|| Tanhayi...Priya...||

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Baad mehfil ke saath aayi fir tanhayi hogi...
raat tanha si fir tune bhi bitayi hogi..

wo mehkati shame, wo raunak fiza...
beete dino ki yaade tune bhi bhulayi hogi..

meri hi tarah tu bhi kisi ko tarsa hoga..
hijr ki sari rasme fir tune bhi nibahyi hogi..

jab kisi khawab ne palko par di hogi dastak..
dil ki sab khidkiya tune bhi chupayi hogi...

Baad mehfil ke saath aayi fir tanhayi hogi...
raat tanha si fir tune bhi bitayi hogi..
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«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2011, 10:11:27 AM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on June 24, 2011, 09:37:12 AM
Baad mehfil ke saath aayi fir tanhayi hogi...
raat tanha si fir tune bhi bitayi hogi..

wo mehkati shame, wo raunak fiza...
beete dino ki yaade tune bhi bhulayi hogi..

meri hi tarah tu bhi kisi ko tarsa hoga..
hijr ki sari rasme fir tune bhi nibahyi hogi..

jab kisi khawab ne palko par di hogi dastak..
dil ki sab khidkiya tune bhi chupayi hogi...

Baad mehfil ke saath aayi fir tanhayi hogi...
raat tanha si fir tune bhi bitayi hogi..

Bahuttt Bahuttt Khoob Priya Ji..

Har Ek As'haar lajawab!!

Bahut hi khoobsurat Jazbaat Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2011, 01:45:44 AM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on June 24, 2011, 09:37:12 AM
Baad mehfil ke saath aayi fir tanhayi hogi...
raat tanha si fir tune bhi bitayi hogi..

wo mehkati shame, wo raunak fiza...
beete dino ki yaade tune bhi bhulayi hogi..

meri hi tarah tu bhi kisi ko tarsa hoga..
hijr ki sari rasme fir tune bhi nibahyi hogi..

jab kisi khawab ne palko par di hogi dastak..
dil ki sab khidkiya tune bhi chupayi hogi...

Baad mehfil ke saath aayi fir tanhayi hogi...
raat tanha si fir tune bhi bitayi hogi..

very Impressive ... Very Touching ... Priya Ji!
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2011, 05:50:42 AM »
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nice one priya ji.............


ek chota jawab diya hu gour farmaiyega

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fir se baitha hu tanha tere jane ke baad
har pal bitaya hu akela tere jaane ke baad

nahi bhata ab to sawan aur bhado ka mahina
itna barsaya hu aansu tere jane ke baad

kaise bhula du har baat har lamha gujara hua
Khud ka naam bhulaya hu tere jaane ke baad

bahut tadpaya hai teri yaadon ne aksar mujhe
dil ne pukara , duhai ditere jane ke baad

har pal ek hi khwab tera aata hai mujhko
chain se so bhi nahi paya hu tere jane ke baad

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Raahi "the king of way"
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2011, 12:24:45 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on June 24, 2011, 09:37:12 AM
Baad mehfil ke saath aayi fir tanhayi hogi...
raat tanha si fir tune bhi bitayi hogi..

wo mehkati shame, wo raunak fiza...
beete dino ki yaade tune bhi bhulayi hogi..

meri hi tarah tu bhi kisi ko tarsa hoga..
hijr ki sari rasme fir tune bhi nibahyi hogi..

jab kisi khawab ne palko par di hogi dastak..
dil ki sab khidkiya tune bhi chupayi hogi...

Baad mehfil ke saath aayi fir tanhayi hogi...
raat tanha si fir tune bhi bitayi hogi..

good one manzil
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2011, 03:09:13 PM »
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Priya di,
3rd aur 4th shaer bahaut khaas rahe..
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!


Acha jawab likha hai Raahi jee..
Daad..
Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2011, 11:21:31 AM »
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bht bht shukria khwaish ji...

Quote from: khwaish on June 24, 2011, 10:11:27 AM
Bahuttt Bahuttt Khoob Priya Ji..

Har Ek As'haar lajawab!!

Bahut hi khoobsurat Jazbaat Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 26, 2011, 11:22:03 AM »
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shukria naresh ji...

Quote from: Anshumali on June 25, 2011, 01:45:44 AM
very Impressive ... Very Touching ... Priya Ji!
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«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2011, 11:23:17 AM »
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bht hi khoobsurat reply rahi ji...
bht bht khoob...
kalam pasand karne ka shukria...

Quote from: Rahi2001 on June 25, 2011, 05:50:42 AM
nice one priya ji.............


ek chota jawab diya hu gour farmaiyega

"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""
fir se baitha hu tanha tere jane ke baad
har pal bitaya hu akela tere jaane ke baad

nahi bhata ab to sawan aur bhado ka mahina
itna barsaya hu aansu tere jane ke baad

kaise bhula du har baat har lamha gujara hua
Khud ka naam bhulaya hu tere jaane ke baad

bahut tadpaya hai teri yaadon ne aksar mujhe
dil ne pukara , duhai ditere jane ke baad

har pal ek hi khwab tera aata hai mujhko
chain se so bhi nahi paya hu tere jane ke baad

""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""

Raahi "the king of way"
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«Reply #9 on: June 26, 2011, 11:23:55 AM »
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thanx alot sheba ji...

Quote from: Sheba on June 25, 2011, 12:24:45 PM
good one manzil
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«Reply #10 on: June 26, 2011, 11:24:34 AM »
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bht bht shukria rahim...
god bless u..

Quote from: -Rahim- on June 25, 2011, 03:09:13 PM
Priya di,
3rd aur 4th shaer bahaut khaas rahe..
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!


Acha jawab likha hai Raahi jee..
Daad..
Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2011, 11:58:56 AM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on June 24, 2011, 09:37:12 AM
Baad mehfil ke saath aayi fir tanhayi hogi...
raat tanha si fir tune bhi bitayi hogi..

wo mehkati shame, wo raunak fiza...
beete dino ki yaade tune bhi bhulayi hogi..

meri hi tarah tu bhi kisi ko tarsa hoga..
hijr ki sari rasme fir tune bhi nibahyi hogi..

jab kisi khawab ne palko par di hogi dastak..
dil ki sab khidkiya tune bhi chupayi hogi...

Baad mehfil ke saath aayi fir tanhayi hogi...
raat tanha si fir tune bhi bitayi hogi..

good one manzil ji
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«Reply #12 on: June 26, 2011, 12:03:18 PM »
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Bhuat Khob Manzil Ji
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«Reply #13 on: June 26, 2011, 12:05:34 PM »
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Priya Ji,

Waah..Waah..bahut khoob

Kya ghazal kahee hai. Tabeeyat khush
ho gayee aur maazee yaad aa gaya thodi
der ko.

Dili daad qubbol karen aur dheron badhayee bhee.

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«Reply #14 on: June 27, 2011, 06:14:51 AM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on June 26, 2011, 11:23:17 AM
bht hi khoobsurat reply rahi ji...
bht bht khoob...
kalam pasand karne ka shukria...


aap ko bhi tahnx priya di
jo aap ne mera chota sa jawab pasand kia
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