Sunoge Mera Haal To Tardap Jaaoge,..

by Jaanasheen on June 20, 2006, 08:22:09 AM
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Dum Labon Par Hai Agar Ab Bhi Nahi Aaoge,..
Laash Paaoge Meri Mujhko Nahi Paaoge,..
Yahi behtar Hai Mera Haal Na Poocho Mujhse,..
Tum Mera Haal Haal Sunoge To Tardap Jaaoge,..

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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2006, 08:33:03 AM »
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Mera Haal Dekh Kar Saare Log Mere Haal Pe Haste Hain,..
Kya Tere Sheher Mein Sitam Gar Aise Zaleem Log Bhi Rehte Hain,..

Tere Pyaar Mein Loot Gayi Jawaani Tujhse Shikwa Hai Na Gilaa,..
Tujhe Maine Apna Samjha Tha,Mujhe Tu Bhi Nahi Milaa,..

Teri Yaad Mein Aansoon Meri Aankh Se Behte Hain,..
Kya Tere Sheher Mein Sitam Gar Aise Zaleem Log Bhi Rehte Hain,..

Main Kaise Bhoolaaon Tujhko Teri Yaad Sataati Hai,..
Furqat Mein Sanam Ye Yaad Teri Din Raat Rulaati Hai,..

Teri Yaad Ke Nashtar Mere Dil Mein Khatakte Hain,..
Kya Tere Sheher Mein Sitam Gar Aise Zaleem Log Bhi Rehte Hain,..

Tere Naam Pe Sadke Jawaani Tera Pyaar Mera Imaan,..
Jo Chahe Tu Karle Sitam Ab, Ya Chahe Le Le Jaan,..

Pyaar ke Rogi Yaar Ka Har Gham Haskar Sehte Hain,..
Kya Tere Sheher Mein Sitam Gar Aise Zaleem Log Bhi Rehte Hain,..

Teri Yaad Mein Dar Dar Bhatkoon Tujhko Dhoond Raha Hoon Main,..
Tera Pata Main Thandi Hawaa Se Khusboo Pooch Raha Hoon Main,..

Pheeron Main Aise Jaise Deewaane Log Phirte Hain,..
Kya Tere Sheher mein Sitam Gar Aise Zaleem Log Bhi Rehte Hain,..

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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2006, 08:35:48 AM »
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superbbbbbb Jaanasheen ji....bahut hi pyara likha hai aapne
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2006, 09:26:18 AM »
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wow Azeem bhai bahut khub likha aapne ......great job...........
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«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2006, 12:14:56 PM »
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Beautifully written Azeem bhai and Thanks for sharing a nice Ghazal....


Kaisa haal hai humara, ab naa pucho humsey,
phir sey woh kahaani ab na suna payegey...
Kisney kiya hai yu bedardi sey katl humara,
Us Kaatil kaa naam na hum bata payegey....

Woh jo meri dhadkan mey basta tha kabhi,
Merey khawabon mey jiska har pal basera tha,
Woh jo kehta tha jaan bhi dey jaunga tujhey,
Jis sey rishta meri sanson ka bahut ghera tha....

Bewafaii uski hum duniya ko nahin sunayegey,
yeh dard dil key coney mey daba jayegey....
Jo keh di yeh kaahani humney zamaney sey,
Pyar karney waley sabhi log tadap jayegey...

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«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2006, 12:39:31 PM »
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Wah Wah kya khoob likha Azeem bhai and Shikha
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«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2006, 12:46:24 PM »
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very nice janasheen ji & shikha ji.........

 ise dard samjhu ya samjhu khuskismati apni ki
 woh mere dard-e-dil per wah wah karke chale gaye.

.................@fahi@.....................
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«Reply #7 on: June 22, 2006, 10:40:44 AM »
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Thanks a lot Gaurav and PJAG
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«Reply #8 on: June 29, 2006, 06:02:46 AM »
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superbbbbbb Jaanasheen ji....bahut hi pyara likha hai aapne


Shukriya Nikki Ji,..
Gar App Kuch Likh Dete To Seekhne Ka Maukha Milta,..
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2006, 06:04:32 AM »
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wow Azeem bhai bahut khub likha aapne ......great job...........


Shukriya Ranjana Sis,..

Apni Tanhaai Mein Mashroof The Hum,..
Aaj Muddat Baad Kisi Ne Pukaara Hai,..
Ek Pal Ke Liye To Sochne Lage,..
Kya Ye Naam Hamara Hai,..
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«Reply #10 on: June 29, 2006, 06:15:04 AM »
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Beautifully written Azeem bhai and Thanks for sharing a nice Ghazal....


Kaisa haal hai humara, ab naa pucho humsey,
phir sey woh kahaani ab na suna payegey...
Kisney kiya hai yu bedardi sey katl humara,
Us Kaatil kaa naam na hum bata payegey....

Woh jo meri dhadkan mey basta tha kabhi,
Merey khawabon mey jiska har pal basera tha,
Woh jo kehta tha jaan bhi dey jaunga tujhey,
Jis sey rishta meri sanson ka bahut ghera tha....

Bewafaii uski hum duniya ko nahin sunayegey,
yeh dard dil key coney mey daba jayegey....
Jo keh di yeh kaahani humney zamaney sey,
Pyar karney waley sabhi log tadap jayegey...

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Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Shikha Sis,..
Lage Raho,..

Jaa Rahe Hain Woh Dekho Hume Tanhaa Chordkar,..
Jo Kabhi Dil Mein The Aaj Jaa Rahe Hain Dil Ko Tordkar,..

Bahoot Armaan Tha Mera Ke Uske Saath Apna Ghar Basaaoon,...
Uski Bahon Ki Panaah Lekar Main Koi Sapne Sajaaoon,..

Khawaab Jo Dekhe The Maine Sab Toot Gaye,..
Apne Jo Kabhi The Mere Sab Rooth Gaye,...

Sach Kehte The Dost Mere Ke Mohabbat Na Karna,..
Jo Karta Hai Mohabbat Usko Pardta Hai Be-Maut Marna...

Thukraa Kar Baatein Doston Ki Maine Us Bewafaa Se Mohabbat Ki,..
Aur Wo Be-Rehem Aisi Nikli Ke Usne Sirf Ashikon Ki Chahat Ki,..

Hamari Chahat Ko Dekh Kar Pathar Bhi Aansoon Bahaane Lage,..
Dushman Bhi Mere Gham Dekhkar Mujhe Gale Se Lagaane Lage,..

Magar Phir Bhi Uske Dil Mein Mere Liye Wafaa Na Thi,..
Waqt Aisa Aaya ke Mere Naam Se Hi Use Nafrat Hone Lage,..

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«Reply #11 on: June 29, 2006, 06:16:17 AM »
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Wah Wah kya khoob likha Azeem bhai and Shikha


Shukriya Bhai Gar App Kuch Likh Dete To Seekhne Ka Maukha Milta,..
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«Reply #12 on: June 29, 2006, 06:20:00 AM »
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very nice janasheen ji & shikha ji.........

 ise dard samjhu ya samjhu khuskismati apni ki
 woh mere dard-e-dil per wah wah karke chale gaye.

.................@fahi@.....................


Nice One PJAG,..

Dard To Ho Raha Hai Mujhe Bhi Ke Wo Waah Waah Kehke Jaa Rahe Hain,..
Magar Is Baat Ka Ehsaas Bhi Hua Ke Aah Aah Bhi Kehke Jaa Rahe Hain,..

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«Reply #13 on: July 01, 2006, 07:06:56 AM »
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Deewaano Se Ye Mat Poocho,..
Deewaano Par Kya Guzari Hai,..
Haan Unke Dilon Se Ye Poocho,..
Armaano Par Kya Guzri Hai,..

Auron Ko Peelaate Rehte Hain,..
Aur Khud Pyaase Reh Jaate Hain,..
Ye peene Waale Kya Jaane,..
Paimaano Pe Kya Guzari Hai,..

Malik Ne Banaya Insaan Ko,..
Insaan Mohabbat Kar Baitha,..
Wo Upaar Baitha Kya Jaane,..
Insaano Pe Kya Guzarti Hai,..

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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2011, 07:15:22 AM »
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bahut khoob azeem bhai ji bahut khoob likha....... Applause
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