TAMAM RAAT.....

by sajid_ghayel on September 03, 2008, 06:44:30 AM
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TAMAM RAAT CHALAYEE YAD KI CHAK_KI
PEES GAYEE HAR KHUSHI SUBAH HONE TAK
AUR DHOOND_NE JO NIKLE UNHE BHARI DOPEH_RI ME
JHOOLAS GAYA MERA WAJOOD SHAM HONE TAK.

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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2008, 06:52:20 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on September 03, 2008, 06:44:30 AM
TAMAM RAAT CHALAYEE YAD KI CHAK_KI
PEES GAYEE HAR KHUSHI SUBAH HONE TAK
AUR DHOOND_NE JO NIKLE UNHE BHARI DOPEH_RI ME
JHOOLAS GAYA MERA WAJOOD SHAM HONE TAK.

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Waah.. Bahut Bahut khoobsurat alfaaz...
Bahut achha likha hai Sajid ji..
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2008, 06:56:44 AM »
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Ek chhoti si koshish...


Tamaam raat haddiyon ke dheir mein uljhi saansein,
Maathe ki lakeeron pe shikano ka aana jaana raha,
Tamaam raat garam bhatti sa jalta raha bekal mann,
Nayi Subaah ki chintaao ko bunta taana baana raha...
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2008, 07:01:51 AM »
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh its beautiful koshish mahi
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2008, 07:30:21 AM »
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Bohot khoob Sajid Ji and Mahiya !!  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2008, 08:32:17 AM »
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Sajid and Mahiya

Great work Applause

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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2008, 09:31:39 AM »
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bahoot khoob sajid aur mahiya...
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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2008, 05:16:21 PM »
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bohat tere wafawo ke sath hum chale
mohabbat ke armaan may har waqt hum jale
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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2008, 05:19:03 PM »
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mujhe to woh mila jiski abhi talash hi na thi
unhe to woh mila jiski unhe pyas hi thi


agar miljati unhe mohabbat to woh kushnaseeb hote
magar chalte hai woh rahe mohabbat ke saye pe ajj bhi
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2008, 03:37:35 AM »
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do kadam chale nahi ke shikwe shaikayte ho gayee
tu woh shamma hain jo benoor hi jal gayee
Quote from: mariashaik on September 03, 2008, 05:16:21 PM
bohat tere wafawo ke sath hum chale
mohabbat ke armaan may har waqt hum jale
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2008, 01:20:39 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat sajid, mahiya and Maria...

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«Reply #11 on: September 07, 2008, 01:40:59 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on September 03, 2008, 06:44:30 AM
TAMAM RAAT CHALAYEE YAD KI CHAK_KI
PEES GAYEE HAR KHUSHI SUBAH HONE TAK
AUR DHOOND_NE JO NIKLE UNHE BHARI DOPEH_RI ME
JHOOLAS GAYA MERA WAJOOD SHAM HONE TAK.

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Aah, yeh raat ki bechenee aur mera wujood, satya hai ki har raat meri isi tarah guzarti, par neend ki aankho se koi dushmani ho chali hai.
Sajid Ghayel ji, bas dua kijiye hum bahut jhulas gaye par woh hain ki kahin khamosh ro rahe hain.  tearyeyed
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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2008, 03:40:32 PM »
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yaha har koi laga hai firaaq ke alam may
ke hum  ko miljaye thodi jagahi un ke dil may
woh toh anjaan hai wafa ke bare may
hum hi hai jo talash e wafa karte hai
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«Reply #13 on: September 07, 2008, 03:45:10 PM »
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tanhiye ko kabhi tanhayi na samaj
yeh to woh alam hai jo hum ko hum hi kareeb lata hai
jab sath naho kisi humdum ka yeh woh   waqt hai jo
pichle lamho ko pass lata hai
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«Reply #14 on: January 04, 2009, 02:23:36 PM »
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Quote from: R-U-Sudha on September 07, 2008, 01:40:59 PM
Aah, yeh raat ki bechenee aur mera wujood, satya hai ki har raat meri isi tarah guzarti, par neend ki aankho se koi dushmani ho chali hai.
Sajid Ghayel ji, bas dua kijiye hum bahut jhulas gaye par woh hain ki kahin khamosh ro rahe hain.  tearyeyed

Beautiful work Sudha

Quote from: mariashaik on September 07, 2008, 03:40:32 PM
yaha har koi laga hai firaaq ke alam may
ke hum  ko miljaye thodi jagahi un ke dil may
woh toh anjaan hai wafa ke bare may
hum hi hai jo talash e wafa karte hai

Quote from: mariashaik on September 07, 2008, 03:45:10 PM
tanhiye ko kabhi tanhayi na samaj
yeh to woh alam hai jo hum ko hum hi kareeb lata hai
jab sath naho kisi humdum ka yeh woh   waqt hai jo
pichle lamho ko pass lata hai

Beautiful thoughts maria plz keep writing and also open new thread very good work
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