Tamam Umr Tujhse Door Rahe (Neelu)

by waheed_rose2004 on October 29, 2004, 10:31:09 AM
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Tamam Umar Zindagi Se Door Rahay,
Teri Khushi Kay Liye Tujhse Door Rahay,
Ab Is Say Badkar Wafa Ki Saza Kya Hogi
Kay Tere Hokar Bhi Tujhse Door Rahay!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 30, 2004, 03:15:57 PM »
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tum door ja kar jo itna itra rahe ho
kabi hum gaye to vapis bula na paoge
hum se roothe rehte ho hamesha
kabi hum rothe to mana na paoge. (not mine)
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2004, 04:08:48 PM »
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wow excellent ..........archana_gudia2k2..........
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«Reply #3 on: October 31, 2004, 06:02:37 PM »
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KHHOLL BUDIES...GOOD N FANTASTIC
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«Reply #4 on: November 01, 2004, 12:30:39 PM »
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dard ke nagme khushi se gun-guna-e ja rahi hu,
   main kisi ke dard ko sine se lagaye ja rahi hu,
ho na jaye wo kahi badnaam aanso-o se mere
   isi liye main gham ko tabbassum main daba-e ja rahi hu!!!
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«Reply #5 on: November 01, 2004, 12:41:46 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Archana..

Great...
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tum door ja kar jo itna itra rahe ho
kabi hum gaye to vapis bula na paoge
hum se roothe rehte ho hamesha
kabi hum rothe to mana na paoge.
"

Good one..

Dard koo Aaapnay Tabbassum may tabdeel kardeyaa...

Ques...
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«Reply #6 on: November 01, 2004, 12:48:45 PM »
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ji sukhriya


Bare ajeeb hote hai yeh dard aur gham ke rishte bhi,
ke jis ko bhi dekhiye wahi apna sa dikhai deta hai!!!
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«Reply #7 on: November 01, 2004, 12:54:21 PM »
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Bahoot khooob..

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Badee ajeeb hote hai yeh dard aur gham ke rishte bhi,
ke jis ko bhi dekhiye wahi apna sa dikhai deta hai!!!
"

Dard he kaa Gham hai aur Gham kaa he dard hai...



Ques...
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«Reply #8 on: November 01, 2004, 01:14:10 PM »
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jin ko gham se kabhi gila na hua,
unse rabb bhi kabi juda na hua.

wo jo barso se juda hai muj se,
dil se mere kabhi juda na hua.

saamne aa gaye jab wo mere,
muj se jahir yeh gila bhi to na hua

do kadam par hi zindgani thi,
hum se teh ye faasla bhi na hua.

jo dil main hai keh daalo aaj,
phir na kehna ki saamna na hua.

kis tarha ka wo aadmi hoga
jo husn par kabhi fidda na hua!!!
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«Reply #9 on: November 01, 2004, 02:41:56 PM »
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nice one archana................

Main un se kah rahe hoon mujhe yaad kijiye
Kabhi meri yaad jin ki dharrkan huwa karti thee...
Dekho aaj ham un ki dunya me shamil hee nahin
Jin ki dunya kabhi bas ham se huwa karti thee......................
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«Reply #10 on: September 29, 2005, 01:12:09 PM »
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Wonderfull Archana...
ITS Great!!!!!
Keep it up!!!!
Woh Fidaa hoowe na hoowe, hum tho tumhari shayari par Fidaa ho gaye...


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jin ko gham se kabhi gila na hua,
unse rabb bhi kabi juda na hua.

wo jo barso se juda hai muj se,
dil se mere kabhi juda na hua.

saamne aa gaye jab wo mere,
muj se jahir yeh gila bhi to na hua

do kadam par hi zindgani thi,
hum se teh ye faasla bhi na hua.

jo dil main hai keh daalo aaj,
phir na kehna ki saamna na hua.

kis tarha ka wo aadmi hoga
jo husn par kabhi fidda na hua!!!
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«Reply #11 on: September 30, 2005, 02:10:34 PM »
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Wah waheed and archana ji,bohat khoob Usual Smile .
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2006, 05:02:59 AM »
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sabney bhut acha likha hai good work all.... waheed, archana ji... ques ji... and all others friends gr8...

Chehre se hata naqaba,
ki duniyan bhi jaane ki qayamat kya hai;
Ban sahil,
ki bin tere dariyan ka dharti se milna kya hai;
Ban badal,
ki bin tere sookhi dharti ki pyas buzna kya hai;
Ban qatil,
ki bin izhar-e-jigar yeh pyar-muhobbat kya hai!
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