Teri Tasveer

by Pooja on November 09, 2007, 05:27:07 PM
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«Reply #105 on: November 27, 2008, 09:37:50 AM »
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Quote from: sjid hadayat on November 26, 2008, 10:31:41 PM
Bohat Khoob Jaanasheen ji...

Shukriya Sajid Bhai,.
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«Reply #106 on: November 27, 2008, 09:39:38 AM »
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nice work Jannasheen and Jas

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«Reply #107 on: November 27, 2008, 09:42:49 AM »
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Har Khwahish Meri Adhoori Reh Gayi,.
Mila Is Chahat Se Mujhe, To Bas Dard Ka Samander Doston,.

Doobta Chala Gaya Main, Door Door Tak Kinaara Na Dikha,.
Apne Hi Haaton Tabaah Kar Liya Maine, Apna Ghar Doston,.

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«Reply #108 on: November 27, 2008, 03:43:25 PM »
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great work jahanasheen


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«Reply #109 on: November 27, 2008, 10:53:54 PM »
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Acha kaha Jansheen... keep it up..

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«Reply #110 on: November 27, 2008, 11:14:12 PM »
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lil bro bahoot acha likha hai.. magar ajj such main kalam bhi sadme main hai... kuch sanjh nahi aa raha hai....

tasveer uski ko jalaya kitani baar
yaadon uski ne hume rulaya kitani baar
ghar ki ek ek kan main najar jab wo ane laga
hume humare zakhmo ne, khoon ke ansoo rulaya her baar
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«Reply #111 on: November 28, 2008, 04:01:04 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 09, 2007, 05:27:07 PM
Ek baar same Title se main khumar-e-Ishaq mai Post kiya tha.... Ajj same title se Judai mai likh rahi hu... ek hi tasveer ... magar...

Teri tasveer ko gale se laga kar rote hai
Pata nahi chalta kai baar, ek galati se sab kuch hum khote hai!!

Karte hai sari dil ki baat aor chup wo sunati rahti hai
Ro ro kar ab to her pal, teri tasveer ko ansuo se dhote hai

Kahe tujhse ajj hum kaya, khud hi to sab mitaya hai
Khud ko khud hi teri ankhon mai, bewafa sa sajaya hai

Kar ke yaad teri batein, her pal khud ko rulaate hai
Wo hansi ke pal, her pal dil ko tadpaate hai

Kaya kiya, kyun kiya, yah sab ek nashtar se chubhate hai
Le kar teri tasveer hatho main, apna her ek zakham dikhate hai

Teri tasveer ko gale se laga kar rote hai
Pata nahi chalta kai baar,  ek galati se sab kuch hum khote hai!!

Very Good one Pooja Ji
Hume chhor kar woh tasveer ko gale lagate hain
Humse katrate hain tasveer se pyaar jatate hain
Aisa kya mere tasveer mein hai jo mujhme nahin
Humse takrate hain to tasveer ko meri sahlate hain

Hume dikla kar woh tasveer meri chhuma karte hain
Humse ruth e hain aur meri tasveer ko apnate hain
Pata nahi kyon mere tasveer ko har pal dil se lagate hain
Humse nafrat karte hain aur tasveer se dil bahlate hain
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«Reply #112 on: November 28, 2008, 07:33:46 AM »
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BAHUT khoob Rajesh


TASVIR KI BAAT BAHUT KHOOB KAHI
INHEY PYAR TASVIR SEY HAI, HUMSEY NAHI
TASVIR KOH WOH FIR BHI ROK LENGEY
HUM JOH AAGEY BADEY, HAMEY KAHA SEY ROK LENGEY


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«Reply #113 on: November 28, 2008, 07:43:02 PM »
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Good work Jasbir ji..... lagay rahien...

Bandoq say goli khatam ho jay mager
Papa ji k pass lafz khatam nahi hotay


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«Reply #114 on: November 28, 2008, 08:02:13 PM »
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haa haaa Hadayat


LABZ KHATAM HO JAYE
FIR SHER KAHA
JASBAAT KHATAM HO JAYE
FIR BAAT KAHA



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«Reply #115 on: November 28, 2008, 08:15:17 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on November 28, 2008, 08:02:13 PM
haa haaa Hadayat


LABZ KHATAM HO JAYE
FIR SHER KAHA
JASBAAT KHATAM HO JAYE
FIR BAAT KAHA



JASBIR SINGH

Kamal ker dita jay tusi... well said jeetay rahien..

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«Reply #116 on: November 28, 2008, 08:16:14 PM »
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THANKS SAJID


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«Reply #117 on: November 29, 2008, 10:23:56 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 27, 2008, 11:14:12 PM
lil bro bahoot acha likha hai.. magar ajj such main kalam bhi sadme main hai... kuch sanjh nahi aa raha hai....

tasveer uski ko jalaya kitani baar
yaadon uski ne hume rulaya kitani baar
ghar ki ek ek kan main najar jab wo ane laga
hume humare zakhmo ne, khoon ke ansoo rulaya her baar

Bahot Achche Didi,.

Jis Shayar Ke Dil Mein Dard Bhara Ho,.
Kalam Uski Bhala Kaise, Sadme Me Na Ho,.
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«Reply #118 on: November 29, 2008, 10:24:53 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on November 28, 2008, 04:01:04 AM
Very Good one Pooja Ji
Hume chhor kar woh tasveer ko gale lagate hain
Humse katrate hain tasveer se pyaar jatate hain
Aisa kya mere tasveer mein hai jo mujhme nahin
Humse takrate hain to tasveer ko meri sahlate hain

Hume dikla kar woh tasveer meri chhuma karte hain
Humse ruth e hain aur meri tasveer ko apnate hain
Pata nahi kyon mere tasveer ko har pal dil se lagate hain
Humse nafrat karte hain aur tasveer se dil bahlate hain





Bohat Khoob Rajesh Bhai,.
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«Reply #119 on: November 30, 2008, 09:26:17 AM »
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Bahoot khoob Rajesh ji...

nice Jas and Lil bro (jaanasheen)
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