Tere Hijr Mein Mar Na Jaon.................................

by waheed_rose2004 on June 15, 2005, 09:20:44 AM
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Gungunatay huay aanchal ki hawa de mujh ko,
Ungliyaan pher ke ballon mey sula de mujh ko..

Jis terha faltu guldan pare rehtay hain,
Apnay gher ke kisi konay se laga de mujh ko..

Yaad ker ke mujhe takleef hee hoti hogi,
Aik qissa hoon purana sa bhula de mujh ko..

Dobtay dobtay aawaaz teri sun jaon,
Aakhri baar tu sahil se sada de mujh ko..

Mein tere hijar mey chup chaap na mer jaon kahin,
Mein hoon saktay mey kabhi aakay rula de mujh ko..
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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2005, 10:08:10 AM »
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bahut accha likha hai aapne.

rone ka itna man kyon hai tera
rona kaya hai puch usse
jiske aansu thame na kabhi
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2005, 05:08:42 PM »
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wah waheeed.....bohot hi acha likha hai tumne.... keep it up mundeya!!!

 :D
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2005, 05:11:10 PM »
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Gungunatay huay aanchal ki hawa de mujh ko,
Ungliyaan pher ke ballon mey sula de mujh ko..

Jis terha faltu guldan pare rehtay hain,
Apnay gher ke kisi konay se laga de mujh ko..

Yaad ker ke mujhe takleef hee hoti hogi,
Aik qissa hoon purana sa bhula de mujh ko..

Dobtay dobtay aawaaz teri sun jaon,
Aakhri baar tu sahil se sada de mujh ko..

Mein tere hijar mey chup chaap na mer jaon kahin,
Mein hoon saktay mey kabhi aakay rula de mujh ko..



very nice Waheed...............................
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2005, 06:08:07 PM »
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wah waheed,bohat badhiya...excellent work....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2005, 09:26:10 PM »
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Gungunatay huay aanchal ki hawa de mujh ko,
Ungliyaan pher ke ballon mey sula de mujh ko..

Jis terha faltu guldan pare rehtay hain,
Apnay gher ke kisi konay se laga de mujh ko..

Yaad ker ke mujhe takleef hee hoti hogi,
Aik qissa hoon purana sa bhula de mujh ko..

Dobtay dobtay aawaaz teri sun jaon,
Aakhri baar tu sahil se sada de mujh ko..

Mein tere hijar mey chup chaap na mer jaon kahin,
Mein hoon saktay mey kabhi aakay rula de mujh ko..



Kya baat hai................aap to bada achha likhte hain...............
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2005, 04:17:43 PM »
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thanxxxxxxxx  alot  meena..........kudiye........nikki.....vikas..... .....nidhi..........aarzuu...............tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2005, 04:32:52 PM »
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Gungunatay huay aanchal ki hawa de mujh ko,
Ungliyaan pher ke ballon mey sula de mujh ko..

Jis terha faltu guldan pare rehtay hain,
Apnay gher ke kisi konay se laga de mujh ko..

Yaad ker ke mujhe takleef hee hoti hogi,
Aik qissa hoon purana sa bhula de mujh ko..

Dobtay dobtay aawaaz teri sun jaon,
Aakhri baar tu sahil se sada de mujh ko..

Mein tere hijar mey chup chaap na mer jaon kahin,
Mein hoon saktay mey kabhi aakay rula de mujh ko..


very touching waheed....kya likha hai maamu...zabardast..
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2005, 10:26:16 PM »
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oo mundya ................................................. ......................bale balle
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«Reply #9 on: June 24, 2005, 07:35:13 PM »
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Gungunatay huay aanchal ki hawa de mujh ko,
Ungliyaan pher ke ballon mey sula de mujh ko..

Jis terha faltu guldan pare rehtay hain,
Apnay gher ke kisi konay se laga de mujh ko..

Yaad ker ke mujhe takleef hee hoti hogi,
Aik qissa hoon purana sa bhula de mujh ko..

Dobtay dobtay aawaaz teri sun jaon,
Aakhri baar tu sahil se sada de mujh ko..

Mein tere hijar mey chup chaap na mer jaon kahin,
Mein hoon saktay mey kabhi aakay rula de mujh ko..


very touching waheed....kya likha hai maamu...zabardast..


thanxxxxxxxxx  sanya,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,  tongue3
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2006, 05:23:18 AM »
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waheed wonderful.. gr8 bhut he acha likha hai...

Tamannaa thi jeene ki, koi chiraag na milaa
Tamannaa thi jeene ki, koi chiraag na milaa
Roshni chaahi thi
Magar andheraa milgayaa



nice vikas ji...

Zindagi ek phool hai aur mohabbat us ka shahed
Pyar Ek Dariya Hai, Aur Mehmoob uski sarhad
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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2006, 06:12:32 PM »
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Gungunatay huay aanchal ki hawa de mujh ko,
Ungliyaan pher ke ballon mey sula de mujh ko..

Jis terha faltu guldan pare rehtay hain,
Apnay gher ke kisi konay se laga de mujh ko..

Yaad ker ke mujhe takleef hee hoti hogi,
Aik qissa hoon purana sa bhula de mujh ko..

Dobtay dobtay aawaaz teri sun jaon,
Aakhri baar tu sahil se sada de mujh ko..

Mein tere hijar mey chup chaap na mer jaon kahin,
Mein hoon saktay mey kabhi aakay rula de mujh ko..


Likhte toh tum hamesha se hi achha the waheed ...yeh usse bhi achha hai ...dil ko chhu gaya ...bahut achha likha  .....
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