Tamana..................................Rajan Kondal

by RAJAN KONDAL on March 23, 2017, 11:50:01 AM
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दोस्त तुम भूल चुके हो मुझे
मगर हम ना भूले  है तुझे

याद रखा है
हमने तुम्हारी हरइक बातों को

जब तुम हम से मिले थे
और जब तुम हम से जुदा हुए थे

तुम्हारे आने से पहले  भी हम तनहा थे
 और आज भी हम तनहा है

बस फर्क इतना है ।

पहले मरने की कोई वजहा ना थी
और अब जीने की तमन्ना नहीं है

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Dost  tum bhool chuke ho muje
Magar hum nah bhoole tuje

Yaad rakha hai
Hum ne tumari har ek baat ko

Jab tum hum se mile the
Aur jab tum hum se juda hue the

Tumare ane se phele bhi hum tanha the
Aur aj bhi hum tanha hai

Bas farq itna hai

Phele marne ki koi waja nahi thi
Aur ab jine ki tamana nahi hai


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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2017, 02:34:52 PM »
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बहुत खूब  जनाब वाह
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2017, 08:47:38 PM »
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kyaa baat bahut bahut umda. Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

दोस्त तुम भूल चुके हो मुझे
मगर हम नहीं भूले  है तुम्हें  naa bhoole hain tujhe
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«Reply #3 on: March 24, 2017, 01:30:09 AM »
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beautiful waah waah
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«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2017, 05:29:55 AM »
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Quote from: aarzoo-e-arjun on March 23, 2017, 02:34:52 PM
बहुत खूब  जनाब वाह

शुक्रिया अरजु जी
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«Reply #5 on: March 24, 2017, 05:33:49 AM »
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Quote from: surindarn on March 23, 2017, 08:47:38 PM
kyaa baat bahut bahut umda. Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

दोस्त तुम भूल चुके हो मुझे
मगर हम नहीं भूले  है तुम्हें  naa bhoole hain tujhe
Surindarn ji  shukriya hosla bardane ke liye aur maine correction kr di h jo line ap ne suggest kri thi jese ap ne kri thi bese bahoot achi lag rahi h thanks
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«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2017, 05:34:35 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 24, 2017, 01:30:09 AM
beautiful waah waah
Sukariya saini sir
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