- Tere Bin Meri Zindagi Hai Jaise -

by Meena is back on March 18, 2006, 05:05:49 PM
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kabhi kabhi bohot kushiyan pane ke baad insaan sochta hai ke kya hota agar yeh ya woh kushi mere pas nahin hoti...kuch aise hi ehesas pe meri yeh poem hai:

Tere bin meri zindagi hai jaise...
Baghon ke phoolon me kushboo na ho,
Khaliyon ko khilne ki arzoo na ho,
Nikal jati hai kali ghata chupke se hi,
jaise badal barasne ke liye beqaboo na ho!

Tere bin meri zindagi hai jaise…
Chalna us raha par jiski koi manzil na ho,
Paye hum woh kushiyon jisse kuch hasil na ho,
Ho jayega  kuch aisa haal tere bin „sanam“ ,
Ke dadkan rukh jayegi, jaise seene me dil na ho!
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«Reply #1 on: March 18, 2006, 06:13:10 PM »
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Meena

Bahut khoobsurat !

Last line ka to koi jawaab he nahi...

Excellent !

Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2006, 10:45:21 AM »
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Rajbir ji .... inka waseey bhi koi jawaab nahi !!!


Meena -JI ...... ik aur damaka likha hai aap ne .... hum to bas dil tham ke aap ke damake hi padte rehte hai ...... hum aa rhe hai aap ke sheher aap se traning lene shayri ki !!!


woh hai to meri zindgi khushnuma hai
uske bina zindgi zindgi nahi hai meri

usne shikhaya hai mujhey jeene ka sabab
whi bandgi hai aur whi ashqi hai meri

uske bina khud ko soch bhi nahi pata hoon
woh khayaal hai mera, roshini hai meri

uske bagiar ik lamha bhi qaraar nhi ataa
woh sukuun hai, har khuhsi hai meri

Dekh mere dewanepan tere pyaar mein
mein har post ko reply karta hoon teri!!
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2006, 11:06:37 AM »
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Meena - JI .... maff kijiyega ... ik aur sher yaad aa gya .... dard e judai wala ....... thoda hat ke wala hai !!

Tu nahi to zindgi mein aur kya reh jayega
Bangla gadi bank balance sab hawwa ho jayega
Khana to kahyege 5 star hotel mein magar
tu nahi to bill bhi table pe hi reh jayega !!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2006, 01:33:22 PM »
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BAHUT KHUB MEENA JI
 
TU MERI JINDAGI SE BHI KATRA KE CHAL DIYA,
TUJHE TO MERI MAUT PE BHI IKHTIYAR THA.
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«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2006, 09:14:45 PM »
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wowww bahut khoob sis...arree reply to main bhi karti hun Meena sis ki post..hehe..yeh thodi der se dekhi...
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«Reply #6 on: March 22, 2006, 04:42:34 PM »
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Meena

Bahut khoobsurat !

Last line ka to koi jawaab he nahi...

Excellent !

Rajbir


shukriya bhaiya!!  :D
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«Reply #7 on: March 22, 2006, 04:45:08 PM »
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Rajbir ji .... inka waseey bhi koi jawaab nahi !!!


Meena -JI ...... ik aur damaka likha hai aap ne .... hum to bas dil tham ke aap ke damake hi padte rehte hai ...... hum aa rhe hai aap ke sheher aap se traning lene shayri ki !!!


woh hai to meri zindgi khushnuma hai
uske bina zindgi zindgi nahi hai meri

usne shikhaya hai mujhey jeene ka sabab
whi bandgi hai aur whi ashqi hai meri

uske bina khud ko soch bhi nahi pata hoon
woh khayaal hai mera, roshini hai meri

uske bagiar ik lamha bhi qaraar nhi ataa
woh sukuun hai, har khuhsi hai meri

Dekh mere dewanepan tere pyaar mein
mein har post ko reply karta hoon teri!!


maine kaha ap khud ek mahan shayar ho janab hum apko kya sikhaye  :D   bohot acha likha hai!!

unke deedar se hi in ankhon me noor ata hai,
rehta to dil me hai par nazar hume badi door ata hai,
uske bina yuh berang si hai yeh zindagi apni,
kushiyon ki holi kheli jayegi jab milne ka dastoor ata hai!
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«Reply #8 on: March 22, 2006, 04:47:10 PM »
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Meena - JI .... maff kijiyega ... ik aur sher yaad aa gya .... dard e judai wala ....... thoda hat ke wala hai !!

Tu nahi to zindgi mein aur kya reh jayega
Bangla gadi bank balance sab hawwa ho jayega
Khana to kahyege 5 star hotel mein magar
tu nahi to bill bhi table pe hi reh jayega !!!


nahin jante te hum ke
aap hume pyar karte hai bank balance ke liye,
aab sada ke lyie chup hojayenge hum,
aur ap bhi hume na dantiiyega humare silece ke liye!
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«Reply #9 on: March 22, 2006, 04:47:47 PM »
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BAHUT KHUB MEENA JI
 
TU MERI JINDAGI SE BHI KATRA KE CHAL DIYA,
TUJHE TO MERI MAUT PE BHI IKHTIYAR THA.


shukriya and gud one as well!

 :D
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«Reply #10 on: March 22, 2006, 04:48:33 PM »
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wowww bahut khoob sis...arree reply to main bhi karti hun Meena sis ki post..hehe..yeh thodi der se dekhi...


arre nikki thank u thats so sweet ke meri poems pe reply karti ho tum, aab khud bhi likho to mai tumare sath bhi shayari karon  sad5  wah wah karke bikal jati ho humesha!  sad5
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«Reply #11 on: March 24, 2006, 12:13:38 PM »
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maine kaha ap khud ek mahan shayar ho janab hum apko kya sikhaye  :D   bohot acha likha hai!!

unke deedar se hi in ankhon me noor ata hai,
rehta to dil me hai par nazar hume badi door ata hai,
uske bina yuh berang si hai yeh zindagi apni,
kushiyon ki holi kheli jayegi jab milne ka dastoor ata hai!


Yahi to aap ka baddpan hai Meena -Ji ... bhala aap ki shayri ke aage hamari shayri kya hai !!!



Aaj duur hoon to kal paas aa jaunga
Teir mang ko mein taron se sjaunga
Bhar ke tumko apni bahooon mein
Cornato wali ik ice-cream khilaunga !!!!
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«Reply #12 on: March 24, 2006, 12:15:35 PM »
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Meena - JI .... maff kijiyega ... ik aur sher yaad aa gya .... dard e judai wala ....... thoda hat ke wala hai !!

Tu nahi to zindgi mein aur kya reh jayega
Bangla gadi bank balance sab hawwa ho jayega
Khana to kahyege 5 star hotel mein magar
tu nahi to bill bhi table pe hi reh jayega !!!


nahin jante te hum ke
aap hume pyar karte hai bank balance ke liye,
aab sada ke lyie chup hojayenge hum,
aur ap bhi hume na dantiiyega humare silece ke liye!



Koi baat nahi sanam aap silence ho jao
lekin hume apna ATM card to de jao
Thodi shoping whoping kar aau mein
Gar nahi to phir apna Credit card hi de jao !!
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«Reply #13 on: March 24, 2006, 02:57:05 PM »
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THANKS

"MAINE KABHI JID TO NA KI MAGAR AAJ RAAT,
AYE MEHJABI NA JA KI TABIAT UDAS HAI."
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«Reply #14 on: March 24, 2006, 04:34:26 PM »
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bohot ache humtum ji...twade nal ko gal nahin karni  Puzzled !  paise ke pujari   :evil:

nice one gumnam ji!!
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