~*~Tere Aane Ki Ummid~*~

by pankshivam on January 15, 2009, 10:35:12 PM
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Tere aane Ki ummid me ek Paigam Likha hai...

Ashko ki shyahi se tujhe salam likha hai,
Adhure se in khwabo me,
Rutha hua tera naam likha hai...

Aaj bhi tere intezar me raahen udas ho thi...
Tere na aane dard raha dil me, kuch soch ye aakhiri kalaam likha hai...

Tu kar khushiyo ki mehfile aabad,
Meri duaao ne ibadat me subho-sham likha hai...

Tu na aayega ye maloom na tha,
Shayad kismat ne meri ummido ka yahi aanjaam likha hai...

Beh rahi hai lahar dhadkano ki dhire dhire,
Usi ret pe mohabbat naam likha hai...

Tere Aane ki ummid me ek Paigam likaha hai...

~Pank~
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«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2009, 10:43:00 PM »
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Pank Ji,

Bahut hii khoobsurat Paigam likha hai icon_salut Usual Smile

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«Reply #2 on: January 15, 2009, 10:46:11 PM »
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Pank Ji,

Bahut hii khoobsurat Paigam likha hai icon_salut Usual Smile

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«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2009, 04:04:21 AM »
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Bahoot khoob likha hai apne pank ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 16, 2009, 05:10:36 AM »
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kha baat hai pankshivamji.....

tere aane ki umeed mae,ek paigam tere naam likhta hun,
yu aayegi jaroor,isliye ek shaam, tere naam likh ta hun.
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«Reply #5 on: January 16, 2009, 09:12:30 AM »
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kha baat hai pankshivamji.....

tere aane ki umeed mae,ek paigam tere naam likhta hun,
yu aayegi jaroor,isliye ek shaam, tere naam likh ta hun.
Shukriya Caraji Bahoot Khoob   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahoot khoob likha hai apne pank ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 16, 2009, 10:31:01 AM »
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Nice one Shivam Ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 16, 2009, 07:36:22 PM »
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Nice one Shivam Ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 16, 2009, 07:57:17 PM »
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Pank jee aur Cara jee..bahut khoob...

tere naam ek shaam likh denge,
tere dil ke naam ek paigam likhdenge,
teri khubsoorati ko bayan toh nahin kar sakta hoon main,
par tere honthon pe ek ghazal likhdenge...
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«Reply #9 on: January 16, 2009, 08:04:55 PM »
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Pank jee aur Cara jee..bahut khoob...

tere naam ek shaam likh denge,
tere dil ke naam ek paigam likhdenge,
teri khubsoorati ko bayan toh nahin kar sakta hoon main,
par tere honthon pe ek ghazal likhdenge...
Bahoot khoob Rahim Miya Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Likhkar gazal tere intezar me, gazal aur nazm bhula baithe...
Yaad raha bs tera chehara aakhir tak, jab duniya se apna vajood mita baithe...

~Pank~
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«Reply #10 on: January 16, 2009, 08:13:10 PM »
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Bahoot khoob Rahim Miya Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Likhkar gazal tere intezar me, gazal aur nazm bhula baithe...
Yaad raha bs tera chehara aakhir tak, jab duniya se apna vajood mita baithe...

~Pank~

wah wah Pank jee..bahaut hi khoob...Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

mat mitao apna wajud iss duniya se,
abhi tumhari bewaffai ki saza baki hai,
mera chahra nahin balke apni bewaffai yaad rakhna,
ek bewaffa ko rula sake itni hum main takat baki hai...
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2009, 10:28:20 AM »
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bohat khoob Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2009, 10:01:08 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2009, 10:33:10 PM »
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wah wah kya khoob likha hai.....clap ..clap..clap..

Tere aane ki ummid me,hum soye nahi raat bhar....
N TUM AAYE N NEEND HE AAYI....
Intzaar karte karte subah ka paigam aa gya...
Usha ki nai kiran fir tere aane ki ummid jaga gayi...
Tere aane Ki ummid me ek Paigam Likha hai...

Ashko ki shyahi se tujhe salam likha hai,
Adhure se in khwabo me,
Rutha hua tera naam likha hai...

Aaj bhi tere intezar me raahen udas ho thi...
Tere na aane dard raha dil me, kuch soch ye aakhiri kalaam likha hai...

Tu kar khushiyo ki mehfile aabad,
Meri duaao ne ibadat me subho-sham likha hai...

Tu na aayega ye maloom na tha,
Shayad kismat ne meri ummido ka yahi aanjaam likha hai...

Beh rahi hai lahar dhadkano ki dhire dhire,
Usi ret pe mohabbat naam likha hai...

Tere Aane ki ummid me ek Paigam likaha hai...

~Pank~
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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2009, 11:59:11 PM »
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bahoot khoob Pank ji..... janati hu apko jawab ka bhi intzaar hoga... jaise he kalam ko shabd mile, likhne ki koshish hogi!!!
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