~*~*~Tanhaiyan Mere Sath Thin~*~*~

by pankshivam on November 28, 2009, 11:39:48 PM
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Teri nafraton ki inteha pe meri muhabbat ki shuruaat thi...
Meri rusvaaiyon ki tadap tere dard ki saugaat thi...

Andheron me dhundhata raha apni parchaiyon ko...
Teri yaaden rulati rahin jab tanhaiyan mere sath thi...
~Pank~
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«Reply #1 on: November 29, 2009, 10:52:04 AM »
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Wah Wah!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!

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«Reply #2 on: November 29, 2009, 11:00:07 AM »
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NICE ONE PANKAJ JI.... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: November 29, 2009, 12:51:56 PM »
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Wah Wah!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!

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Shukriya Khwaish ji
NICE ONE PANKAJ JI.... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: November 29, 2009, 01:26:45 PM »
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Wah Kya Bat Hai Bhai Nice
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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2009, 01:47:57 PM »
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Wah Kya Bat Hai Bhai Nice
Thanks Bhai
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2009, 04:26:26 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Pank Bhai.. Lajawab likha hai Dost.. Applause



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«Reply #7 on: November 29, 2009, 09:00:38 PM »
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Teri nafraton ki inteha pe meri muhabbat ki shuruaat thi...
Meri rusvaaiyon ki tadap tere dard ki saugaat thi...

Andheron me dhundhata raha apni parchaiyon ko...
Teri yaaden rulati rahin jab tanhaiyan mere sath thi...
~Pank~

Wah bohat khub very nice  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: November 30, 2009, 06:34:08 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Pank Bhai.. Lajawab likha hai Dost.. Applause



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Shukriya Mann Ji
Wah bohat khub very nice  Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thanks Pari ji
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«Reply #9 on: November 30, 2009, 07:42:03 PM »
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Good Job Pankaj Bhai
Koshish Karta Hun Kuch
Galti Maaf Ho Bhai...

Meri Aankhein Dekhna Chahe Tum Hi Ko
   Ki Mere Liye To Sirf Zamil Tum Ho.
 
Kyun Kar Karun Aakhir Dard Se Shiqwa
  Mere Har Haal Mein Shamil Tum Ho.!

Thank Shihab Bhai
Ham To Hamesha Se Hi Aapke Fan Rahe Hain
Bahoot Khoob likha Aapne Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: November 30, 2009, 08:08:24 PM »
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Kya Bhai Aap Bhi Aaisa Kahenge Socha Na Tha
Really Bro Aapki Threads Mai Bahoot Shhiddat Se Observe Karta Raha Tha
Ek Ek Karke Yahan Se Sare Purane Dost Chale Gaye
Jinse Hamne Likhna Sikha tha
Kuch Aap Logo ne Sikhaya Aur Kuch Dard ne


Ab To Bs Dard Rah Gaya Hai...
Hamsafar To Chale Gaye Sath Chalte Chhalte...

Rah Gayi Hai Tanhaiyan Is Mehfil Me Fir Se...
Bs Ek Ummid Baki Rahi K Koi Aa Jaye Fir Sham Dhalte Dhalte...

~Pank~
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«Reply #11 on: November 30, 2009, 08:21:01 PM »
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Teri nafraton ki inteha pe meri muhabbat ki shuruaat thi...
Meri rusvaaiyon ki tadap tere dard ki saugaat thi...

Andheron me dhundhata raha apni parchaiyon ko...
Teri yaaden rulati rahin jab tanhaiyan mere sath thi...
~Pank~

  Wow thats so touching.... really nice work!!

Meri Ankhein Tarasthi Rahein, Or Dil Shiqayat Kartha Gaya,
Na Suni Tuhni Meri Dil Ki Shikayatein,
Na Diya Tuhne Mooka Meri Ankhon Ko De Darh Ka,
Terai Dho Lafzo kai Liye Tarasthi Rahein Main,
Teri Ek Muskurahat Kai Liye Tadapthi Rahein Main,
Terai Bin Kahein Teri Baath Main Samjh Gayi,
Teri Muskurahat kai Badlai Khud Main Anshoon Bahathi Rahein....
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«Reply #12 on: November 30, 2009, 08:58:37 PM »
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Maafi Chahta Hun Bhai Agar Aapka Dil Dukha Ho To
Par Really Bhai Main Inti Izzat K Kabil Nahi Hun
Aur Waise Bhi Asli Kamaal To Parne Wali Ki Aankhon Mein
Hota Hai...Khair

Aapne Bahut Khoob Likha Hai
Kya Jawaab Dun..!Chalo Koshish Karta Hun
Galti Maaf Ho....


Mehfilon Mein Bhi Tanhaai Mil Jaati Hai
Har Raah Bas Suni SunI Si Nazar Aati Hai.
 
Na Rakh Kisi Ke Sahaare Khud Ko .e .Dost
Zindagi To Apne Dum Par Bhi Jee Jaati Hai.!

Thank Shihab bhai

Jo dard de dil ko...
Aksar ham unhe hi pyar karte hain...

Jante hain tutega dil bhi unhi ke hathon....
Fir bhi kyun unpe aaitbaar karte hain...
~Pank~
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«Reply #13 on: November 30, 2009, 09:14:38 PM »
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  Wow thats so touching.... really nice work!!

Meri Ankhein Tarasthi Rahein, Or Dil Shiqayat Kartha Gaya,
Na Suni Tuhni Meri Dil Ki Shikayatein,
Na Diya Tuhne Mooka Meri Ankhon Ko DeDar Ka,
Terai Dho Lafzo kai Liye Tarasthi Rahein Main,
Teri Ek Muskurahat Kai Liye Tadapthi Rahein Main,
Terai Bin Kahein Teri Baath Main Samjh Gayi,
Teri Muskurahat kai Badlai Khud Main Anshoon Bahathi Rahein....

Thanks
Bahoot Khoob Likha Aapne Applause Applause Applause


Taraste rahe har pal,
Mila na ek lamha bhi hame tere pyar ka...

Hoti rahi bechain meri tanhaiya, teri ek jhalak pane ki khatir....
Band ho gayin meri aankhe, magar na aaya lamha tere deedar ka...

Hote samane agar to dikhate tapad apne dil ki...
Par na aaye kabhi aur na mila bhi labhi mauka mujhe izhaar ka...

Tut kar bhikhar se gaye aanhen bharte bharte...
Jaan le gaya waqt tere intzaar ka...

~pank~
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«Reply #14 on: November 30, 2009, 09:36:47 PM »
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Bahut khoob Pank ji,Shihab ji,Palkhi ji.excellent,kamaal ke likha aap sabhi ne .really touched. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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