Tanhaai me hamari yaad aati to hog

by vaishnav on September 01, 2007, 04:37:42 PM
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Tanhaai me hamari yaad aati to hogi
ankh bnd krne pr ek jhalak paati to hogi,
rok logi sansen to bhi hr tadap bologi,
mere bina tm bhi thoda tnhapan pati to hogi.

rat ho jaati hogi gumnaam,
tnhaai rulati to hogi,
tm kh pao ya na kh paao,
meri yaad tmhe tdpati to hogi.

mai bhi hun tnha sochta hun kb mil payenge hm,
rahen hain juda kb jud payenge hm,
tera hmsafar tere saath nahi mana ab dil me jajbaat nahi,
mera pyar ki tees tumhe chubhan de jaati to hogi.

rhta hun saath tmse juda ho nahi pata,
ek anjana rista rok leta hai mujhko jo sayad pyaar hai mera tere liye,
tu kaise in sbko jhutla pati hogi,
sayad mujhme apna thoda sa aqs paati to hogi,

mujhe thoda hi sahi pr chahti to hogi,
mujhe thoda hi sahi pr chahti to hogi.......
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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2007, 06:03:29 PM »
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vaishnav G
bade ache emotions hain isme


Pyar to usse mein karti hun
kya usee bhi meri yaad aati hogi ?
Jab bhi aankh khulti hai meri
Dekhu tera hi aks aayene mein..
Kya usko bhi meri jhalak wahan dikhlayi deti hogi ??
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«Reply #2 on: September 18, 2007, 12:51:31 PM »
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najre inayat mere pe aati to hoggi,
es sisak unhe hamari chuan nka ehsaa dilati to hogi,
na bhiul payenge vo b hmaare sath gujare pl,
vqt se badti duri unhe b jalati to hogi......


bahut achcha likha aapne sahiba ji
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2007, 05:50:32 PM »
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thnku vaishnav G
lekin ap bohot short words likhe ,
padne me mushkil hui



:D :D :D
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2007, 04:29:20 PM »
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aap ka likha padha accha laga ... kuch aur likhye aur kuch naya kahiye  .... !! intezaar rahega
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«Reply #5 on: October 15, 2007, 08:29:40 AM »
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Tanhaai me hamari yaad aati to hogi [/b]
ankh bnd krne pr ek jhalak paati to hogi,
rok logi sansen to bhi hr tadap bologi,
mere bina tm bhi thoda tnhapan pati to hogi.

rat ho jaati hogi gumnaam,
tnhaai rulati to hogi,
tm kh pao ya na kh paao,
meri yaad tmhe tdpati to hogi.

mai bhi hun tnha sochta hun kb mil payenge hm,
rahen hain juda kb jud payenge hm,
tera hmsafar tere saath nahi mana ab dil me jajbaat nahi,
mera pyar ki tees tumhe chubhan de jaati to hogi.

rhta hun saath tmse juda ho nahi pata,
ek anjana rista rok leta hai mujhko jo sayad pyaar hai mera tere liye,
tu kaise in sbko jhutla pati hogi,
sayad mujhme apna thoda sa aqs paati to hogi,

mujhe thoda hi sahi pr chahti to hogi,
mujhe thoda hi sahi pr chahti to hogi.......[/quote]
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«Reply #6 on: October 20, 2007, 07:05:43 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB VAISHNAV BHAI..
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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2007, 02:19:30 PM »
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Great Work sabne Accha Likha Hai,.
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