Teri Tasveer

by Pooja on November 09, 2007, 05:27:07 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 19, 2008, 12:46:21 PM »
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poem acha hai lekin phir bhi thoda accha ban sakta tha
jaise ki oshwin ne kaha jab koi tasveer takleef ban jaye
agar aise use karti to bahut acha hota
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«Reply #16 on: January 20, 2008, 11:33:07 AM »
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Shukriya Didi,.
And Nice One Of U Both,.
Nice One Sahood Ji,.
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«Reply #17 on: January 20, 2008, 11:37:13 AM »
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Tasweer Aaj Bhi Dhundli Hai Tere Yaadon Ki,.
Rang Zindagi Ka Tune Judaai Ke Sanf Udaa Diya,.

Ek Aas Thi Hume Zindagi Basar Karne Ki "Jaanasheen",.
Intezaar Ke Lamhe Aur Dekar Tune Wo Bhi Mitaa Diya,.

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«Reply #18 on: January 22, 2008, 11:28:49 AM »
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Wo to pani ki boond hai jo ankho se beh jaye,
Aansu to wo hai jo aankho mei hi reh jaye,
Wo pyar kya jo lafjo mei byan ho,
Pyar to wo hai joa ankhoan main nazar aaye
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«Reply #19 on: January 24, 2008, 02:12:17 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 20, 2008, 11:37:13 AM
Tasweer Aaj Bhi Dhundli Hai Tere Yaadon Ki,.
Rang Zindagi Ka Tune Judaai Ke Sanf Udaa Diya,.

Ek Aas Thi Hume Zindagi Basar Karne Ki "Jaanasheen",.
Intezaar Ke Lamhe Aur Dekar Tune Wo Bhi Mitaa Diya,.

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Nice wordings Jaanasheen ji
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«Reply #20 on: January 24, 2008, 05:29:09 PM »
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bahoot khoob shood, shri and Lil bro
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«Reply #21 on: January 25, 2008, 11:31:14 AM »
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Shukriya Pooja Didi And Roja Sis,.
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«Reply #22 on: February 12, 2008, 04:10:09 PM »
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Quote from: oshwin on November 17, 2007, 10:52:59 AM
ZAB TASVEER TAKLEEF BAN JAYE - TERI,
                KAR KOI TADBEER NA YE TAKDEER BAN JAYE - TERI
          EK BAAR TU AAZMA KAI TO DEK APNA HOUSLA,
                SHAYAD YUN HI SAHI,  TAKDEER BAN ZAYE TERI.

bahoot khoob oshwin ji!! app kaha kho gaye??
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«Reply #23 on: February 22, 2008, 11:41:55 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 09, 2007, 05:27:07 PM
Ek baar same Title se main khumar-e-Ishaq mai Post kiya tha.... Ajj same title se Judai mai likh rahi hu... ek hi tasveer ... magar...

Teri tasveer ko gale se laga kar rote hai
Pata nahi chalta kai baar, ek galati se sab kuch hum khote hai!!

Karte hai sari dil ki baat aor chup wo sunati rahti hai
Ro ro kar ab to her pal, teri tasveer ko ansuo se dhote hai

Kahe tujhse ajj hum kaya, khud hi to sab mitaya hai
Khud ko khud hi teri ankhon mai, bewafa sa sajaya hai

Kar ke yaad teri batein, her pal khud ko rulaate hai
Wo hansi ke pal, her pal dil ko tadpaate hai

Kaya kiya, kyun kiya, yah sab ek nashtar se chubhate hai
Le kar teri tasveer hatho main, apna her ek zakham dikhate hai

Teri tasveer ko gale se laga kar rote hai
Pata nahi chalta kai baar,  ek galati se sab kuch hum khote hai!!

Teri tasweer ko aaj bhi seene se laga rakha hai!
Ujde hue jungle mein teri yaad ka diya jala rakha hai!

Na koi humsafar, na sahara na rahbar hai kahin,
aas ke is sahra mein ummeed ka mukaam bana rakha hai!

Tere khayaalon mein hain Zinda teri hi dhun mein magan,
Tere tassawur ke siwa meri zindagi mein aur bhala kya rakha hai!
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«Reply #24 on: February 22, 2008, 01:24:38 PM »
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Nice One Sharma Ji,.
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«Reply #25 on: February 22, 2008, 07:43:43 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob aks ji!!!
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«Reply #26 on: February 23, 2008, 09:15:46 AM »
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Thank you Janasheen ji  & Pooja ji!!!
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«Reply #27 on: February 23, 2008, 09:34:39 AM »
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Teri tasveer teri he tarah baatein nahin karti humsey
kambhkat kyonkar maan li humney bolti Tasweeron ki baatein...
[ people mosty poet used to say tasweer bolti hai ]
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«Reply #28 on: February 24, 2008, 02:55:41 PM »
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Nice One Zakhmola Ji,.
And U are Welcome,.
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«Reply #29 on: February 24, 2008, 02:58:36 PM »
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tasveer se dil bahlaya nahi jaata
tujh bin ab aor akele raha nahi jaata
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