Tarq-e-taaluk ka bahaanaa chaahay

by Brijinder on July 01, 2006, 09:12:04 PM
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Tarq-e-taaluk ka bahaanaa chaahay
Khul kay shayad na bataanaa chaahay

Shub ko neechay say unsay faiNka pathhar
Din main karay khafa ab manaanaa chaahay

Har baat main lay kar raqeeb ka naam
Zabt mera woh aaj aazmaanaa chaahay

Ab to khul kay dil dukhaanaa chaahay
MaiN aaooN to uth kay jaanaa chaahay

AaooNgi baagh main paaNch bajay kay qareeb
Kahay usko aur mujhay sunaanaa chaahay

Bichaa daiN raah main khushioN kay phool
Ik baar jo woh dhar aanaa chaahay

Mahabbat aisa ik jazbaa hai “sagar”
Khirad ki gir_fut main na jo aanaa chaahay

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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2006, 02:55:09 AM »
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bahut khub ji .......
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2006, 04:19:20 AM »
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veri nice ..........urdu ke lafzo se aapne ise saja diya hai.

 rajdaaro ko to humne rok liya lekin
 apni nighao ko hi hum rok na paaye
do pal ka ishq,phir zindagi bhar ki judayi
 kismat likhi ahi aisi to koi kya kar paaye.

................@fahi@....................
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2006, 06:26:55 AM »
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Nice One Brijinder And PJAG,..

Gham Judaai Ka Seh Sehkar Zindagi Bhi Mujhse Judaa Hogayi,..
Ke Khud Mujhe Khabar Nahi, Ke Kis Ke Liye Jee Raha Hoon,..

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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2006, 08:19:53 PM »
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Thanx a lot to all of u for the appreciation of my poem.
Brijinder"Sagar"
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2006, 10:26:33 AM »
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Ur Welcome Again Brijinder./
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2006, 12:46:15 PM »
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CHA GAYE PATSHAHON CHA GAYE........
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2006, 08:25:03 PM »
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thanx a lot for the words of appreciation
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«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2006, 11:51:18 AM »
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Ur Welcome Brijinder Paaji,..
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«Reply #9 on: July 06, 2006, 08:43:01 PM »
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I am thankful to  you for the warm words of appreciation.
Brijinder"Sagar"
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«Reply #10 on: July 07, 2006, 12:22:36 PM »
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Ur Welcome Bhai,..
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