Teri Tasveer -Panna 4:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

jasbirsingh

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«Reply #45 on: November 07, 2008, 08:55:14 AM »

very nice.

keep it up.

Jasbir Singh. icon_salut


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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #46 on: November 07, 2008, 09:53:16 AM »

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jasbirsingh

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #47 on: November 11, 2008, 10:32:15 AM »

teri tasvir hum dil meh rakhtey hai
nazar na lagey tujhey
sab sey door rakhtey hai

jis din pata chala tujhey
hum tumsey pyar kartey hai
toad key hi rakh dia yeh dil
jiss meh teri tasvir rakhtey hai

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #48 on: November 11, 2008, 11:04:08 AM »

Nice One Jasbir,.


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saloni bharani

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #49 on: November 11, 2008, 11:54:53 AM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on November 11, 2008, 10:32:15 AM

bahut khub likha ha aap na


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #50 on: November 11, 2008, 05:21:56 PM »

arey janasheen, i think you are an active reader on this site. I am very new here and all the time i do keep reading your ghazals and feedback. thats great yaar. cumon tell me about yourself. aap ka bhi dil kisi ladki neh toda kya ?

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jasbirsingh

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«Reply #51 on: November 11, 2008, 05:22:45 PM »

thanks saloni.

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #52 on: November 11, 2008, 05:34:28 PM »

Nice sharing Jas.

Apko yah thread pasand ayya, yah jaan kar acha laga!!


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #53 on: November 11, 2008, 05:38:25 PM »

hanji pooja , yeh tread bahut accha laga.

Abhi tak joh na keh pa rahey they
yaha aakar kuch halka halka mehsoos kia
padd kar auro ka bhi dard
apna dard kuch halka halka mehsoos kia

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jasbirsingh

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #54 on: November 11, 2008, 05:42:29 PM »

Meri bhi ek pooja thi, jisey hum bhi bahut chahatey they
din ho ya raat, har pal saath nibhatey they

fir ek daur aisa aaya, bina kahey woh anjaan bana kar chodd gayi
kuch kehti, kuch sunti, bina kahey hi woh har baat bhool gayi

aaj bhi dil yaad karta hai
tanhayi meh fariyaad karta hai
na janey kaha kho gayi woh pari
har baar usey hi ku talaash karta hai

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Pooja

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #55 on: November 11, 2008, 05:47:02 PM »

pyar ka khumar he aisa hota hai
toot jaaye to dil taar taar hota hai
kah kar ho door ya ho jaaye bin kahe
man uske liye baar baar rota hai


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #56 on: November 11, 2008, 07:42:22 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on November 11, 2008, 05:47:02 PM

pyar ka khumar he aisa hota hai
toot jaaye to dil taar taar hota hai
kah kar ho door ya ho jaaye bin kahe
man uske liye baar baar rota hai

sach kaha pooja. u know just few minutes back i heard from pooja, after so many months, she cared to say hi and insists she is still the same but her words, her action, her attitude suggests, she has changed a lot and the worst part again is that, she just logged off without telling, even being online in invisible mode ...

par shayed pooja janti nahi,

NA DIL MEH BASAKAR BHULAYA KARTEY HAI
NA HASAKAR RULAYA KARTEY HAI
KABHI MEHSOOS KAR KEY DEKH LENA
HUM JAISEY DOST DIL SEY RISHTA NIBHAYA KARTEY HAI

Jasbir Singh
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sarthika

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #57 on: November 11, 2008, 08:03:46 PM »

wah kaya baat hai Jasbir!!

Rishta nibhaya jaaye tabhi to wo dil se hota hai
jo insaan na pehchan sake, wo ek din khoon ke ansoo rota hai
takdeer kheilti hai apne kheil, iske samne insaan bebas hota hai
her bahane se samjhaya sarthika ko, per dard to bas dard hota hai


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #58 on: November 15, 2008, 10:31:00 AM »

hai ni sartika, kya baat hai.

DARD TOH BUS DARD HOTA HAI
MIL JAYE NAZREY TOH KHUSH
WARNA DARD BADA BE-DARD HOTA HAI

EK JHALAK PANEY KOH BEHAAL HOTA HAI
NAZROH SEY NAZAR MILANEY KOH KHUMAAR HOTA HAI

jASBIR sINGH


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alekh

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #59 on: November 16, 2008, 05:04:16 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on November 09, 2007, 05:27:07 PM

Ek baar same Title se main khumar-e-Ishaq mai Post kiya tha.... Ajj same title se Judai mai likh rahi hu... ek hi tasveer ... magar...

Teri tasveer ko gale se laga kar rote hai
Pata nahi chalta kai baar, ek galati se sab kuch hum khote hai!!

Karte hai sari dil ki baat aor chup wo sunati rahti hai
Ro ro kar ab to her pal, teri tasveer ko ansuo se dhote hai

Kahe tujhse ajj hum kaya, khud hi to sab mitaya hai
Khud ko khud hi teri ankhon mai, bewafa sa sajaya hai

Kar ke yaad teri batein, her pal khud ko rulaate hai
Wo hansi ke pal, her pal dil ko tadpaate hai

Kaya kiya, kyun kiya, yah sab ek nashtar se chubhate hai
Le kar teri tasveer hatho main, apna her ek zakham dikhate hai

Teri tasveer ko gale se laga kar rote hai
Pata nahi chalta kai baar, ek galati se sab kuch hum khote hai!!


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