Teri Tasveer -Panna 7:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

jasbirsingh

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«Reply #90 on: November 25, 2008, 09:02:01 PM »

DEWANEY DOSTOH MEH HAMEY NA GINO
DIL FEK AASHIKOH MEH HAMEY NA GINO
DARD MEH BHI HASTEY RAHENGEY
AAG MEH TAIL DAALNEY WALOH MEH HUMEY NA GINO

DARD KA ALAM HAMEY BHI HAI
JUDAI KA ALAM HAMEY BHI HAI
YEH TOH REHMAT HAI KHUDA KI
ANJAAN SEY MOHABBAT HAMEY BHI HAI

JASBIR SINGH


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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #91 on: November 25, 2008, 11:55:59 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on November 25, 2008, 08:54:58 PM

POOJA

ASHKOH KOH BEHENEY KA BAHANA CHAHIYEH
TANHA KOH DARD KA BAHANA CHAHIYEH
DONO HAATHO SEY JAB TUMHEY PUKAAR RAHEY HAI
TUMHEY BHI BUSS DOOR JANEY KA BAHANA CHAHIYEH

JASBIR SINGH

Good lines jasbir ji... keep it up

Sajid Hadayat


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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #92 on: November 26, 2008, 08:07:01 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on November 25, 2008, 05:18:46 PM

ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai apne Lil bro.. such kahu to ankhein ro gai.. ek ek shabd dard se lipta hua.. uufff kis soch main apne yah sab likha hai... bahoot bahoot khoob likha hai...

Khush raho!!

kareeb se bhi bahoot kareeb, tu dil main rahta hai
magar nahi hai mera, yah bhi to tu kahta hai

khawabo main dhoondu haqiqat, haqiqat main kaha tu rahta hai
patjhar ke pato jaisa yah jeevan, sab kuch bikhra bikhra rahta hai

Shukriya Didi,.

Dil Ko Aur Bhi Dard Hai, Magar Mujhe Bayaan Karna Nahi Aata,.
Yun To Zara Zara Karke, Haal Apna Bataate Jaa Raha Hoon,.

Milega Nahi Mujhe Koi Humsafar Is Duniya Mein, Maaloom Hai,.
Phir Bhi Meri "Behan, Apna Haal Sab Ko Sunaate Jaa Raha Hoon,.

____________________________________-Jaanasheen-


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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #93 on: November 26, 2008, 08:12:31 AM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on November 25, 2008, 05:11:51 PM

Wah Jaanasheen

MURJHEY HUYE PHOOL KI BHI KAHANI HOTI HAI
EH JAANASHEEN, HASINAYEH BHI DIWANI HOTI HAI

Shukriya And Nice Lines,.

Haseenayein Deewaani Nahi Hoti "Mere Dost,.
Ye To Nakhaabon Ki Aard Mein Hi, Sab Kar Jaati Hain,.

Umeed Na Karna Tum Inse Mohabbat Ki, "Jasbir,.
Ye Kab Hum Aashiqon Se Wafaa Nibhaati Hain,.


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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #94 on: November 26, 2008, 08:14:26 AM »

Quote from: sjid hadayat on November 25, 2008, 05:36:24 PM

Bohat achi poetry kay Jaanasheen ... good work... achay ja rahay ho.
Sajid Hadayat

Shukriya Bhaijaan,.
Aap Agar Kuch Likh Jaate, To seekhna Ka Maukha Milta,.


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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #95 on: November 26, 2008, 10:12:01 AM »

THANKS HADAYAT

JASBIR SINGH


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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #96 on: November 26, 2008, 10:14:06 AM »

WAH janasheen kya bhai behan ka pyar hai
ek rota hai dard bataney meh
dusra rota hai dard chipaney meh

bahut hi badiya kalaam dono ka

JASBIR SINGH


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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #97 on: November 26, 2008, 12:45:26 PM »

Shukriya Jasbir Ji,.
Saath mein Kuch Likh Kar jaate to Achcha Lagta,.


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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #98 on: November 26, 2008, 12:47:59 PM »

Aye Dost Tu Jabse Door Hua,.
Zamaane Ke Haaton Main Majboor Hua,.

Sab Karne Lage Mujhpar Sitam, Dost Bankar,.
Sirf Tujhe Chahne Ka Mujhse Kasoor Hua,.

________________________-Jaanasheen-


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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #99 on: November 26, 2008, 05:05:45 PM »

MAJBOOR KAR DIA ISS JAMANEY NEY
JAAM BHAR DIA HAI PAIMANEY MEH

CHODD KEY TANHA JAB SEY WOH GAYE
GHERA DAAL DIA HAI AFSANEY NEY
JAAM BHAR DIA HAI PAIMANEY MEH

SABHI RAASTEY ABB BUND HUYE
DARWAJA KHOL DIA HAI ABB MEHKHANEY NEH
JAAM BHAR DIA HAI PAIMANEY MEH

NEEND BHI ABB TOH AATI NAHI
ANDHERA BIKHAIR DIYA HAI AASHIANEY NEH
JAAM BHAR DIA HAI PAIMANEY MEH

JASBIR SINGH

this i am posting as a seperate thread too


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sjid hadayat

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #100 on: November 26, 2008, 10:31:41 PM »

Bohat Khoob Jaanasheen ji...


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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #101 on: November 26, 2008, 10:32:35 PM »

nice work Jannasheen and Jas


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #102 on: November 26, 2008, 10:36:36 PM »

thanks pooja

Jasbir Singh


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sjid hadayat

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #103 on: November 26, 2008, 10:37:32 PM »

aacha hay Jasbir ji, keep it up


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Teri Tasveer

«Reply #104 on: November 26, 2008, 10:38:25 PM »

thanks hadayat

jasbir singh


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