Teri Mohabbat Me Loot Gaye

by Mohammad Touhid on May 07, 2010, 06:49:22 AM
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Jahan ko bhoola ja raha hoon ish kadar,
Ab to jeene me tanha lagta hai darr.,
Na jane wo haath kahan chhut gaye,
Hum teri mohabbat me aise loot gaye.,

kiya sabko door apni zindagi se ek tere siwa,
kuchh achha hi nahi lagta karne me tere bina.,
na jane wo sath humse kahan chhut gaye,
Hum teri mohabbat me aise loot gaye.,

Gulab chali gayi khusbu abhi baki hai baagh me,
Aag bhi bujh gaya magar dhua abhi baki hai raakh me.,
Na jane wo kyo humse ish kadar rooth gaye,
Hum teri mohabbat me beshaq aise hi loot gaye.,

kyo tu mujhe akela chhod gayi jamane me,
tujhe to pane me jamane lage the.,
ek tu hi to saathi tha mera duniya me,
warna har koi to mujhe bhulane lage the.,

Fir ek baar aa jao hamare paas ,
mai ek baar fir loot jaunga tere khatir.,
Na jane wo haath wo saath kahan chhut gaye,
Hum teri mohabbat me jaanu aise hi loot gaye.,

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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2010, 06:52:28 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Touhid Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Kalaam!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2010, 11:21:48 AM »
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Bahot khoob Touhid Sb. Bahut achhi aur dard bhari nazm likhi hai aapne.
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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2010, 11:00:31 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Touhid ji... bahut khoob...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2010, 12:37:36 AM »
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Bahut khoob Touhid Ji
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2010, 04:42:46 AM »
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Jahan ko bhoola ja raha hoon ish kadar,
Ab to jeene me tanha lagta hai darr.,
Na jane wo haath kahan chhut gaye,
Hum teri mohabbat me aise loot gaye.,

kiya sabko door apni zindagi se ek tere siwa,
kuchh achha hi nahi lagta karne me tere bina.,
na jane wo sath humse kahan chhut gaye,
Hum teri mohabbat me aise loot gaye.,

Gulab chali gayi khusbu abhi baki hai baagh me,
Aag bhi bujh gaya magar dhua abhi baki hai raakh me.,
Na jane wo kyo humse ish kadar rooth gaye,
Hum teri mohabbat me beshaq aise hi loot gaye.,

kyo tu mujhe akela chhod gayi jamane me,
tujhe to pane me jamane lage the.,
ek tu hi to saathi tha mera duniya me,
warna har koi to mujhe bhulane lage the.,

Fir ek baar aa jao hamare paas ,
mai ek baar fir loot jaunga tere khatir.,
Na jane wo haath wo saath kahan chhut gaye,
Hum teri mohabbat me jaanu aise hi loot gaye.,



bohat bohat khoob touhid ji. khoob kaha hai aapne.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2010, 07:49:41 AM »
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aap sabhi ka bahut bahut shukriya dosto.... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: May 12, 2010, 07:52:45 AM »
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bhaut acchi poem hai... icon_flower Clapping Smiley u expressed your thoughts beautifully....
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Bahut Bahut khooooooob Touhid Bhai.. Ek ek lafz Dard Aur Judaadi Ki Kahaani ke raha hai.. Apne Dard Ko Lafzon Me Bahut Hi Khubsoorati se Utaara hai aapne.. Daaad Kubool Karen Dost..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #9 on: July 29, 2011, 07:15:39 PM »
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Sab kuchh luta chuke teri mohabbat me fir bhi khush hai ki lute bhi to teri mohabbat me..
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