<>*surmai shaam ki laalima*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 31, 2010, 05:52:04 AM
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Ek chhoti si koshish hai ye meri aur abhi ji ki sath likhne ki....
kaafi din baad humne sath likha hai kuch ..
umeed hai aap pasand karenge.......
<>*surmai shaam ki laalima*<>

surmai shaam ki laalima jab gehre utar aati hai
kya kahun bavre man ko kaise bharmati he
kashish ye mithi si uthti hai kabhi
to kabhi chubhkar dil ko behlati he

lakeerein khinch jati hain dilon k bich me
jaise patang hawa cheer jati he.
fir to nahi hota man me chain kahin,
bas aas ek jhalak ki reh jaati he

hawaein paas se tujhe chhukar guzar jati hai
or har kali jaise sugandh teri de jati he
unhe sochkar shuru hoti he subah ab meri,
oe hole se unke naam lekar shaam dhal jati he

raat bhi nagin ban jaise hume dasne chali aati hai
dushman sa lagta he savera jab bhor itni jaldi aati he
har ek kiran suraj ki tujhse durr karti jati hai   
dhak dhak dil karta he saans rukti jati he
har dhadkan k sath ye tera naam liye jati hai
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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2010, 07:00:26 AM »
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hmm badhiya lag raha he ...chalo bade dino bad sath likha tha ...achha bhi bana hai~
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«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2010, 07:01:24 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on October 31, 2010, 05:55:22 AM
Bahut Khub Kasak Sahihab Ji...

Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

thnx shihab ji...pasand karne k liye........
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«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2010, 07:02:00 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on November 01, 2010, 07:00:26 AM
hmm badhiya lag raha he ...chalo bade dino bad sath likha tha ...achha bhi bana hai~

oyeeeee hum sath likhen aur wo accha na bane ho sakta hai kya... tongue3
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