tanha bana diya

by jh on December 20, 2004, 12:14:06 AM
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sab se chupa kar dard jo woh muskura diya
us ki hansi ne to aaj mujhe rula diya

lahje se uth raha tha har ik dard ka dhooan
chehra bata raha tha ke kuch ganwa diya

aawaz mein thahraw tha aankhoon main nami thi
or keh raha tha ke main ne sab kuch bhula diya

jane kya us ko logon se thi shikayatein
tanhaiyon ke desh main khud ko basa diya

khud bhi woh hum se bichad kar adhura sa ho gaya
mujh ko bhi itne logon main tanha bana diya....
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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2004, 07:31:36 PM »
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"jane kya us ko logon se thi shikayatein
tanhaiyon ke desh main khud ko basa diya

khud bhi woh hum se bichad kar adhura sa ho gaya
mujh ko bhi itne logon main tanha bana diya....!


superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrb! bohot acha likha hai! very touching.
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jh
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2004, 12:45:59 AM »
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thx meena
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jh
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2004, 12:57:19 AM »
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Dil ko har waqt tassali ka guma hota hai,
Dard hota hai magar na janey kahan hota hai !

Aap be-reham hi sahi, baat to kijiye mujhse,
Kuch na kahney se muhabbat ka guma hota hai !

Aap aayen to sakoon, aap na aayen to sakoon,
Dard me dard ka ehsaas kaha hota hai!
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Meena
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2004, 05:28:39 PM »
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nice nice!

 :D
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immi
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2004, 05:34:48 PM »
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Nice JH !!
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«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2004, 05:37:10 PM »
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sab se chupa kar dard jo woh muskura diya
us ki hansi ne to aaj mujhe rula diya

lahje se uth raha tha har ik dard ka dhooan
chehra bata raha tha ke kuch ganwa diya

aawaz mein thahraw tha aankhoon main nami thi
or keh raha tha ke main ne sab kuch bhula diya

jane kya us ko logon se thi shikayatein
tanhaiyon ke desh main khud ko basa diya

khud bhi woh hum se bichad kar adhura sa ho gaya
mujh ko bhi itne logon main tanha bana diya....



nice wrk jh  :arrow:
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jh
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«Reply #7 on: December 24, 2004, 04:52:15 AM »
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thx immi meena myheart
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nishita
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«Reply #8 on: December 24, 2004, 07:49:24 AM »
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wah jhallo bhaiyya and meena
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khirbar
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«Reply #9 on: December 24, 2004, 09:10:23 AM »
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hi Usual Smile



ITNA BHI NA HO SEHAN KAY DAR TAK MAIN POHANCH KAR
DAR KHOLON TO DARWAISH-E-DUA GO HI CHALA JAYE..

 bye take care
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