Taish- teri YAAD aati hai...!!

by ghayal_shayar on November 30, 2012, 03:21:48 PM
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Bazm ko is nacheez "taish" ka salaam, aaj muddatoN baad badi dil se koi nazm likhi hai, umeed karta huN sabko pasand aayegi....!! GhaltiyoN ke liye maaufi ka talabgaar rahungaa...

Tune hume faramosh kar diya,, par hum na tujhe bhulaa sake,, apno ne rusva kiya hume,, gair kahaaN ye dil dukhaa sake,, lakh aaye! gumoN ke baadal,, par in aNkhiyaN ko na rulaa sake,, ab hijr-e-yaar ki duaa karte haiN,, aakhir dushmani jo tehri asar se duaa ko,, aaj karte haiN hum v guzarish sabse,, eh ahal-e-bazm humko bhulaa do….!

Haan sach bhulaa do…!



Teri yaad aati hai,

Tere jane ka gum bhulaata hooN,
To tere aane ki yaad aati hai.
Jab saath hua karte the hum bhi,
Us zamaane ki yaad aati hai….!

Kabhi chubhati,kabhi gudgudati hai,
Teri yaad aati hai…!


Gum nahi ki usne hume bhulaya ,
Ranj hai ki khud ko tadpaaya hoga.
Mere khatoN ke harf mitane ko,
Na jane kitna ashq bahaaya hoga….!

Kabhi rulaati, kabhi haNsaati hai,
Teri yaad aati hai…!


Meri tasveer me jo aag lagaai hogi,
Apne haathoN ko v jalaaya hoga.
MehNdi jo saji hogi haathoN me,
Lahoo mere jigar ka usme aaya hoga….!

Kabhi jalaati, kabhi bujhaati hai,
Teri yaad aati hai…!


Kehte haiN waqt har gum bhar deta hai,
Ye soch kar, mera sanam rota nahi….!
Par koi samjhaaye us paglii ko,
Log kehte haiN,magar aisa hota nahi….!

Kabhi chupaati hai, kabhi dikhaati hai,
Teri yaad aati hai….!


Mera aks na jane kitne tukdoN me usne,
Apni un ankhiyoN se bahaaya hoga.
palkoN ke chilmann me na jaane,
kitne muddatoN mujhko chipaaya hoga…!

Kabhi bhulaati, kabhi apnaati hai,
Teri yaad aati hai….!
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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2012, 03:49:11 PM »
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Kasam se yaar sidhe dil par ja lagi..,
bahut achcha...
Aise hi dil ki bate lafjo me bunte raho...
God bless u..
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«Reply #2 on: November 30, 2012, 03:58:09 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoobsurat rachna .. padh ke lag raha hai sachche dil se likhi gayi hai... straight from the heart... bahut achcha likha hai aapne Taish ji... bahut bahut khoob....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: November 30, 2012, 04:10:24 PM »
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achha kalaam pesh kiya hai.Nazm likhna mushkil kaam hai lekin aapne bakhoobi likha hai .
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«Reply #4 on: November 30, 2012, 04:34:26 PM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #5 on: November 30, 2012, 05:10:11 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat nazm hai taish jee
mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #6 on: November 30, 2012, 06:56:10 PM »
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Quote from: Monu.verma on November 30, 2012, 03:49:11 PM
Kasam se yaar sidhe dil par ja lagi..,
bahut achcha...
Aise hi dil ki bate lafjo me bunte raho...
God bless u..

monu bhai ye meri khushkismati ki ye nazm aapke dil tak utar saki, aur aapko itni pasand aayi, yahi meri kaamyabi rahi, aapki duaa aur saath yuNhi kaayam raha to aage bhi aisa hi likhte rehne ki kosish karuNga...
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«Reply #7 on: November 30, 2012, 07:55:21 PM »
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wow.. its bful... hats off to you sir..
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«Reply #8 on: December 01, 2012, 03:05:27 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on November 30, 2012, 03:58:09 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoobsurat rachna .. padh ke lag raha hai sachche dil se likhi gayi hai... straight from the heart... bahut achcha likha hai aapne Taish ji... bahut bahut khoob....!!!

hriday sahab, humari kaamyaabi isi me hai ki aapke dilon ko dastak di is nazm ne, jaan kar bahut tassalli hui ki aapko ye nazm is darza pasand aayi, bas yahi dua rahegi ki aapka saath aage v yuNhi bana rahe... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: December 01, 2012, 03:13:21 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: December 01, 2012, 08:35:38 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 30, 2012, 04:10:24 PM
achha kalaam pesh kiya hai.Nazm likhna mushkil kaam hai lekin aapne bakhoobi likha hai .

hasan sahab, jahe naseeb jo aapko nazm ki humari ye kosish pasand aayi, bas humari aage v aapse yahi guzarish rahegi ki aap humara saath yunhi nibahate raheN...
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«Reply #11 on: December 01, 2012, 09:14:08 AM »
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wah wah wah wah
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«Reply #12 on: December 01, 2012, 11:37:57 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya baat hai lucky jee
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«Reply #13 on: December 01, 2012, 12:25:40 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #14 on: December 02, 2012, 01:24:39 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 30, 2012, 04:34:26 PM
beautiful

thanku sir ji, keep reading...
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