tera aana

by vikas2210 on February 18, 2006, 08:22:20 AM
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intezaar hai tere payar ka mujhe aaj bhi
aaegi tu laut kat yakeen hai mujhe aaj bhi

thukra diya maine maut ka bhi farman
saja kar baita hun apni kabar tere intezar mai aaj bhi

bahare aai aur laut gai khiza bhi aa kar chali gai
phul teri yaad ke taaza rakhe hai apni aansuon ki nami se aaj bhi

tu aaygi laut kar ek roz yakeen hai mujhe
saja kar baitha hun apni kabar mai aaj bhi.
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urs4evasomdev
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2006, 11:35:21 AM »
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bauhat acha vikas,
very nice feelings brought out ......
esp when u said

"tu aaygi laut kar ek roz yakeen hai mujhe
saja kar baitha hun apni kabar mai aaj bhi."

keep it up honey!
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nirbhay
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2006, 02:30:39 PM »
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Wah WAh WAH Shayar-e-vikas Khoob Bahut Khoob

Dil ke Alfaz dil mein chipa kar baitha hoon aaj bhi
Aazuon ki Mazar Bana kar baitha hoon aaj bhi

Lout aana tera nahi tha mumkin uss pal aaur aaj bhi
Tabb karta tha Gazalein parr kalam karta hoon aaj bhi

Dosti ke dino ka ehsaas zarraa gulfam hai aaj bhi
Jo gul nahi to kiya hua, doston ka aawaam hai aaj bhi


~! Nirbhay !~
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vikas2210
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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2006, 04:22:30 AM »
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thanks minu.. ....

u r really a good support.

tum chali aao agar aaj bhi
maiyat rok ke uttar jaoun
apni arthi se aaj bhi
muskura ke dekho jo ek baar
phir se jee jaoun aaj bhi
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2006, 04:33:33 AM »
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Quote from: "nirbhay"
Wah WAh WAH Shayar-e-vikas Khoob Bahut Khoob

Dil ke Alfaz dil mein chipa kar baitha hoon aaj bhi
Aazuon ki Mazar Bana kar baitha hoon aaj bhi

Lout aana tera nahi tha mumkin uss pal aaur aaj bhi
Tabb karta tha Gazalein parr kalam karta hoon aaj bhi

Dosti ke dino ka ehsaas zarraa gulfam hai aaj bhi
Jo gul nahi to kiya hua, doston ka aawaam hai aaj bhi


~! Nirbhay !~



woow neer bhai very good.

tere dil mai koi ehsas hai mere liye aaj bhi
yakeen hai mujhe tu karti ha yaad aaj bhi

wo lamhe jo guzare the saath kasak baaki ha aaj bhi
meri koi to baat yaad ha tujhe aaj bhi

karti to hogi tu mera intezaar har raat
yakeen hai mujhe mere payar pe aaj bhi

ab aa bhi jao jaane man aur na tadpao
nahi hai baaki zindgi mai aur saanse aaj ab
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2006, 04:44:22 AM »
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tere aane se kabhi hoti thi khushiya jaha ...........
aab kabhi aaker to dekh suni padi hai galiya teri.........
jaha hoti thi subah tere aane ki aahat se...
chaya hai aandhiyara waha chai hai ruswaiya bhi...........
tere khushbu se mehakta tha jo aangan kabhi .............
banger pada hai tere bager kabhi aakar to dekh yaha .....
tu gaya hai hume chodker uska gila na karenge..............
ek barr aaker to dekh humari kabr per hum uff tak na karenge...........
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vikas2210
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2006, 12:23:25 PM »
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tere aane se kabhi hoti thi khushiya jaha ...........
aab kabhi aaker to dekh suni padi hai galiya teri.........
jaha hoti thi subah tere aane ki aahat se...
chaya hai aandhiyara waha chai hai ruswaiya bhi...........
tere khushbu se mehakta tha jo aangan kabhi .............
banger pada hai tere bager kabhi aakar to dekh yaha .....
tu gaya hai hume chodker uska gila na karenge..............
ek barr aaker to dekh humari kabr per hum uff tak na karenge...........


tushar very good v v v good

yaar man kuch udaas hai kuch nahi likha jaa raha. jaa raha hun mai kuch dino ke liye .

bye......
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