tanhai

by hemlata singh on April 11, 2011, 08:43:08 AM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 3983 times)
hemlata singh
Guest
Reply with quote
jab tanhai deti hai dil main dastak,
  to saya bhi sath chod jata hai,
    kuch aisa hota hai us pal ka ehsas,
ki har pal ka ehsas chut jata hai,
   jannat ki khwahish rekhte hain jo log.
uneh ye jamin bhi nasib nahi hoti,
  qki kabhi-kabhi armanon ke saye main rehker bhi,
     khwabon ka sath choot jata hai
yun.. to dil se aapka khayal jata nahi,
   par jab bhi hote hain ham tanha,
       to gujra hua har lamha taja ho jata hai,
  yaad aata hai wo waqt jo peeche choot gya hai,
 tab lagta hai kabhi-kabhi sab kuch paa kar bhi dil tut jata hai.
jab ham sochte hain tumhare bare main .............,
     wo lamha, wo waqt wahin thahar jata hai,
            par jab hote hain haquikat se do-char,
to aankhen nam ho jati hain,
    or labon se hansi ka sath choot jata hai,
tanhai ke un palon main tum khush ho.. .
    yahi soch kar dil khush ho jata
dil ki gehriyon se dua hai tumhari khushiyon ki........
hamara to waqt tanhai main tumehin soch kar hi gujar jata hai
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
TANHAI by roomaharis in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai
tanhai by nishita in Miscellaneous Shayri « 1 2  All »
Tanhai by yasir_sensitive in Shayri-E-Dard
Tanhai by yasir_sensitive in Shayri-E-Dard
Tanhai by nishapoddar in Shayri-E-Dard
saahill
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 86
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
147 days, 17 hours and 30 minutes.
Posts: 18608
Member Since: Jun 2009


View Profile
«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2011, 08:55:02 AM »
Reply with quote
so nice poetry realy real pain with feelings keep writing
Logged
Mohammad Touhid
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 35
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
38 days, 12 hours and 35 minutes.

'I' 'Luv' d Way 'U' 'Forget' Me..!.!

Posts: 7160
Member Since: Aug 2009


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2011, 09:12:09 AM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah.. Hemlat aji, Bahut khub...

ish ghazal me aapki dard ki kahani bilkul saaf nazar aa rahi hai..

bahut hi dard se bhari poetry likhi hai aapne..

aise hi likhte rahiye..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
KOYAL46
Guest
«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2011, 09:20:07 AM »
Reply with quote
Very good poem Hemlataji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
SURESH SANGWAN
Guest
«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2011, 01:04:45 PM »
Reply with quote
 icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
devvender
Guest
«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2011, 04:05:45 AM »
Reply with quote
Peechey Choot Jate Hain sab Gile Shikwe,
Sirf Hamdam ki yadein kareeb Hoti Hain,
Kisi ki bewafai se gila mat karo mere dost,
asal mein tanahaiyan hi deewano ka naseeb hoti hain,
Logged
khwahish
WeCare
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 166
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
272 days, 6 hours and 11 minutes.

Posts: 11814
Member Since: Sep 2006


View Profile
«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2011, 06:20:52 AM »
Reply with quote
jab tanhai deti hai dil main dastak,
  to saya bhi sath chod jata hai,
    kuch aisa hota hai us pal ka ehsas,
ki har pal ka ehsas chut jata hai,
   jannat ki khwahish rekhte hain jo log.
uneh ye jamin bhi nasib nahi hoti,
  qki kabhi-kabhi armanon ke saye main rehker bhi,
     khwabon ka sath choot jata hai
yun.. to dil se aapka khayal jata nahi,
   par jab bhi hote hain ham tanha,
       to gujra hua har lamha taja ho jata hai,
  yaad aata hai wo waqt jo peeche choot gya hai,
 tab lagta hai kabhi-kabhi sab kuch paa kar bhi dil tut jata hai.
jab ham sochte hain tumhare bare main .............,
     wo lamha, wo waqt wahin thahar jata hai,
            par jab hote hain haquikat se do-char,
to aankhen nam ho jati hain,
    or labon se hansi ka sath choot jata hai,
tanhai ke un palon main tum khush ho.. .
    yahi soch kar dil khush ho jata
dil ki gehriyon se dua hai tumhari khushiyon ki........
hamara to waqt tanhai main tumehin soch kar hi gujar jata hai

Waaaah!!! Ek Kahani Si mehsoos Hui..

Bahut Khoob Hemlata Ji..Bahut Khoobsurat

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 12, 2024, 07:45:06 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.122 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8507 Real Poets and poetry admirer