~*~Tere Aane Ki Ummid~*~ -Panna 2:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

dead heart

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«Reply #15 on: January 18, 2009, 12:04:46 AM »

karke bewaffai tum safai de rahe ho,
marke humara dil tum usse zinda dekhne ki umeed kar rahe ho,
wada toh karke tod dia tumne kyun juth bol rahe ho,
mit gaye hum tere pyar main ab toh aap bas ehsaas dila rahe ho...

kuch na kuch galti hai iss shaer main...sudhar ne ki koshish kijiyega...dil se kehta hoon ke main janta hoon ke itna acha nahin likha hai maine...maaf karna galti ke liye!!!


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Pooja

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Re: ~*~Tere Aane Ki Ummid~*~

«Reply #16 on: January 18, 2009, 12:06:42 AM »

anne ki koi umeend nahi
jaane ka wada na hua
kar baithe wo wada humse
jise nibhane ka unka kabhi irada na hua


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pankshivam

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«Reply #17 on: January 21, 2009, 08:26:20 AM »

Quote from: dead heart on January 16, 2009, 08:13:10 PM

wah wah Pank jee..bahaut hi khoob... Clapping Smiley

mat mitao apna wajud iss duniya se,
abhi tumhari bewaffai ki saza baki hai,
mera chahra nahin balke apni bewaffai yaad rakhna,
ek bewaffa ko rula sake itni hum main takat baki hai...


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pankshivam

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Re: ~*~Tere Aane Ki Ummid~*~

«Reply #18 on: January 21, 2009, 10:59:32 AM »

Quote from: ANAAM on January 17, 2009, 10:33:10 PM

wah wah kya khoob likha hai.....clap ..clap..clap..

Tere aane ki ummid me,hum soye nahi raat bhar....
N TUM AAYE N NEEND HE AAYI....
Intzaar karte karte subah ka paigam aa gya...
Usha ki nai kiran fir tere aane ki ummid jaga gayi...

Bahoot Khoob Anaamji


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pankshivam

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Re: ~*~Tere Aane Ki Ummid~*~

«Reply #19 on: January 21, 2009, 11:20:28 AM »

Quote from: dead heart on January 18, 2009, 12:04:46 AM

Rahim Bhai Achha toh likha hai yaar
Bs thoda jaldbazi me labz adhure lag rahe hain bu theam achhi hai dost...
Aur galti kuch nahi hai bhai
Mafi ki koi jarurat nahi hai

Ham koshish kar rahe hai ise apne tarah se pesh karne ki

Apni bewafayi ki safai ab na do...
Tod kar dil mera, apne gamo ki duhayi ab na do.
Chahat hai ab chupchap mit jane ki tumhe yaad karke,
Meri khamoshi ko Khushiyo ki parchayi ab na do...
~Pank~


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~Tere Aane Ki Ummid~*~

«Reply #20 on: January 21, 2009, 04:14:44 PM »

Quote from: pankshivam on January 21, 2009, 08:26:20 AM

Shukriya Rahim Bhai
Bahoot khoob likha

Ki hai bewafayi maine, toh uske dard ki sada jeene na degi...
Diya koi zakhm agar, toh Dil se nikali aah jeene na degi...

Roya koi yaad karke mujhe, toh uske ashko ki fiza jeene na degi...
Dega bhi agar jeene ki duaa vo mujhe, toh har sanso ki vo duaa jeene na degi...

Raho pe rok legi uski aahe mujhe, manzelo ki hava jeene na degi...
Diye the jakhma kitane use, Yaad aayegi meri har khta, toh jeene na degi...

Mai ha kitna bewafa janta hun, ab uski wafa jeene na degi...
Rahunga dil me zakhmo ko sambhale, fir ab koi saza jeene na degi...

Apni bewafayi ki safai ab na do...
Tod kar dil mera, apne gamo ki duhayi ab na do.
Chahat hai ab chupchap mit jane ki tumhe yaad karke,
Meri khamoshi ko Khushiyo ki parchayi ab na do...

Khud ki wafao ka katal kiye jate hain...
Aaj teri galiyon me Bewafi ka ilzam achha laga...

~Pank~

wah wah Pank jee...bahaut acha likha hai apne...aur shukriya humara kalam padne ke liye...


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pankshivam

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«Reply #21 on: January 23, 2009, 07:09:16 AM »

Quote from: dead heart on January 21, 2009, 04:14:44 PM

wah wah Pank jee...bahaut acha likha hai apne...aur shukriya humara kalam padne ke liye...

Shukriya Rahim Bhai


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pankshivam

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«Reply #22 on: January 23, 2009, 07:17:11 AM »

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Quote from: Pooja on January 18, 2009, 12:06:42 AM

anne ki koi umeend nahi
jaane ka wada na hua
kar baithe wo wada humse
jise nibhane ka unka kabhi irada na hua

Bahoot Khoob Poojaji

Khud ki wafao ka katal kiye jate hain...
Aaj teri galiyon me Bewafayi ka ilzam achha laga...

~Pank~

Mafi chahta hun ye post delete ho gayi thi mujhse isliye fir se post kar raha hun


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Fatima..

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«Reply #23 on: January 25, 2009, 10:44:32 AM »

kya baat hain ....beautifully written


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pankshivam

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«Reply #24 on: January 25, 2009, 10:51:09 AM »

Quote from: Fatima.. on January 25, 2009, 10:44:32 AM

kya baat hain ....beautifully written

Thanx Fatimaji


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Re: ~*~Tere Aane Ki Ummid~*~

«Reply #25 on: May 11, 2009, 11:22:17 AM »

Bohat Achche Pank Bhai, Rahim Bhai,.Pooja Didi,.


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pankshivam

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«Reply #26 on: May 15, 2009, 07:16:55 AM »

Quote from: Azeem on May 11, 2009, 11:22:17 AM

Bohat Achche Pank Bhai, Rahim Bhai,.Pooja Didi,.

Shukriya Azeem Bhai


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madhuwesh

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«Reply #27 on: November 16, 2009, 03:32:07 AM »

Wah bahut khoob Pank ji,mindblowing creation,excellent,lovely lines by,Cara ji,Rajesh ji,Anaam ji,Pooja ji,Rahim bhai. icon_thumleft


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pankshivam

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«Reply #28 on: November 16, 2009, 10:44:18 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on November 16, 2009, 03:32:07 AM

Wah bahut khoob Pank ji,mindblowing creation,excellent,lovely lines by,Cara ji,Rajesh ji,Anaam ji,Pooja ji,Rahim bhai. icon_thumleft

Shukriya Madhu ji


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madhuwesh

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«Reply #29 on: November 16, 2009, 10:48:54 AM »

U welcome Pank jeeeeee. tongue3


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