Teri Judai

by anjali.sharma on November 09, 2005, 05:46:43 AM
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Judai teri sehte hai
Par rishto mein duri na seh payenge
Jis dagar pe chod diya tune sath mera
Teri kasam usi dagar pe apni saanse chod jayenge
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«Reply #1 on: December 05, 2005, 06:28:20 AM »
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Very nicely written Anjali ji.................. Usual Smile

inn aankhon ko meri, kisi ka intzaar hai,
Milney ko unse dil kab se bekarar hai....
Kabhi na kabhi to mulaqat hogi unsey,
jinke liye dil mein bhara, be-intiha pyar hai....
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«Reply #2 on: December 05, 2005, 04:46:42 PM »
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bohot acha likha dono ne!!!

issi aas pe umar guzar di humne,
ke unse mulakat kabhi na kabhi hogi doobara,
kitne sajde kiye, kitni duayen mangi humne,
shayad meri hi fariyaad kahi kho gayi doobara!!
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2005, 06:28:03 AM »
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Really a nice one NATURAL.........really very Natural. the one which i would have ever thought of writing but never got the right words. Words are placed very beautifully.............

Silence evn u 2 write write very nicely same as ur name.....u have proved kamoshi bhi apni ek zuban hoti hai.

Hope u read many more gud ones frm u both
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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2005, 06:43:02 AM »
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Quote from: "anjali.sharma"
Really a nice one NATURAL.........really very Natural. the one which i would have ever thought of writing but never got the right words. Words are placed very beautifully.............

Silence evn you 2 write write very nicely same as ur name.....you have proved kamoshi bhi apni ek zuban hoti hai.

Hope you read many more gud ones frm you both


Thanks a lot anjali ji.........
U made my day.....hahahaha  Chalo yahan kisi ko to nattu ki shayari pasand aayi....... :D (Never mind.... Usual Smile )
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«Reply #5 on: December 09, 2005, 04:56:11 PM »
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bohot bohot shukriya!!

khamosh hai hum to kya hua,
hum bhi bohot kuch kehte hai,
kagaz ki kashti ki tara zindagi hai humari!
tanhai ki nadiya me hum behte hai!
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«Reply #6 on: December 09, 2005, 05:22:17 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob silence!!!!

Good one Anjali and Natural!!
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«Reply #7 on: December 10, 2005, 06:39:37 AM »
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Very Sweet Silence..................
Aapne to humko apna fan bana diya!! Aap to tanhaiyo se beh kar paar nikal kye par apki tanhaiyo me hum to doobe hi reh gye..........

Kamosh reh kar har baat keh di apne,Kya andas-e-baya hai
kayal ho gye hum to shayari ke apki, ki itna kuch keh diya hai
Aapne to zuba hote hue bhi humse lafs cheen liye hai
Ki aage kya kahe kehne ko kuch baki raha hi nahi hai
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«Reply #8 on: December 10, 2005, 06:10:37 PM »
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thank u pooja sis aur shukriya anjali sis!! aisi to koi baat nahin bas kabih kabhi likh lete hai hum...apko humara likha pasand aya uske lyie bohot bohot shukriya!! aap bih kuch kam acha nahin likhti!! keep it up!
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«Reply #9 on: December 11, 2005, 10:05:50 AM »
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DARD ISHQ KA GAM SAHA NAHIN JAATA, ISS MANZIL KA KOI RASTA NAZAR NAHIN AATA, TERI YAAD SATATI HAI DIN RAAT MUJHE,ABTO EK PAL BHI RAHA NAHIN  JAATA! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:pp:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:pp:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:pp:p:p:p>Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smilesad5:(l:?Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: December 13, 2005, 09:21:27 AM »
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tere dard ko bhi hamne dava samjha
par aye bewafa tune to hamare pyar
ko bhi bewafai samjhe
yu to hamne zindgi na jene ka faisla kiya
par aye bewafa woh bhi to tumhari amanat hain
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«Reply #11 on: December 13, 2005, 09:28:33 AM »
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ye apnepan ke rishtey bhi ajeeb hote , hain, sabke apne apne nasib hote hain, rahte hain jo nigaho ke dorr wahi dil ke sabse kareeb hote hain ........tongue3:P:P:P:P:)
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