~ ~ ~ Tanha....

by thinkhattk on November 25, 2009, 06:15:45 AM
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Dard jab tune diye he to gila kese karu,
aksar chalte rahe he safar me tanha,
yahi soch k ye muqammal tha safar jo mene kiya....
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«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2009, 06:24:49 AM »
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Dard jab teri ataa hai to gila kis se karein
Zakhm jab tune diya hai dawaa kis se karein
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2009, 06:25:53 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Deevangi ji,very touching n lovely creation.excellent.keep it up
 Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2009, 07:38:56 AM »
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Very Nice Devangiji  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2009, 07:47:42 AM »
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very nice creation..riyaz or pankaj ji.... Clapping Smiley
thanku mudhu ji....
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«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2009, 07:51:17 AM »
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Thanks Devangiji
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2009, 08:22:45 AM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on November 25, 2009, 06:15:45 AM

Dard jab tune diye he to gila kese karu,
aksar chalte rahe he safar me tanha,
yahi soch k ye muqammal tha safar jo mene kiya....

Nice one Devangi JI
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«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2009, 10:18:21 AM »
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Nice Devangi Ji And Good Response Riyaz JI And Pankaj JI
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«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2009, 10:21:37 AM »
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Thnaks Rishi Bro
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«Reply #9 on: November 28, 2009, 07:33:13 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooooooob Devangi Ji.. Jazzbaaton Ko Behad khubsoorati Ke sath Chand Alfaazon Me Sameta Hai aapne.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #10 on: November 28, 2009, 07:40:14 AM »
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thanks rishi ji or viky ji..
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«Reply #11 on: November 28, 2009, 10:07:47 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Bakhubi badi lagan se tay kiya hai
Dard ka ye tanhaa safar behna tune....
Bas ab aur nahi seh dard tanha tu
Dhund le koi hamrah-humsafar naya tu

Quote from: thinkhattk on November 25, 2009, 06:15:45 AM

Dard jab tune diye he to gila kese karu,
aksar chalte rahe he safar me tanha,
yahi soch k ye muqammal tha safar jo mene kiya....
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«Reply #12 on: November 29, 2009, 10:11:33 AM »
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VERY GOOD KOYAL JI.... Clapping Smiley
R U GUJU??
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«Reply #13 on: December 04, 2009, 10:36:03 AM »
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Thanks Dewangi-di....tariff k liye....
I know Gujraati some some....
I belong to village on border of Gujraat and Rajasthan.


Quote from: thinkhattk on November 29, 2009, 10:11:33 AM
VERY GOOD KOYAL JI.... Clapping Smiley
R U GUJU??
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