panje me hume jagarti gayi,
unone to basa liya ek naya jahan yaha,
aur mai thi jo pal pal judai me marti rahi!
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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2005, 06:37:29 PM »
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Yaad rah jaati hai aor waqat gujar jaata hai
Dekhte hi dekhte chaman ujad jaata hain
Wakt ke haaton ka khilona hai ye insaan
saalo ka sath, kis kadar insaan bhool jaata hai!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 24, 2005, 05:12:00 AM »
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-- Bahot achhe Pooja --

Nahi bhoolata gumey dil ko koi,
ek shul si chubhi raheti hai koi,
Nahi chahte fir bhi yaad ate ho,
Aisa dard de gaya hai koi!

--- BENAM -------
Banda majboor hai mahobaat main teri,
Warna jhukana nahi fidarat main meri!
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«Reply #7 on: September 24, 2005, 06:20:22 AM »
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-- Bahot achhe Pooja --

Nahi bhoolata gumey dil ko koi,
ek shul si chubhi raheti hai koi,
Nahi chahte fir bhi yaad ate ho,
Aisa dard de gaya hai koi!

--- BENAM -------
Banda majboor hai mahobaat main teri,
Warna jhukana nahi fidarat main meri!
Tum phool khilao aankhon say
Sawan bersao zulfon say

Iss shaher kay log tu bholay hein
Behal jaatay hein chand harfon say

Man ke dharty piasi hay
Barish na hoee hay barson say

Jab apnay he ban jayein ghair
Ho shikwa kiyunker logon say

Iss dunya mein he rehna hay
Ghabra na dukh kay sholon say
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«Reply #8 on: September 29, 2005, 05:18:35 PM »
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bohat khoob pooja ji,benam,meena sis and shami aapne bhi bohat acha likha hai Usual Smile .
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«Reply #9 on: September 29, 2005, 06:43:25 PM »
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bahoot khoob BeNam and shami..

shukariyan nidhi,, app bhi kuch likh kar jaati to acha lagta!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 30, 2005, 02:20:57 PM »
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U r most welcome Pooja ji.

"Sisak rahi hain tanhaaiyan kaise,aake zara dekh to.......,
     chal rahi hain saanse kaise tere intezar me,ek nazar dekh to,
      main kabse is raah-e-judaai pe khadi hui hoon jahan bichde the,
      tujhe dhoond aankhe thak gayi hain,ab to aake mujhe thham lo."
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«Reply #11 on: September 30, 2005, 09:55:12 PM »
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wowow bahoot khoob nidhi
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«Reply #12 on: October 12, 2005, 04:24:48 PM »
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woh sookhi rait darya ki akeli reh gai he
kahan mojein jaati hai yeh pahely reh gai he!!!

hawa ki aik sargoshi pe muthi khol di main ne
woh jugno ab kahan he bas hathaily reh gai he!!!

bara khamosh jhonka tha magar yeh shor barpa he
keh khushbo se juda ho kar chambaily reh gai he!!!

woh jis ne saaf paani mein utarte khud ko dekha tha
wohi jhurmat se bichri ik sahaily reh gai he!!!

jahan kache gharoon ka dukh samjhne wale rehte hon
shehr mein kon si aisy hawaily reh gai he!!!
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«Reply #13 on: October 12, 2005, 04:29:45 PM »
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super duper likha hai sabne......really bahut hi acha likha hai sabne...padh kar bahut acha laga. Keep the gud work cuming everyone
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«Reply #14 on: October 12, 2005, 04:50:58 PM »
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Thanks nikki!!!
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