tere aanchal se kabootar udd gya

by r.k on July 29, 2012, 07:36:08 PM
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tere aangan se kabootar udd gya
ye keh k wo chala gya

kitna pyara tha wo

kya rishta tha hmara unse

kuch din pehle tak wo hmara koi nahi tha
fr kitni jaldi ek sundar rishta bn gya

kitne sundar updesh the unke
jo hmari duniya badal gye

kanto pr bhi chalna seekh liya tha humne
unke pyar ne hme esa bna diya tha

fr pta nai kyon
tere aanchal se kabootar udd gya
ye keh kr chale gye wo
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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2012, 08:32:32 PM »
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Quote from: r.k on July 29, 2012, 07:36:08 PM
tere aangan se kabootar udd gya
ye keh k wo chala gya

kitna pyara tha wo

kya rishta tha hmara unse

kuch din pehle tak wo hmara koi nahi tha
fr kitni jaldi ek sundar rishta bn gya

kitne sundar updesh the unke
jo hmari duniya badal gye

kanto pr bhi chalna seekh liya tha humne
unke pyar ne hme esa bna diya tha

fr pta nai kyon
tere aanchal se kabootar udd gya
ye keh kr chale gye wo



r.k ji waise kaun chala gayaa?Huh?Huh?Huh?. kuch to hai jiski pardedaarii hai tongue3 tongue3
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2012, 12:37:26 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2012, 12:48:12 AM »
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Quote from: r.k on July 29, 2012, 07:36:08 PM
tere aangan se kabootar udd gya
ye keh k wo chala gya

kitna pyara tha wo

kya rishta tha hmara unse

kuch din pehle tak wo hmara koi nahi tha
fr kitni jaldi ek sundar rishta bn gya

kitne sundar updesh the unke
jo hmari duniya badal gye

kanto pr bhi chalna seekh liya tha humne
unke pyar ne hme esa bna diya tha

fr pta nai kyon
tere aanchal se kabootar udd gya
ye keh kr chale gye wo


ooh bahut acha likha hai aapne R.K. jee. lovely  Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2012, 02:57:40 AM »
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Shayad aap kisi buzurg ki baat baat kar raheN heN,
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2012, 05:32:15 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2012, 06:57:16 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2012, 07:02:19 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2012, 07:10:56 AM »
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khamosh aawaz ji,
nanad bahu ji,
Suman dii,
aarish Dr.Saini ji,
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mkv ji,
ripan dev ji,

aap sab ka bht bht shukriya, jinhone sarahaa.
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2012, 08:33:00 AM »
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bahut khub bahut hi badhiya likha janab apne........
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