"Tanhaa Hoe Gayi" -SKY-

by SkykiTears on March 10, 2012, 05:14:07 AM
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Duniya Se Kehti Rahi Main,
Gir Ta Hai Joe Muhabbat K Kunwe May,
Us Se Zayada Pagal Koi Aur nahi.

Aaj Un Pagalon May Main Bhi Shamil Hoe Gayi.

Nah Maanti Thi Main,
Jab Kehti Thi Duniya,
Sab Ek Jeise Nahi.

Aaj Main Bhi Is Baat Koe Maan Ne Lagi.

Nah Khayi Taras Maine,
Un Do Dilon Par,Jab Duuriyan Aayi.

Aaj In Duuriyon K Beach Main Tanha Hoe Gayi.
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2012, 05:15:32 AM »
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bohut khuub our sahi kaha apne very nice lines
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2012, 05:30:44 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on March 10, 2012, 05:15:32 AM
bohut khuub our sahi kaha apne very nice lines
Shukriya Saahill Ji..
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2012, 06:44:16 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2012, 06:48:14 AM »
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Kya kahne SKY
acche ehsaas bayaan kiye hai.. Applause

Aapka sign. accha laga mujhe.

Gir Ta Hai Joe Muhabbat K Kunwe May,
Us Se Zayada Pagal Koi Aur nahi.

Aaj Un Pagalon May Main Bhi Shamil Hoe Gayi. Applause

Nah Maanti Thi Main,
Jab Kehti Thi Duniya,
Sab Ek Jeise Nahi.

Aaj Main Bhi Is Baat Koe Maan Ne Lagi. Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2012, 08:38:10 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on March 10, 2012, 06:48:14 AM
Kya kahne SKY
acche ehsaas bayaan kiye hai.. Applause

Aapka sign. accha laga mujhe.

Gir Ta Hai Joe Muhabbat K Kunwe May,
Us Se Zayada Pagal Koi Aur nahi.

Aaj Un Pagalon May Main Bhi Shamil Hoe Gayi. Applause

Nah Maanti Thi Main,
Jab Kehti Thi Duniya,
Sab Ek Jeise Nahi.

Aaj Main Bhi Is Baat Koe Maan Ne Lagi. Applause


Shukriya MKV Ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: March 10, 2012, 10:00:52 AM »
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Quote from: SkykiTears on March 10, 2012, 05:14:07 AM
Duniya Se Kehti Rahi Main,
Gir Ta Hai Joe Muhabbat K Kunwe May,
Us Se Zayada Pagal Koi Aur nahi.

Aaj Un Pagalon May Main Bhi Shamil Hoe Gayi.

Nah Maanti Thi Main,
Jab Kehti Thi Duniya,
Sab Ek Jeise Nahi.

Aaj Main Bhi Is Baat Koe Maan Ne Lagi.

Nah Khayi Taras Maine,
Un Do Dilon Par,Jab Duuriyan Aayi.

Aaj In Duuriyon K Beach Main Tanha Hoe Gayi.

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«Reply #7 on: March 10, 2012, 10:40:03 AM »
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sky ji--
aapne ache ehsaason ko shabd dene ki kosis ki hai
badhai ho--

magar mai kehna chahunga ki aap apne shabdon pr jara dhyan den bas--

khus rahen
muskurate rahen

aur han bachchon ko khus rahna chahie ji Usual Smile
aap bhi raho
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«Reply #8 on: March 10, 2012, 11:27:24 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on March 10, 2012, 10:40:03 AM
sky ji--
aapne ache ehsaason ko shabd dene ki kosis ki hai
badhai ho--

magar mai kehna chahunga ki aap apne shabdon pr jara dhyan den bas--

khus rahen
muskurate rahen

aur han bachchon ko khus rahna chahie ji Usual Smile
aap bhi raho

Shukriya Sarfira Ji..
Aur Advice Dene K Liye bhi shukriya.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: March 10, 2012, 11:36:38 AM »
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sarfira ki advice !!!!
kisi se kehna mat--sunenge to hasenge ki sarfire bhi advice dene lage aajkl tongue3

khus rahie
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«Reply #10 on: March 10, 2012, 11:37:42 AM »
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sarfira ki advice !!!!
kisi se kehna mat--sunenge to hasenge ki sarfire bhi advice dene lage aajkl tongue3

khus rahie
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Quote from: sarfira on March 10, 2012, 11:37:42 AM
sarfira ki advice !!!!
kisi se kehna mat--sunenge to hasenge ki sarfire bhi advice dene lage aajkl tongue3

khus rahie
chaliye theik hai Winking Giggle
lekin yeh batahiye aap ne apna naam kab badal diya? Winking Giggle Giggle :laughing hand::laughing hand:
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«Reply #12 on: March 12, 2012, 03:48:50 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 12, 2012, 03:48:50 AM
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Quote from: pankajwfs on March 12, 2012, 03:50:23 AM
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shukriya Sk Ji & pankaj Ji..
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